RD2: Dominate vs. Blue Bayou - {Dominate wins}

[Strikta]

The Long Anticipated...
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Round 2

Rules:

10 lines minimum/16 max in this 3-way battle (If u & ur oppenent(s) agree to more that's fine)
No swaying
No biting
No recycling
No other dumb shit that will get u DQd

Voting on 5 battles is mandatory, or u will be docked 2 for every one u miss. Links MUST be posted in the voting links thread at the top of the forum.

Battles due Wednesday October 16th at 11:59 pm PST

Extensions allowed up to 48 hrs, & to ONLY be agreed to between both participants.

Any other questions or concerns PM myself or Sn00p.

Aero Dominate

[Blue Bayou]

sorry only time for 10

this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT
face it mangg.. u'll never be an Ace of Spades
took a job teachin retards math just so you could make the grade
watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner
loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner
you're wack dude. bars are lame & every verse is ass
ur styles PG. so when it comes to reading verses ur always the first to pass
lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts
cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat

[Dominate]

This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order
Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder
You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses?
That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses
She loves bondage & choking. Her fav sex game shows she truly a hoe
It's Holding Her Breath and getting tied up... But it ain't a Balloon that she's blown
Faggot you can't afford steak. Please just spare me the rubbish
Your Porterhouse is what you'd come home to after a day of carrying luggage
Sucha insignificant faggot. Ur gunnin's not somethin we notice
If I got beef it's nothing to sneeze at... U just rustle feathers right under our noses

[Cashius]

Blue- Seen the Aer/Air concept way too much. Make the grade was pretty simple. Brisket was a dope concept but felt like you could've connected it more. PG was eh...ok. Head off the bat was dope, very nice closer. Obviously this was rushed. Wasn't the Blue I'm used to reading but wow @ the closer.

Dom- Bipolar was dope. Curfew was pretty cool. Balloon was dope, connected everything nicely. Porterhouse was ok but didn't have much sting to it. Wasn't feeling the closer. I see what you tried to do with the rustle feathers connection but I wasn't crazy about it.

Even with Blue not dropping to his normal standard, this was a pretty dope battle. I do think Dom took it soundly, tho. Concepts were a bit more thought out.

Dom.

[The Bully]

watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner
loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner
lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts
cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat

vs

This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order
Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder
You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses?
That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses

OG Bayou had the head off the bat line, that was nice. Briskett didn't have sting but I liked it too.
I thought he had a couple misses though...didn't like PG or make the grade much at all.

Dom started off with haymakers. Bipolar was dope, line of the battle.
I generally don't like the wording "<-like you have that ____".
But it was well done here. And the second bar was nice.. funny.
Cooled off a little towards the end, wasn't feelin the closer.

Thought each could've brought a little more than this but still a solid battle, relatively close.

V/ Dom kennedy

[Sintro]

this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT
Didn't like the set up, dissing him for not wanting fame or $ for rapping? The aerplay punch was pretty nice but cuda been worded harder and cud of rhymed

face it mangg.. u'll never be an Ace of Spades
took a job teachin retards math just so you could make the grade
Ok kinda basic

watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner
loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner
Nice I like this shit

you're wack dude. bars are lame & every verse is ass
ur styles PG. so when it comes to reading verses ur always the first to pass
Played but worded nice

lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts
cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat
Really played. Plus eminem used this concept too in dispicable freestyle so I've seen it done atleast 2-3 times before

This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order
Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder
Lmao at bipolar I don't think I've ever heard anyone say pole her referring to fucking. Pretty nice line for a weird phrase

You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses?
That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses
This was actually pretty tight.

She loves bondage & choking. Her fav sex game shows she truly a hoe
It's Holding Her Breath and getting tied up... But it ain't a Balloon that she's blown
Not feeling. Worded poorly too

Faggot you can't afford steak. Please just spare me the rubbish
Your Porterhouse is what you'd come home to after a day of carrying luggage
Don't get the wordplay wats a por ter house besides a steak?

Sucha insignificant faggot. Ur gunnin's not somethin we notice
If I got beef it's nothing to sneeze at... U just rustle feathers right under our noses
Not feeling this either kinda weak

Not a real hard battle, but a couple nice lines. I got blues brisket vs doms bipolar n bound to a curfew. Vote dom

[KwaL!ty]

this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT
watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner
loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner
lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts
cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat

vs

This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order
Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder
You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses?
That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses
Faggot you can't afford steak. Please just spare me the rubbish
Your Porterhouse is what you'd come home to after a day of carrying luggage


the battle could honestly go either way but it really comes down to stronger misses which was Dom in my eyes .. feel like Blue rushed some things weren't worded right ..the Head Right off the bat line was dope.... the Bipolar was a the winner though...

Vote- Dom

[Swerve]

this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT
watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner
loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner
lol & you bein Aussie. but i wont diss as i write up the facts
cuz in a way im Ozzy too. everytime i visit ur girl i get Head right off the Bat

vs.

This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order
Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder
You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses?
That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses
Faggot you can't afford steak. Please just spare me the rubbish
Your Porterhouse is what you'd come home to after a day of carrying luggage


Close as hell. So many wordplays, it was definitely fun to read. I actually thought Dom was fresher (which is saying a lot because both were pretty fresh), but when I think about the lines I was feeling, Dom's were ones that I would have a more difficult time coming up with in comparison to Blues. That's what the difference is to me.

V/ Dominate

[Beyond]

this faggots never dreamt of rap fame or gettin bread from the flows
but he still wants Aerplay. & his weekends are spent gettin head from the GOAT
watch this vet get choked. swept in votes cuz im the truest winner
loss'll be so Briskett's gettin served up Sunday night during a Jewish Dinner

vs

This pindick miiiiight bring a girl home, but lemme put these facts in order
Soon as she see Bipolar mood changes so fast you'd think she had that disorder
You a washed up faggot Blue... How often u got top offenses?
That's Bound to A Curfew enough times to rival the discipline ur mom dispenses
She loves bondage & choking. Her fav sex game shows she truly a hoe
It's Holding Her Breath and getting tied up... But it ain't a Balloon that she's blown


Disappointing battle. Aer/air played, but not sure about Aerplay. Seems cool. Make the grade is ok, I guess. Not really feeling, tbh. Seems lazy. Briskett's is good. Your best line yet. Didn't like PG. Good concept and connection, but not executed well. Ozzy/head off the bat is really played. Pretty sure Villan (and maybe you?) did this back in longbar. Maybe ~kaos~. It was a common connection. Bipolar was a dope opener. A curfew was also good. Balloon iss cool. Porterhouse is decent. Closer was ok, I guess. Overall not really a close battle like everyone said. Blue didn't try and rushed/half assed here. Briskett's was his only good line. Others were played, not good or executed poorly. Dom had a couple nice ones and LOTB. He was also more consistent and more original. Better concepts, etc. He obviously dropped just enough to win. What a let down. Props to both.

/v dominate