God Of War
02-02-2013, 04:16 PM
David Lama
September 30th, 2009, 02:17 PM
DOHpe vs. Clash
Verses due saturday october 10th 2009 11:59PM pacific
Line Limit: Min = 16, Max = 30
(Line Limit can be more if agreed upon by both)
Match whoever drops first
1st person cant edit after 2nd person drops. 2nd person
cant edit after the first vote. Breaking this rule = DQ
Recycling = Automatic DQ
Feeding = Automatic DQ
No Posting opponents picture without opponents permission
1st to 8 Votes wins
No Ko’s
(In case of a close battle. Must be ahead by 2 votes in order to win
Meaning if someone is up 8-7 he still hasn’t won until he’s up by 2.
If the next vote is for him then he wins. If its not then its 8-8 and in
order for someone to win he’d either have to get the next 2 votes or
wait until he’s up by 2 votes. )
check in. G/l
MetaSin
October 1st, 2009, 01:09 PM
sure.
namix
October 10th, 2009, 11:41 AM
yo - like i said before, i went 20
im cool with the 24 hr extension sin, i pmed my verse to allah so drop whenever you're ready.
MetaSin
October 11th, 2009, 10:21 PM
aye...
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened
but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon
you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth
wantin cats to call U-Sur..
n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you
you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod
in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due
cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew
die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring
always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening
but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes
cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
done.
David Lama
October 11th, 2009, 10:24 PM
Namix's verse
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran
status in clash is like state law,
and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin
so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather
this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted
and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic
i might be white, but im still particular with my flow
if u only feel African cuts..
..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me
when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story!
so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns
winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son!
Prism
October 12th, 2009, 07:04 PM
last vote for today.this takin alot out of a nigga.hope this makes up for my no show tho.
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened
but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon
hah if tv mean time virus this was sick.nam line was good.
you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth
wantin cats to call U-Sur..
n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you
hah user. this was a liiiilte forced in there nahmean. but still good.
you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod
in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
cnn works cause it just sound like seein n nahmean.dun know if im into calling peeps by there first letter but still.mix line was ok.
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due
cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew
pullin teeth was slick.swine flew was a little cornball.
die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring
always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening
but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes
cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time
ohhhh happening line was illy.twitter was nice too.i been waitin for someone to put up a sick twitter line nahmean
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
aight.too wordy. a good verse.not your best but real nice. nicer than the average cat nahmean? your usual wordplay and haymakers. diggin it.
id give it a 8.3
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran
status in clash is like state law,
and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin
the loss is still a loss so it doesnt hit too hard.dohpe is med was cool.im a bit sick of medacine punchlines tho,yall need to quit
so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather
this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
sin sears was nice.manatee was funny and i liked it.
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted
and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic
benchmark was mad fuckin slick. i wsa diggin that shit.possible the line of the battle.jamie foxx line was not too smooth.too easy to see meng.
i might be white, but im still particular with my flow
if u only feel African cuts..
..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
angola knife was sick.ur endin off good here makin a case for yourself.hah@balls nor dick.that was fuckin nice as getout.
whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me
when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story!
so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns
winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son!
ball room was wack meng.shit was mad simple.no dice was not a good closer either.this hurt you dog. id give this one a 7.9
VOTE - METASIN
Hush
October 14th, 2009, 12:29 PM
Discount that vote
timevirus
October 16th, 2009, 03:27 PM
Namix:
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran
status in clash is like state law,
and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin
so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather
this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted
and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic
i might be white, but im still particular with my flow
if u only feel African cuts..
..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me
when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story!
so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns
winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son!
Metasin:
aye...
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened
but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon
you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth
wantin cats to call U-Sur..
n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you
you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod
in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due
cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew
die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring
always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening
but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes
cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
************************************************
^^the best of the bold from namix were the manatee, angola, and hoover lines. best of the bold from metasin were the TV screens, concealed weapon, and pulling teeth lines. very close battle, had to read it twice. on the 2nd pass, namix's humor edged it for me. the line of the battle was a toss up between TV screens & manatee, & the visual of a massive bitch droppin her ass combined with the innovative wordplay was pretty much the clincher. this is the 1st verse i've read of metasin, and it didn't disappoint. i just felt that namix hit a smidge harder, and some of meta's references were a bit leukwarm, imo. vote - namix, props to both of u on a hot battle.
edit: i decided to discuss the best lines instead of color-coding shit.
Truc.
October 17th, 2009, 07:31 PM
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
Vs.
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
Both had some equally played & forced shit, i.e User line/CNN/Swine flew/Metasin-Dohpe/Benchmark/Ballroom, the rest were either ok or just decent.
I'm gonna go for Namix just cuz he had less forced & his missis werent as bad, both had the same amount of nice lines but he just edged it out slightly.
v/ Namix
Good battle gettin slept on....
Kenny the G
October 23rd, 2009, 01:10 AM
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring
always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening
but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes
cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time
vs
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran
status in clash is like state law,
and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me
when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story!
v/metasin
K Y Z O
October 25th, 2009, 05:37 AM
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened
but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon
you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth
wantin cats to call U-Sur..
n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
Alright, diggin' the opener, that was a cool flip. 2nd bar was nice, liked the U-Sur & 'Mix line too. Enamel w/p was nice, and closer was hilarious. Overall a solid, dope verse.
Vs,
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
i might be white, but im still particular with my flow
if u only feel African cuts..
..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
Nice opener, Cal line didn't quote because it was really a played flip, but it was alright I recon. You had alot of cool w/p which I quote, Angola and Nordic was my fav. A few I didn't quote came off forced slighty to me. Overall you had a solid verse, but consistency-wise..
V, MetaSin
Barack Olama
December 5th, 2009, 12:01 PM
2-2
tie
both get a win
September 30th, 2009, 02:17 PM
DOHpe vs. Clash
Verses due saturday october 10th 2009 11:59PM pacific
Line Limit: Min = 16, Max = 30
(Line Limit can be more if agreed upon by both)
Match whoever drops first
1st person cant edit after 2nd person drops. 2nd person
cant edit after the first vote. Breaking this rule = DQ
Recycling = Automatic DQ
Feeding = Automatic DQ
No Posting opponents picture without opponents permission
1st to 8 Votes wins
No Ko’s
(In case of a close battle. Must be ahead by 2 votes in order to win
Meaning if someone is up 8-7 he still hasn’t won until he’s up by 2.
If the next vote is for him then he wins. If its not then its 8-8 and in
order for someone to win he’d either have to get the next 2 votes or
wait until he’s up by 2 votes. )
check in. G/l
MetaSin
October 1st, 2009, 01:09 PM
sure.
namix
October 10th, 2009, 11:41 AM
yo - like i said before, i went 20
im cool with the 24 hr extension sin, i pmed my verse to allah so drop whenever you're ready.
MetaSin
October 11th, 2009, 10:21 PM
aye...
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened
but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon
you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth
wantin cats to call U-Sur..
n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you
you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod
in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due
cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew
die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring
always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening
but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes
cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
done.
David Lama
October 11th, 2009, 10:24 PM
Namix's verse
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran
status in clash is like state law,
and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin
so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather
this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted
and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic
i might be white, but im still particular with my flow
if u only feel African cuts..
..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me
when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story!
so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns
winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son!
Prism
October 12th, 2009, 07:04 PM
last vote for today.this takin alot out of a nigga.hope this makes up for my no show tho.
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened
but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon
hah if tv mean time virus this was sick.nam line was good.
you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth
wantin cats to call U-Sur..
n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you
hah user. this was a liiiilte forced in there nahmean. but still good.
you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod
in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
cnn works cause it just sound like seein n nahmean.dun know if im into calling peeps by there first letter but still.mix line was ok.
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due
cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew
pullin teeth was slick.swine flew was a little cornball.
die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring
always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening
but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes
cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time
ohhhh happening line was illy.twitter was nice too.i been waitin for someone to put up a sick twitter line nahmean
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
aight.too wordy. a good verse.not your best but real nice. nicer than the average cat nahmean? your usual wordplay and haymakers. diggin it.
id give it a 8.3
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran
status in clash is like state law,
and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin
the loss is still a loss so it doesnt hit too hard.dohpe is med was cool.im a bit sick of medacine punchlines tho,yall need to quit
so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather
this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
sin sears was nice.manatee was funny and i liked it.
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted
and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic
benchmark was mad fuckin slick. i wsa diggin that shit.possible the line of the battle.jamie foxx line was not too smooth.too easy to see meng.
i might be white, but im still particular with my flow
if u only feel African cuts..
..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
angola knife was sick.ur endin off good here makin a case for yourself.hah@balls nor dick.that was fuckin nice as getout.
whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me
when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story!
so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns
winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son!
ball room was wack meng.shit was mad simple.no dice was not a good closer either.this hurt you dog. id give this one a 7.9
VOTE - METASIN
Hush
October 14th, 2009, 12:29 PM
Discount that vote
timevirus
October 16th, 2009, 03:27 PM
Namix:
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran
status in clash is like state law,
and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin
so im straight blazin this kid, it’ll smell like burnin leather
this shits sure to end wit sin sears like a fuckin cover letter
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
if we were to force rank active vets… some say he’s not fitted
and i’d put down Sol lowest…quicker than a jamie foxx critic
i might be white, but im still particular with my flow
if u only feel African cuts..
..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me
when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story!
so u can reword my archives or just fuckin go write puns
winning vs. me is like a hoover...sucks, but its no dice son!
Metasin:
aye...
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened
but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon
you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth
wantin cats to call U-Sur..
n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you
you'll prolly get ya squad to vote; I always get the nod
in the winner's circle, if you CNN theres always politics involved
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
You'll spit dope when pigs fly, you only think that ya times due
cuz ya IQ's like 2, and you heard they discovered the swine flew
die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring
always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening
but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes
cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
************************************************
^^the best of the bold from namix were the manatee, angola, and hoover lines. best of the bold from metasin were the TV screens, concealed weapon, and pulling teeth lines. very close battle, had to read it twice. on the 2nd pass, namix's humor edged it for me. the line of the battle was a toss up between TV screens & manatee, & the visual of a massive bitch droppin her ass combined with the innovative wordplay was pretty much the clincher. this is the 1st verse i've read of metasin, and it didn't disappoint. i just felt that namix hit a smidge harder, and some of meta's references were a bit leukwarm, imo. vote - namix, props to both of u on a hot battle.
edit: i decided to discuss the best lines instead of color-coding shit.
Truc.
October 17th, 2009, 07:31 PM
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
Vs.
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
Both had some equally played & forced shit, i.e User line/CNN/Swine flew/Metasin-Dohpe/Benchmark/Ballroom, the rest were either ok or just decent.
I'm gonna go for Namix just cuz he had less forced & his missis werent as bad, both had the same amount of nice lines but he just edged it out slightly.
v/ Namix
Good battle gettin slept on....
Kenny the G
October 23rd, 2009, 01:10 AM
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
die namix; you lack progression n skill that you have to bring
always one step forward-two steps back til this feels like The Happening
but offline, he's hit rock bottom, never seein no dimes
cuz his chick got enough pounds to trend on twitter for weeks at a time
vs
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
his verses are rhetoric, dont worship this veteran
status in clash is like state law,
and if ya ask Cale…Dohpe is perfect for Metasin
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
whereas clash rocks the hugest cocks; 'n sin got nothing for me
when it comes to ball room, ya boxers are a real cinderella story!
v/metasin
K Y Z O
October 25th, 2009, 05:37 AM
some big names popped up lately; You're the one people forget best
taking a backseat to TV just like screens in the headrest
yet Clash said they'd bring out BIG GUNS... as if we'd feel threatened
but Nam was more intimidating under wraps... as a concealed weapon
you single white female'd ya style from '5ill... that shit is is the truth
wantin cats to call U-Sur..
n even Clash knows he was a better addition than you
this ain't The Wrestler; if he were Rourke, I'd flip the script in here...
he'll still die in amazing fashion...
but that performance won't bring back 'Mix career
all i have to do is wait til he's nervous n lookin weak
enamel crack under pressure- reading his verse is like pulling teeth
and even she says he's easilly one of the weakest geeks
his wii package is more of a letdown to her, than kids wantin a PS3
Alright, diggin' the opener, that was a cool flip. 2nd bar was nice, liked the U-Sur & 'Mix line too. Enamel w/p was nice, and closer was hilarious. Overall a solid, dope verse.
Vs,
timevirus, pjk, cale, hensley, corey..no baring the cost..
i cant fuck this up!
or sin’ll beat out oneduh for my most embarrassing loss!
u hear “a man, a tee, ‘n a club”, ‘n think of golf cuz ya wack
we hear “a man a tee ‘n a club”..
…and think of ya massive bitch droppin her ass!
see, i mastered this style… i hope u just use it in humor guy
my benchmark rivals the one u left on the sidelines in jr. high
i might be white, but im still particular with my flow
if u only feel African cuts..
..then imma Angola knife, perpendicular to ur throat
im sicker than a medieval viking...listen, u should just call forfeit
maybe u’d pass as a testy scandinavian, but u aint got balls nordic
Nice opener, Cal line didn't quote because it was really a played flip, but it was alright I recon. You had alot of cool w/p which I quote, Angola and Nordic was my fav. A few I didn't quote came off forced slighty to me. Overall you had a solid verse, but consistency-wise..
V, MetaSin
Barack Olama
December 5th, 2009, 12:01 PM
2-2
tie
both get a win