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God Of War
02-02-2013, 04:19 PM
David Lama
September 30th, 2009, 02:22 PM

DOHpe vs. Clash

Verses due saturday october 10th 2009 11:59PM pacific
Line Limit: Min = 16, Max = 30
(Line Limit can be more if agreed upon by both)
Match whoever drops first
1st person cant edit after 2nd person drops. 2nd person
cant edit after the first vote. Breaking this rule = DQ
Recycling = Automatic DQ
Feeding = Automatic DQ
No Posting opponents picture without opponents permission
1st to 8 Votes wins
No Ko’s
(In case of a close battle. Must be ahead by 2 votes in order to win
Meaning if someone is up 8-7 he still hasn’t won until he’s up by 2.
If the next vote is for him then he wins. If its not then its 8-8 and in
order for someone to win he’d either have to get the next 2 votes or
wait until he’s up by 2 votes. )
check in. G/l

Blue Bayou
September 30th, 2009, 04:20 PM

g'luck mang... how many u wanna go?

Sephiroth
September 30th, 2009, 08:52 PM

30, g'l.

Blue Bayou
October 10th, 2009, 01:34 PM

sorry Seph i only had time for 24......




really man,

how you gunna say i be droppin w/ nothin but played shit...
when u lost ya belt to a guy i've ko'd multiple times & calls me his favorite?!
but i get it. s'why this battles fit for the taking
ur such a bitch u prolly even enjoyed that dip in the rankings
& fuck ya chick suckin my dick. i'd rather someone stab me at night
cuz if i wanted some Moosehead i'd just head to the bar & grab me a pint
honestly i'd do w/e it took not to hear u rap u stupid queer
kill, start a rebellion, overthrow a government...anything to mutineer
i can count my losses on one hand. i don't need help u faker
cuz u can count ur losses with one hand too..ur a whiz on the calculator
u don't want it. ur writtens suck & will not even move me
honestly i haven't seen Porkey's that laughable since that 80's comedy movie
i know u want the W seph. can prolly almost even taste it brethren
ur another cat 'hell-bent' on winnin. but'll end up goin straight to heaven
i'm just a simple boatman. there's talk of me bein dope but the gossip is poor
ur leadin the wave of the future. it'll take at LEAST 3 days to wash-up on shore
& it's funny. raps the most important thing in the world to this scrub
he hears Grind Time & thinks battles. I reminisce about me & his girl in the club
serious. i'm up on that ass waxin the the thing
i stay next to ur Queen. & u know that she be Jack n' the King.
fuck clash. just a bunch of geeks beaten n severed
but ur a staple of ur crews talent.. a miniture prick that can't keep it together
so no-show or drop. go ahead and try to be the hero kid
cuz even if u retaliate that's just my number of votes against ur zero bitch!

Sephiroth
October 10th, 2009, 03:36 PM

Well i've been around for quite a while... i started texting on Dashadyboard in late 04 and shadysoldiers (before it became IHH) around the same time period.. i went by J R and Oddity back then.. in about late 2005 i switched to doing longbar when those sites died down and went to HF until 2008ish battling as Ayperos...



[WK/37] [Champ] 01) TREDone 5-0 v. 02) Blue Bayou 5-0 (blue wins) (http://www.netcees.com/forums/showthread.php?t=28757&)


i've went against the nicest, i'm known for stompin on dudes
your biggest battle, TRED one - believe me, we all thought he did too
heard you'd become a star, now i don't believe in those rants
he went from being the EZ board champ - to being the EZ board champ
way to lose your hype.. to think that you had crazy potential
verses so wasted, im bout to take a sharpie to it's face like your friends do
seph ain't nice, seph isn't dope.. maybe it's bullshit right?
kinda like you, claiming that you were looking for comp on newbie sites
dogg it isn't just text rap when i say i've hit your chick before
like you, she went from long to short bars - jumping off my dick to yours
my lines get "whoa's", the reactions tell me they feelin dude
while your shit wouldn't get any woes - even IF people were feeling Blue
you mad inconsistant, ima shut you out on some deebo shit
blue cantrell behind me.. if voters decide that this bitch had atleast one hit
you sayin you'll prove you're nice and your raps are just amazing..
well, point taken - away from your verse for not backin up those statements
so don't feel mad, im just stating what even your crew thinks
blue's fulla hot air, and dohpe thought they were picking up steam in recruitment
old dohpe was better, and thats the reason we clown you for
dude, my wording is proper - hops should be helping you out with yours
got me in kill mode, i'm Jason with a machette and mask, prior
i write with evil in tent - yours is just sleepin outside, next to the campfire
and your tag partner went MIA, this guy was wishin he showed..
ion't need sound to beat you, while a 'burden' describes your postion in dohpe

pz

Truc.
October 10th, 2009, 08:13 PM

how you gunna say i be droppin w/ nothin but played shit...
when u lost ya belt to a guy i've ko'd multiple times & calls me his favorite?!
i can count my losses on one hand. i don't need help u faker
cuz u can count ur losses with one hand too..ur a whiz on the calculator
i'm just a simple boatman. there's talk of me bein dope but the gossip is poor
ur leadin the wave of the future. it'll take at LEAST 3 days to wash-up on shore
& it's funny. raps the most important thing in the world to this scrub
he hears Grind Time & thinks battles. I reminisce about me & his girl in the club
serious. i'm up on that ass waxin the the thing
i stay next to ur Queen. & u know that she be Jack n' the King.
fuck clash. just a bunch of geeks beaten n severed
but ur a staple of ur crews talent.. a miniture prick that can't keep it together
so no-show or drop. go ahead and try to be the hero kid
cuz even if u retaliate that's just my number of votes against ur zero bitch!

vs

i've went against the nicest, i'm known for stompin on dudes
your biggest battle, TRED one - believe me, we all thought he did too
my lines get "whoa's", the reactions tell me they feelin dude
while your shit wouldn't get any woes - even IF people were feeling Blue
so don't feel mad, im just stating what even your crew thinks
blue's fulla hot air, and dohpe thought they were picking up steam in recruitment
and your tag partner went MIA, this guy was wishin he showed..
ion't need sound to beat you, while a 'burden' describes your postion in dohpe

blue started out slow, i was suprised(annoyed) to see the mutineer concept that ive done before done better (faggot) but he picked it up towards the end, moosehead was ehh along with hell bent, too simple could done it much better. was a very good verse though.
seph's verse was up and down, he had that ''ive got proper wording bar'' but that was his letdown in this, by all means not a bad verse but could of been much better and possibly won had he had some stronger wording/concepts. in tent was VERY predictable, in tents wordplay been done to death, some of the personals didnt really hit for me. i really liked the picking up steam line but thought you could of made it a really sick bar with the concept. goooooooood battle.

v/ bloo

Touche Guevara
October 10th, 2009, 08:28 PM

Blue Bayou- I liked your verse, but it didn't seem as good as some of your previous stuff. Like some of it was ok, buy either a bit simple, or I've seen done a few times... such as the hell-bent line, dip in the rankings, wash up/wave of the future, grind etc. They weren't bad, and your wording is good, but they weren't as good as your highs... My favorites from your verse were:

how you gunna say i be droppin w/ nothin but played shit...
when u lost ya belt to a guy i've ko'd multiple times & calls me his favorite?!
& fuck ya chick suckin my dick. i'd rather someone stab me at night
cuz if i wanted some Moosehead i'd just head to the bar & grab me a pint
honestly i'd do w/e it took not to hear u rap u stupid queer
kill, start a rebellion, overthrow a government...anything to mutineer
LOL. Your vocab lends well to your WP style. Props for originality.
u don't want it. ur writtens suck & will not even move me
honestly i haven't seen Porkey's that laughable since that 80's comedy movie
fuck clash. just a bunch of geeks beaten n severed
but ur a staple of ur crews talent.. a miniature prick that can't keep it together
so no-show or drop. go ahead and try to be the hero kid
cuz even if u retaliate that's just my number of votes against ur zero bitch!

Sephiroth- I liked your verse as well... You seem to have a bit more of a direct approach, and you stayed pretty consistent throughout... My favorites out of your verse were

i've went against the nicest, i'm known for stompin on dudes
your biggest battle, TRED one - believe me, we all thought he did too
way to lose your hype.. to think that you had crazy potential
verses so wasted, im bout to take a sharpie to it's face like your friends do
I saw that pic, so this was a good personal. lol.
dogg it isn't just text rap when i say i've hit your chick before
like you, she went from long to short bars - jumping off my dick to yours
you mad inconsistant, ima shut you out on some deebo shit
blue cantrell behind me.. if voters decide that this bitch had atleast one hit
you sayin you'll prove you're nice and your raps are just amazing..
well, point taken - away from your verse for not backin up those statements
old dohpe was better, and thats the reason we clown you for
dude, my wording is proper - hops should be helping you out with yours
got me in kill mode, i'm Jason with a machette and mask, prior
i write with evil in tent - yours is just sleepin outside, next to the campfire



Yea, I liked a bit more out of Seph's verse. He was kinda creative with the personals like the short/long bar shit... properhops, etc... I also think that he had the freshness advantage because of the directness of his approach.


good battle. Vote Sephiroth.

Suthshomaru
October 11th, 2009, 10:52 AM

This was a pretty nice battle.. i thought for sure makin assumptions off name alone blue was gonna take this, but this was byfar the best verse i personally read outta seth... i honestly think i felt like every line commin from him. i will edit in more detail when i get to a comp but blue is one of my fav to read so i was really humbled when readin seth verse cuz i ddnt give him a chance..

vote seph

Orc
October 11th, 2009, 04:29 PM

how you gunna say i be droppin w/ nothin but played shit...
when u lost ya belt to a guy i've ko'd multiple times & calls me his favorite?!
[coo swag.]
but i get it. s'why this battles fit for the taking
ur such a bitch u prolly even enjoyed that dip in the rankings
[funny, it's ok.]
& fuck ya chick suckin my dick. i'd rather someone stab me at night
cuz if i wanted some Moosehead i'd just head to the bar & grab me a pint
[lmao, nice.]
honestly i'd do w/e it took not to hear u rap u stupid queer
kill, start a rebellion, overthrow a government...anything to mutineer
[decent]
i can count my losses on one hand. i don't need help u faker
cuz u can count ur losses with one hand too..ur a whiz on the calculator
[mehish misdirection]
u don't want it. ur writtens suck & will not even move me
honestly i haven't seen Porkey's that laughable since that 80's comedy movie
[random.. coo.]
i know u want the W seph. can prolly almost even taste it brethren
ur another cat 'hell-bent' on winnin. but'll end up goin straight to heaven
[didn't like this.]
i'm just a simple boatman. there's talk of me bein dope but the gossip is poor
ur leadin the wave of the future. it'll take at LEAST 3 days to wash-up on shore
[nice swag.]
& it's funny. raps the most important thing in the world to this scrub
he hears Grind Time & thinks battles. I reminisce about me & his girl in the club
serious. i'm up on that ass waxin the the thing
i stay next to ur Queen. & u know that she be Jack n' the King.
[wording was nice, not a fan of the concept tho.]
fuck clash. just a bunch of geeks beaten n severed
but ur a staple of ur crews talent.. a miniture prick that can't keep it together
[connection coulda been better]
so no-show or drop. go ahead and try to be the hero kid
cuz even if u retaliate that's just my number of votes against ur zero bitch!
[weak closer imo.]

coo drop, some nice stuff. i liked the moosehead line. you were consistent but had no real bangers, just consistently ok. some nice wording tho.

vs


i've went against the nicest, i'm known for stompin on dudes
your biggest battle, TRED one - believe me, we all thought he did too
[nice personal.]
heard you'd become a star, now i don't believe in those rants
he went from being the EZ board champ - to being the EZ board champ
[ha, coo.]
way to lose your hype.. to think that you had crazy potential
verses so wasted, im bout to take a sharpie to it's face like your friends do
[sick.]
seph ain't nice, seph isn't dope.. maybe it's bullshit right?
kinda like you, claiming that you were looking for comp on newbie sites
[didn't like this. rhyming was weak too.]
dogg it isn't just text rap when i say i've hit your chick before
like you, she went from long to short bars - jumping off my dick to yours
[funny here.]
my lines get "whoa's", the reactions tell me they feelin dude
while your shit wouldn't get any woes - even IF people were feeling Blue
[haha, nice np.]
you mad inconsistant, ima shut you out on some deebo shit
blue cantrell behind me.. if voters decide that this bitch had atleast one hit
[sick.]
you sayin you'll prove you're nice and your raps are just amazing..
well, point taken - away from your verse for not backin up those statements
[didn't like this.]
so don't feel mad, im just stating what even your crew thinks
blue's fulla hot air, and dohpe thought they were picking up steam in recruitment
[okay.]
old dohpe was better, and thats the reason we clown you for
dude, my wording is proper - hops should be helping you out with yours
[too obvious, seems played.]
got me in kill mode, i'm Jason with a machette and mask, prior
i write with evil in tent - yours is just sleepin outside, next to the campfire
[played to death.]
and your tag partner went MIA, this guy was wishin he showed..
ion't need sound to beat you, while a 'burden' describes your postion in dohpe
[okay.]

some haymakers.. mixed with some played shit/weak shit. cantrell line was probably the lotb.


close - but, i think while blue was consistently decent, seph had the harder hitting stuff. when he hit they were dope, so based on the 'wow factor' i'd go for seph. wording was pretty even, i think seph was maybe more direct tho.

so v/ sephiroth.

David Lama
October 12th, 2009, 02:10 PM

For the record orc JUST registered and some of his first posts were votes on the crew battles so umm I hope nobody has a problem with his votes not counting. Orc has 9 posts at the time I'm saying this and 4 of those posts are on these crew battles.

Prism
October 12th, 2009, 06:14 PM

how you gunna say i be droppin w/ nothin but played shit...
when u lost ya belt to a guy i've ko'd multiple times & calls me his favorite?!
but i get it. s'why this battles fit for the taking
ur such a bitch u prolly even enjoyed that dip in the rankings
& fuck ya chick suckin my dick. i'd rather someone stab me at night
cuz if i wanted some Moosehead i'd just head to the bar & grab me a pint

that personal was too wordy for me nahmean. it was slick but too long.shits got to be taken down a few sylables. that dip line was too blah blah yo. moosehead line woulda been good for the middle of the verse not a bar in the begining. too weak.

honestly i'd do w/e it took not to hear u rap u stupid queer
kill, start a rebellion, overthrow a government...anything to mutineer
i can count my losses on one hand. i don't need help u faker
cuz u can count ur losses with one hand too..ur a whiz on the calculator

mutineer is slick wordplay.likin it.doesnt hit hard nuff though.calc line was mad crazy.

u don't want it. ur writtens suck & will not even move me
honestly i haven't seen Porkey's that laughable since that 80's comedy movie

kinda works.poor keys dont sound much like porkeys unless u change to verbal spitment.i wont hold it too against ya.

i know u want the W seph. can prolly almost even taste it brethren
ur another cat 'hell-bent' on winnin. but'll end up goin straight to heaven
i'm just a simple boatman. there's talk of me bein dope but the gossip is poor
ur leadin the wave of the future. it'll take at LEAST 3 days to wash-up on shore

hellbent was too simple.wave line was coo.i like them kinda lines,made me laugh

& it's funny. raps the most important thing in the world to this scrub
he hears Grind Time & thinks battles. I reminisce about me & his girl in the club
serious. i'm up on that ass waxin the the thing
i stay next to ur Queen. & u know that she be Jack n' the King.

dig the grind time line meng.super slick.jack an the king was kinda wack.

fuck clash. just a bunch of geeks beaten n severed
but ur a staple of ur crews talent.. a miniture prick that can't keep it together
so no-show or drop. go ahead and try to be the hero kid
cuz even if u retaliate that's just my number of votes against ur zero bitch!

minature prick line was a bit simple.shit wasnt hittin too hard atall.retaliate wasnt great neither.not one of youre best verses so far.

id give this a 7.1.not bayous best shit an i think we all can agree.

i've went against the nicest, i'm known for stompin on dudes
your biggest battle, TRED one - believe me, we all thought he did too

hah,i get it.see its shit like this that bayou aint have.sliiiick line.

heard you'd become a star, now i don't believe in those rants
he went from being the EZ board champ - to being the EZ board champ
way to lose your hype.. to think that you had crazy potential
verses so wasted, im bout to take a sharpie to it's face like your friends do

ez board champ was hard.i dont remember seeing anything bout the sharpie.think i missed something?

seph ain't nice, seph isn't dope.. maybe it's bullshit right?
kinda like you, claiming that you were looking for comp on newbie sites
dogg it isn't just text rap when i say i've hit your chick before
like you, she went from long to short bars - jumping off my dick to yours

newb site was ok.not bad dick line.short dick lines got to be worded more smoothly than that tho


my lines get "whoa's", the reactions tell me they feelin dude
while your shit wouldn't get any woes - even IF people were feeling Blue
you mad inconsistant, ima shut you out on some deebo shit
blue cantrell behind me.. if voters decide that this bitch had atleast one hit

woes line in this niggas opinion got to be the line of the battle so far. shit was bonkers.cantrell line was kinda to easy.

you sayin you'll prove you're nice and your raps are just amazing..
well, point taken - away from your verse for not backin up those statements
so don't feel mad, im just stating what even your crew thinks
blue's fulla hot air, and dohpe thought they were picking up steam in recruitment

hah i liked the point taken line.i usually go more for personals and wordplay and shit but this was slick.steam line didnt hit hard but it was worded well and had a good idea to it.

old dohpe was better, and thats the reason we clown you for
dude, my wording is proper - hops should be helping you out with yours
got me in kill mode, i'm Jason with a machette and mask, prior
i write with evil in tent - yours is just sleepin outside, next to the campfire

hops line was ok.intent in tents lines are older than jesus. no way meng.

and your tag partner went MIA, this guy was wishin he showed..
ion't need sound to beat you, while a 'burden' describes your postion in dohpe

not the best ender but i still think u got it. u had more heavy hitter lines,bayou just came lazy. id give ur verse a 8.0

VOTE SEPHIROTH

EYE-M
October 14th, 2009, 09:52 AM

blue-
& fuck ya chick suckin my dick. i'd rather someone stab me at night
cuz if i wanted some Moosehead i'd just head to the bar & grab me a pint

honestly i'd do w/e it took not to hear u rap u stupid queer
kill, start a rebellion, overthrow a government...anything to mutineer

i know u want the W seph. can prolly almost even taste it brethren
ur another cat 'hell-bent' on winnin. but'll end up goin straight to heaven

i'm just a simple boatman. there's talk of me bein dope but the gossip is poor
ur leadin the wave of the future. it'll take at LEAST 3 days to wash-up on shore
^^^^^^^^ those were the best lines in blue's verse. those were fire

seph-
way to lose your hype.. to think that you had crazy potential
verses so wasted, im bout to take a sharpie to it's face like your friends do
^^^^
dogg it isn't just text rap when i say i've hit your chick before
like you, she went from long to short bars - jumping off my dick to yours
my lines get "whoa's", the reactions tell me they feelin dude
while your shit wouldn't get any woes - even IF people were feeling Blue

you sayin you'll prove you're nice and your raps are just amazing..
well, point taken - away from your verse for not backin up those statements
so don't feel mad, im just stating what even your crew thinks
blue's fulla hot air, and dohpe thought they were picking up steam in recruitment

got me in kill mode, i'm Jason with a machette and mask, prior
i write with evil in tent - yours is just sleepin outside, next to the campfire

this battle to me started out close, then i felt like seph just pulled away, harder punches better personals in my opinion, but it was good battle seph jus pulled away from him. good shit both ya'll though

CSick
October 14th, 2009, 10:16 AM

but i get it. s'why this battles fit for the taking
ur such a bitch u prolly even enjoyed that dip in the rankings
& fuck ya chick suckin my dick. i'd rather someone stab me at night
cuz if i wanted some Moosehead i'd just head to the bar & grab me a pint

haha dopeness bro. that second bar had me laughing

i can count my losses on one hand. i don't need help u faker
cuz u can count ur losses with one hand too..ur a whiz on the calculator

nice.

know u want the W seph. can prolly almost even taste it brethren
ur another cat 'hell-bent' on winnin. but'll end up goin straight to heaven

i like this alot.

serious. i'm up on that ass waxin the the thing
i stay next to ur Queen. & u know that she be Jack n' the King.
fuck clash. just a bunch of geeks beaten n severed
but ur a staple of ur crews talent.. a miniture prick that can't keep it together

haha these were nice.

Bayou I wasn't feeling ur closer at all bro. u could've finished much harder. even still, you killed this. had some real witty lines and concepts id never seen before. nicely done.


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dogg it isn't just text rap when i say i've hit your chick before
like you, she went from long to short bars - jumping off my dick to yours
my lines get "whoa's", the reactions tell me they feelin dude
while your shit wouldn't get any woes - even IF people were feeling Blue

haha. feelin it.

got me in kill mode, i'm Jason with a machette and mask, prior
i write with evil in tent - yours is just sleepin outside, next to the campfire

feelin this very creative.

so don't feel mad, im just stating what even your crew thinks
blue's fulla hot air, and dohpe thought they were picking up steam in recruitment

haha cool.

Nice verse seph. I think u went a bit overboard on personals though to be honest and some didnt hit very hard.

Vote - Bayou. His verse was DEFINATELY more creative. he had a good mix of personals. wordplay and solid punchs. i thought seph tried to dig to personal and lacked in some good hard hitting punchs.

Kenny the G
October 23rd, 2009, 01:26 AM

i can count my losses on one hand. i don't need help u faker
cuz u can count ur losses with one hand too..ur a whiz on the calculator
i'm just a simple boatman. there's talk of me bein dope but the gossip is poor
ur leadin the wave of the future. it'll take at LEAST 3 days to wash-up on shore
fuck clash. just a bunch of geeks beaten n severed
but ur a staple of ur crews talent.. a miniture prick that can't keep it together


vs


i've went against the nicest, i'm known for stompin on dudes
your biggest battle, TRED one - believe me, we all thought he did too
way to lose your hype.. to think that you had crazy potential
verses so wasted, im bout to take a sharpie to it's face like your friends do
dogg it isn't just text rap when i say i've hit your chick before
like you, she went from long to short bars - jumping off my dick to yours
you sayin you'll prove you're nice and your raps are just amazing..
well, point taken - away from your verse for not backin up those statements
got me in kill mode, i'm Jason with a machette and mask, prior
i write with evil in tent - yours is just sleepin outside, next to the campfire


v/sephiroth

Lefty
October 23rd, 2009, 11:44 AM

Blue

how you gunna say i be droppin w/ nothin but played shit...
when u lost ya belt to a guy i've ko'd multiple times & calls me his favorite?!
but i get it. s'why this battles fit for the taking
ur such a bitch u prolly even enjoyed that dip in the rankings
u don't want it. ur writtens suck & will not even move me
honestly i haven't seen Porkey's that laughable since that 80's comedy movie
fuck clash. just a bunch of geeks beaten n severed
but ur a staple of ur crews talent.. a miniture prick that can't keep it together

Seph

i've went against the nicest, i'm known for stompin on dudes
your biggest battle, TRED one - believe me, we all thought he did too

you mad inconsistant, ima shut you out on some deebo shit
blue cantrell behind me.. if voters decide that this bitch had atleast one hit
you sayin you'll prove you're nice and your raps are just amazing..
well, point taken - away from your verse for not backin up those statements
old dohpe was better, and thats the reason we clown you for
dude, my wording is proper - hops should be helping you out with yours
got me in kill mode, i'm Jason with a machette and mask, prior
i write with evil in tent - yours is just sleepin outside, next to the campfire
and your tag partner went MIA, this guy was wishin he showed..
ion't need sound to beat you, while a 'burden' describes your postion in dohpe

Seph was more consistent and closed pretty solidly

v/Seph

Barack Olama
December 5th, 2009, 12:03 PM

7-2

Sephiroth wins