simply put

[Bodey]

your mediocrity is blossoming more raunchily than awesome weed
my philosophy's like Socrates... no answers for this bald inbreed
i'm droppin these hypnotically and never fallin off the beat
it dawns on me i got 'em pondering as if they hit super sonic chronic leaf
but oh, I'M the delirious one since birth
though YOU see material funds as worth
left me with an inferior buzz at work
during heavy period blood in skirts
you used to fear this and run like herds
from these lyrics i've spun, dispersed
your spirit was hung, the worst
drowned in a serious flood of words...

my flow is just...

makin paraplegics flip, dissolvin the puke on a bulimic's chin
darken up every anemic's tint while followers of jesus strip
this writing could almost make a policeman hip... ehh almost
open up your spleen and shit until our feces stick
so at least you can be someone even as a piece of shit
agreed, i'm sick. forever diseased with fits of this seasoned spit
breathin in the spliff and releasin wisps of hits as it's seepin in
sneakin fire back from these elitist tricks, label me Prometheus

see?

i'm too fresh with it, embellishin the pen and wit
compelling twists of pencil shifts, sicker than a septic whiff
i stretch the grid, flex its width, eventually the best emits
you get the gist? respect this shit, you're just another desperate clique
writin like dyslexic kids on mescaline, quit sippin that depressant sip
i'm attention deficit, obsessive-- which became an epileptic glitch
regression stitched to my essence, gripped at every potential pleasure since
so i'll move the pen until that wreckage lifts, hitting evanescence quick

[Bodey]

a lot of these were verses i came up with in collabs but i tried to find my own way to combine them as a nice flex. so if you recognize some of hte lines, that's why. but i dont think i ever got feed on these specifically.

[Mr. J]

This was pretty nice the opener was pretty slick
I really enjoyed the second half. very well written
reminds me of me when I can't sleep the flow was keen
The little braggodocio vibe you have fits the message you convey
keep it up

[Inno]

Godam that opener was fucking ill ass shit yo..fucking a
Thay was a dope display of rhyming right there...the rest of
The verse followed suit and carried well with great wording
And fluidity. Matter fact ever first line from each stanza could
Stand alone...really dug this shit, first time reading...well not really
I read thaty clit (anytime a girl says clit, its sexy lol) but that was ok
This was outstanding. Great job with this...quick note I thought from
The since birth line and on to the end of that first verse...that was some
Sick ass wordage and flow....good shit...


Bye the way..how do you say badi?

Bad-e?

Bod-e?

Bay-die? Lol just wondering lol

[Bodey]

bahh dee alley. now say it fast. thats how you say my last name.

and thanks for the feedback guys. i been meaning to write new shit, a lot of these lines are almost a year old but i dont think i've ever posted them by themselves outside of the collab i did so i wanted to see what people thought.

[PancakeBrah]

This was OK.

[Just Write]

Good shit badii has some gems scattered throughout. Opening was my favorite. Keep writin girl

[Geno]

This was great bodey

That heavy period blood/skirts line made me want your naked body more than ever. Good read, glad ur active. Still gonna collab soon, something epic though. Stay tuned

Thinking of titling it"before bodey and cide"

[Darth Yoda]

I liked the middle part, when you said "ehhh" haha!

[e11even]

oh shit!!! you're Bodey?! nevermind why I'm so excited I just found that out lol. Btw, very very cool shit. I lol'd:

"makin paraplegics flip, dissolvin the puke on a bulimic's chin
darken up every anemic's tint while followers of jesus strip
this writing could almost make a policeman hip... ehh almost
open up your spleen and shit until our feces stick
so at least you can be someone even as a piece of shit"

Dope. Better than the few things I read from you. Keep it up!

[Bodey]

This was great bodey

That heavy period blood/skirts line made me want your naked body more than ever. Good read, glad ur active. Still gonna collab soon, something epic though. Stay tuned

Thinking of titling it"before bodey and cide"

haha for sure. i'd love to collab audio-wise someday but i'm nowhere near your level and never will be as far as delivery and lyrics go. but hell yeah, i'm diggin that title for sure. somethin tight. you orchestrated the first collab pretty genius the first time so i already know it'll be dope

@everyone else, thank you so much for the feed, much appreciated

[Pakistani Hand Cannon]

was aiiiiight

[Zen]

I thought this was actually pretty fucking dope. The middle verse was the best, the opener on the first verse was fuckin ILL, and I felt it fell off when it came to the last verse. Overall though this was some solid writing. Would sound fucking good on a track.

[CopyPat]

hey bode. this was pretty good. there was def ALOT of good shit in here, but idunno what it was something felt a little off about it, some parts seemed a bit forced i think?? don't get me wrong for the most part it was decent. just seemed a tad contrived, didn't seem to come as fluidly as it normally does from u. keep posting.