God Of War
02-02-2013, 04:26 PM
David Lama
July 12th, 2009, 08:36 PM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 13th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
Defcon_5
July 12th, 2009, 09:15 PM
hi there
Fuego.
July 12th, 2009, 11:54 PM
chiggety check.
Fuego.
July 13th, 2009, 12:22 AM
When this battle is done, Im gonna give you limited room.
-To tuck ya tail and hide, and start lickin ya wounds.
You spitin shyt, really thinkin in works.
-Actually you sound like a bullemic regurgitating a verse.
This nerd thinks he gets pussy, but only on his computer screen.
-He thinks hes gone through shyt, but he hasnt gone through puberty.
Under-estimated me, Im pretty sure you'll recycle a line and call me average.
-Salute your sargeant, Ima slaughter the foot soldier and my nickname will be savage.
Ima reduce you to dust, but its okay this guy think hes got de-pride.
-The only way your gonna win this battle, is if you do what you do best and thats d-ride.
Defcon_5
July 13th, 2009, 02:11 AM
in text i'ma legend..ur the boringest homo
ya win column's just a big O like the orioles logo
forreal ur 0-8..better check who's turf ur living in
the only good thing with 08 on it is my daughters birth certificate
prepare for the best..Def is here to bury ya text
ur fuckin wack..n u'll probably ask it to marry u next
lama doesn't like...he sent me to get rid of u tramp
but u should feel good knowing u lost to the eventual champ
i've seen garbage before but urs is the worst spittin
i don't get it..
..if u edited ya post for bad spelling why is there still a verse in it?
Dolla
July 13th, 2009, 02:25 AM
Kujoe
When this battle is done, Im gonna give you limited room.
-To tuck ya tail and hide, and start lickin ya wounds.
not feeling this....not a hit....
You spitin shyt, really thinkin in works.
-Actually you sound like a bullemic regurgitating a verse.
the set up didn't work well and the punch was weak
This nerd thinks he gets pussy, but only on his computer screen.
-He thinks hes gone through shyt, but he hasnt gone through puberty.
this was better, but still not a personal or punch...at least an effective one
Under-estimated me, Im pretty sure you'll recycle a line and call me average.
-Salute your sargeant, Ima slaughter the foot soldier and my nickname will be savage.
naw....not feeling that....set up was good....you cocked back but you didn't throw a punch
Ima reduce you to dust, but its okay this guy think hes got de-pride.
-The only way your gonna win this battle, is if you do what you do best and thats d-ride.
uhhh not closer material bra
Defcon
in text i'ma legend..ur the boringest homo
ya win column's just a big O like the orioles logo
uhh set up was iffy but that punch definetly came off smooth
forreal ur 0-8..better check who's turf ur living in
the only good thing with 08 on it is my daughters birth certificate
haha good set up and better punch
prepare for the best..Def is here to bury ya text
ur fuckin wack..n u'll probably ask it to marry u next
I didn't really feel this one, kind of filler in my view, just not to the calibur of the four before it
lama doesn't like...he sent me to get rid of u tramp
but u should feel good knowing u lost to the eventual champ
this was okay....
i've seen garbage before but urs is the worst spittin
i don't get it..
..if u edited ya post for bad spelling why is there still a verse in it?
WOW! LOL now that was closer material...murder right there
look Joe....if you want to win some battles you have to get personal, use some real live shit and reform it cleverly, use some punchlines or something, a bare verse is going to get you no where....espicially when your opponent is bringing heat to the battle, i really think defcon came ready for war and dropped bombs....
vote = defcon
Mighty Odds
July 13th, 2009, 04:53 AM
this was kinda onesided
no hate on ku.. keep doing ur thang I read some other battles n ur elevating, so props. but focus on hitting ur opponent cuz some of ur punches be missing or don't connect right.. but the more u battle the more u know what to use n whatnot too.. other than that.. defcon got this.. better lines.. more experience battler..
take care, y'all
vote- def
Adolf Spitler
July 13th, 2009, 05:27 AM
ill vote on this after work -5:30 in the morning right now -gotta go
Final Chapta
July 13th, 2009, 11:44 AM
jesus def killed this guy.
kujoe gave it what he got thoguh. props for droppin a verse man. you still have a little more work to do before you start runnin with the likes of this guy , ya know. that last punch def had was comedy.
vote - Def
Chap.
PhiLLy-Stacks
July 13th, 2009, 12:38 PM
Def most def took this one...Hands down.
Adolf Spitler
July 13th, 2009, 07:01 PM
lmao -dayum, heyo kujoe.. your definitely gettin better man, but dayum defcon -you wrecked this joint right here man.. the whole shyt had me dying yo.. i dont know why -but i loved that birth certificate line man.. niceness
vote -defcon 5
Beht I. Nguyen
July 13th, 2009, 10:44 PM
KuJoe.. Not a horrible verse. But, you need to work on being more consistent and direct with your attack. Especially that structure.. Your lines kept getting noticebly longer after the opening couplet. Also, work on the wording.. the most simplest concepts can hit harder if worded correctly.
Def.. I'm fairly familiar with your style. For a keystyle I have no real complaints expect that there could've been less braggadocio. Also, your last line was good. But, I'm not a big fan of feeding. Other than that, I was feelin' it.
Vote=Defcon_5
Props 'n repect to both.
July 12th, 2009, 08:36 PM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 13th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
Defcon_5
July 12th, 2009, 09:15 PM
hi there
Fuego.
July 12th, 2009, 11:54 PM
chiggety check.
Fuego.
July 13th, 2009, 12:22 AM
When this battle is done, Im gonna give you limited room.
-To tuck ya tail and hide, and start lickin ya wounds.
You spitin shyt, really thinkin in works.
-Actually you sound like a bullemic regurgitating a verse.
This nerd thinks he gets pussy, but only on his computer screen.
-He thinks hes gone through shyt, but he hasnt gone through puberty.
Under-estimated me, Im pretty sure you'll recycle a line and call me average.
-Salute your sargeant, Ima slaughter the foot soldier and my nickname will be savage.
Ima reduce you to dust, but its okay this guy think hes got de-pride.
-The only way your gonna win this battle, is if you do what you do best and thats d-ride.
Defcon_5
July 13th, 2009, 02:11 AM
in text i'ma legend..ur the boringest homo
ya win column's just a big O like the orioles logo
forreal ur 0-8..better check who's turf ur living in
the only good thing with 08 on it is my daughters birth certificate
prepare for the best..Def is here to bury ya text
ur fuckin wack..n u'll probably ask it to marry u next
lama doesn't like...he sent me to get rid of u tramp
but u should feel good knowing u lost to the eventual champ
i've seen garbage before but urs is the worst spittin
i don't get it..
..if u edited ya post for bad spelling why is there still a verse in it?
Dolla
July 13th, 2009, 02:25 AM
Kujoe
When this battle is done, Im gonna give you limited room.
-To tuck ya tail and hide, and start lickin ya wounds.
not feeling this....not a hit....
You spitin shyt, really thinkin in works.
-Actually you sound like a bullemic regurgitating a verse.
the set up didn't work well and the punch was weak
This nerd thinks he gets pussy, but only on his computer screen.
-He thinks hes gone through shyt, but he hasnt gone through puberty.
this was better, but still not a personal or punch...at least an effective one
Under-estimated me, Im pretty sure you'll recycle a line and call me average.
-Salute your sargeant, Ima slaughter the foot soldier and my nickname will be savage.
naw....not feeling that....set up was good....you cocked back but you didn't throw a punch
Ima reduce you to dust, but its okay this guy think hes got de-pride.
-The only way your gonna win this battle, is if you do what you do best and thats d-ride.
uhhh not closer material bra
Defcon
in text i'ma legend..ur the boringest homo
ya win column's just a big O like the orioles logo
uhh set up was iffy but that punch definetly came off smooth
forreal ur 0-8..better check who's turf ur living in
the only good thing with 08 on it is my daughters birth certificate
haha good set up and better punch
prepare for the best..Def is here to bury ya text
ur fuckin wack..n u'll probably ask it to marry u next
I didn't really feel this one, kind of filler in my view, just not to the calibur of the four before it
lama doesn't like...he sent me to get rid of u tramp
but u should feel good knowing u lost to the eventual champ
this was okay....
i've seen garbage before but urs is the worst spittin
i don't get it..
..if u edited ya post for bad spelling why is there still a verse in it?
WOW! LOL now that was closer material...murder right there
look Joe....if you want to win some battles you have to get personal, use some real live shit and reform it cleverly, use some punchlines or something, a bare verse is going to get you no where....espicially when your opponent is bringing heat to the battle, i really think defcon came ready for war and dropped bombs....
vote = defcon
Mighty Odds
July 13th, 2009, 04:53 AM
this was kinda onesided
no hate on ku.. keep doing ur thang I read some other battles n ur elevating, so props. but focus on hitting ur opponent cuz some of ur punches be missing or don't connect right.. but the more u battle the more u know what to use n whatnot too.. other than that.. defcon got this.. better lines.. more experience battler..
take care, y'all
vote- def
Adolf Spitler
July 13th, 2009, 05:27 AM
ill vote on this after work -5:30 in the morning right now -gotta go
Final Chapta
July 13th, 2009, 11:44 AM
jesus def killed this guy.
kujoe gave it what he got thoguh. props for droppin a verse man. you still have a little more work to do before you start runnin with the likes of this guy , ya know. that last punch def had was comedy.
vote - Def
Chap.
PhiLLy-Stacks
July 13th, 2009, 12:38 PM
Def most def took this one...Hands down.
Adolf Spitler
July 13th, 2009, 07:01 PM
lmao -dayum, heyo kujoe.. your definitely gettin better man, but dayum defcon -you wrecked this joint right here man.. the whole shyt had me dying yo.. i dont know why -but i loved that birth certificate line man.. niceness
vote -defcon 5
Beht I. Nguyen
July 13th, 2009, 10:44 PM
KuJoe.. Not a horrible verse. But, you need to work on being more consistent and direct with your attack. Especially that structure.. Your lines kept getting noticebly longer after the opening couplet. Also, work on the wording.. the most simplest concepts can hit harder if worded correctly.
Def.. I'm fairly familiar with your style. For a keystyle I have no real complaints expect that there could've been less braggadocio. Also, your last line was good. But, I'm not a big fan of feeding. Other than that, I was feelin' it.
Vote=Defcon_5
Props 'n repect to both.