God Of War
02-02-2013, 04:33 PM
David Lama
July 12th, 2009, 08:37 PM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 13th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
Illustration
July 13th, 2009, 07:59 AM
check
Illustration
July 13th, 2009, 02:31 PM
Meh...
I'll just take a broom to ya dome and brush you aside
Or take your ego in my palm..n start crushin' ur pride
Good god...I dunno why I should try and force this
Its like blind baseball players..people beg for no more hits
I'm quick on my feet...my mind's goin' at a rabbit's pace
Yours is movin' like a turtles...I just think at a faster rate
I'm not the greatest...n I'll never say I'm a know it all
But your name has no point...like a bowling ball
So bye bye....kiss your ass goodbye for the next life
No one's fuckin' with you More...kinda like your sex life...
MoreHits
July 13th, 2009, 10:11 PM
no time to waste, i’m in a rush to break ya head
i’m putting those tired concepts to rest before u n ya man take the bed
when it comes to ur asshole, u’ve been through great torture
cuz fags go in n out of illustrations more than gay authors
dropping them whack similes is why its sadly for sure that ya loss this bout
ur a scared bitch that uses like so much…….its like ur a valley girl in a haunted house
just from the beating u got from timevirus, i got this match won
time got in ur ass more than when ur man fisted u with his watch on
u should ask me for lines if u want to make ur words shedder
its weird but one ‘more’ simile would actually make ur verse better
MoreHits
July 13th, 2009, 10:18 PM
votes?...........bring em on
Genocide
July 13th, 2009, 10:33 PM
lol -yo, i didnt even realize how many times he used the word like until i read your verse hits -lmao, just for that, you get my vote...
nah -im playing, both had good verses, morehits came harder and more direct -a little to much in the fag disses catergory -but its not gonna sway my decision this time..
vote -hits
Mike Wrecka
July 13th, 2009, 10:36 PM
honestly i did not enjoy this battle.
illustrations
Good god...I dunno why I should try and force this
Its like blind baseball players..people beg for no more hits
first punch you threw. and it makes no sense. unless im lost here or something. the rest was alot of self praise. some disses that missed the mark mainly.
morehits
ive seen you come waaaay iller. like when we battled for instance. i feel like you typed this up quick.
dropping them whack similes is why its sadly for sure that ya loss this bout
ur a scared bitch that uses like so much…….its like ur a valley girl in a haunted house
i think you overcomplicated this line. i understand that you didnt wanna just say , you use like so much... its like your a valley girl. but iono this had potential but fell short for me. the time line was decent. i think you won this by the skin of your teeth man. and considering the verse you were up against that doesnt say much. i know you gonna bring it next round. aight. pz.
vote- morehits.
Dolla
July 13th, 2009, 10:51 PM
yeah this battle was rough, neither guy hit hard with punchlines or personals, there were a few but neither had quality or consistancy, which makes this battle come down to the hard points of each verse which would be
Illustrations
Good god...I dunno why I should try and force this
Its like blind baseball players..people beg for no more hits
^ the only problem about this punch is it is played....
Morehits:
i’m putting those tired concepts to rest before u n ya man take the bed
ur a scared bitch that uses like so much…….its like ur a valley girl in a haunted house
more hits barely wins in my eyes
vote = morehits
July 12th, 2009, 08:37 PM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 13th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
Illustration
July 13th, 2009, 07:59 AM
check
Illustration
July 13th, 2009, 02:31 PM
Meh...
I'll just take a broom to ya dome and brush you aside
Or take your ego in my palm..n start crushin' ur pride
Good god...I dunno why I should try and force this
Its like blind baseball players..people beg for no more hits
I'm quick on my feet...my mind's goin' at a rabbit's pace
Yours is movin' like a turtles...I just think at a faster rate
I'm not the greatest...n I'll never say I'm a know it all
But your name has no point...like a bowling ball
So bye bye....kiss your ass goodbye for the next life
No one's fuckin' with you More...kinda like your sex life...
MoreHits
July 13th, 2009, 10:11 PM
no time to waste, i’m in a rush to break ya head
i’m putting those tired concepts to rest before u n ya man take the bed
when it comes to ur asshole, u’ve been through great torture
cuz fags go in n out of illustrations more than gay authors
dropping them whack similes is why its sadly for sure that ya loss this bout
ur a scared bitch that uses like so much…….its like ur a valley girl in a haunted house
just from the beating u got from timevirus, i got this match won
time got in ur ass more than when ur man fisted u with his watch on
u should ask me for lines if u want to make ur words shedder
its weird but one ‘more’ simile would actually make ur verse better
MoreHits
July 13th, 2009, 10:18 PM
votes?...........bring em on
Genocide
July 13th, 2009, 10:33 PM
lol -yo, i didnt even realize how many times he used the word like until i read your verse hits -lmao, just for that, you get my vote...
nah -im playing, both had good verses, morehits came harder and more direct -a little to much in the fag disses catergory -but its not gonna sway my decision this time..
vote -hits
Mike Wrecka
July 13th, 2009, 10:36 PM
honestly i did not enjoy this battle.
illustrations
Good god...I dunno why I should try and force this
Its like blind baseball players..people beg for no more hits
first punch you threw. and it makes no sense. unless im lost here or something. the rest was alot of self praise. some disses that missed the mark mainly.
morehits
ive seen you come waaaay iller. like when we battled for instance. i feel like you typed this up quick.
dropping them whack similes is why its sadly for sure that ya loss this bout
ur a scared bitch that uses like so much…….its like ur a valley girl in a haunted house
i think you overcomplicated this line. i understand that you didnt wanna just say , you use like so much... its like your a valley girl. but iono this had potential but fell short for me. the time line was decent. i think you won this by the skin of your teeth man. and considering the verse you were up against that doesnt say much. i know you gonna bring it next round. aight. pz.
vote- morehits.
Dolla
July 13th, 2009, 10:51 PM
yeah this battle was rough, neither guy hit hard with punchlines or personals, there were a few but neither had quality or consistancy, which makes this battle come down to the hard points of each verse which would be
Illustrations
Good god...I dunno why I should try and force this
Its like blind baseball players..people beg for no more hits
^ the only problem about this punch is it is played....
Morehits:
i’m putting those tired concepts to rest before u n ya man take the bed
ur a scared bitch that uses like so much…….its like ur a valley girl in a haunted house
more hits barely wins in my eyes
vote = morehits