God Of War
02-02-2013, 04:34 PM
David Lama
July 12th, 2009, 08:37 PM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 13th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
NoDoze
July 12th, 2009, 09:09 PM
check
NoDoze
July 12th, 2009, 09:36 PM
See im going to succeed where Beht I Ngyuen Fails
Send his ass walking back down the Ho Chi Minh Trail
Leave him Missing in Action, take out his Platoon
Cause an Apocalypse now, leave his whole world in ruin
Boy you cant ever see me, and dont be suprised I cut
Even though your Oriental, I can leave your Eyes Wide Shut
I drop hits on your chop sticks and youll feel defeat
See im one slick cat, but its only dogs that you eat
So save all that tai kwon do, karate, and the kung fu
Cuz like David Carridine I will leave ya hung to
Beht I. Nguyen
July 13th, 2009, 10:16 PM
Whaddup, ND. Respect & GL.
I thought you underestimated me with the most kiddish of rhymes,
well, I dropped mine on Beht, and I aint ever seen him spit. But after what I just dropped, he better bring it
Bwahaha, Damn! I can't believe you actually admitted you tried!
Quit frontin'.. You dunno how to wreck with the keyed scripts,
Hate on my flow? Bitch, you don't have a neck to compete with!
Think your gettin' props? Then it's time to get ya hearing fixed,
Call NoDoze my 'Golden Child', cuz he shines with inexperience!
Search ya roots, young sprout. 'N Start realizin' the truth,
No one knows who I am, and I still got seeded higher than you!
If your NoDoze.. Then I gotta be speed mixed with meth,
Cuz I cause your losing streak to relapse when I eclipse ya rep.!
..1ne.
Genocide
July 13th, 2009, 10:41 PM
well -i dontknow, maybe im just tired.. but for some reason nugyen so and so -i didnt understand some of your first few lines.. -shruggs- gonna have to go with no doze.. allways rockin that old school swag --but i liked your verse better man, thought it was more precise
vote -Doze
Mike Wrecka
July 13th, 2009, 10:46 PM
ok
nodoze - has that direct flow, short lines that i enjoy. would sound good accapella. i was feelin the verse.
I drop hits on your chop sticks and youll feel defeat
See im one slick cat, but its only dogs that you eat
that made me laugh.
beht nguyen-
your verse started choppy. and your stuff wasnt very creative.
Bwahaha, Damn! I can't believe you actually admitted you tried!
Quit frontin'.. You dunno how to wreck with the keyed scripts,
tried, rhymin with scripts. iono. i see you kept the tried rhyme going the next two bars, but ya this is weird to me. and was not a good start.
vote - NoDoze
MoreHits
July 13th, 2009, 10:49 PM
i think beht didnt think much of nodozes verse n i can see why.........which led to him not trying.....n thinking it would be enough to beat dozes verse......he wuz wrong....maybe he didnt have to come as hard as he can.......but he needed to come harder than that......only liked the actually tried n seeded higher lines......rest i thought were weak......doze's verse main problem was it had alot of played stuff but even then i enjoyed it more than beht's verse.......it wuz slightly stronger as a whole........vote.........nodoze
MoreHits
July 13th, 2009, 10:51 PM
mike.....he wuz rhyming the line before the quote with the one after the quote lol.....funny
Mike Wrecka
July 13th, 2009, 11:09 PM
ya i see that. just reads choppy in text the way he formatted it.
July 12th, 2009, 08:37 PM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 13th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
NoDoze
July 12th, 2009, 09:09 PM
check
NoDoze
July 12th, 2009, 09:36 PM
See im going to succeed where Beht I Ngyuen Fails
Send his ass walking back down the Ho Chi Minh Trail
Leave him Missing in Action, take out his Platoon
Cause an Apocalypse now, leave his whole world in ruin
Boy you cant ever see me, and dont be suprised I cut
Even though your Oriental, I can leave your Eyes Wide Shut
I drop hits on your chop sticks and youll feel defeat
See im one slick cat, but its only dogs that you eat
So save all that tai kwon do, karate, and the kung fu
Cuz like David Carridine I will leave ya hung to
Beht I. Nguyen
July 13th, 2009, 10:16 PM
Whaddup, ND. Respect & GL.
I thought you underestimated me with the most kiddish of rhymes,
well, I dropped mine on Beht, and I aint ever seen him spit. But after what I just dropped, he better bring it
Bwahaha, Damn! I can't believe you actually admitted you tried!
Quit frontin'.. You dunno how to wreck with the keyed scripts,
Hate on my flow? Bitch, you don't have a neck to compete with!
Think your gettin' props? Then it's time to get ya hearing fixed,
Call NoDoze my 'Golden Child', cuz he shines with inexperience!
Search ya roots, young sprout. 'N Start realizin' the truth,
No one knows who I am, and I still got seeded higher than you!
If your NoDoze.. Then I gotta be speed mixed with meth,
Cuz I cause your losing streak to relapse when I eclipse ya rep.!
..1ne.
Genocide
July 13th, 2009, 10:41 PM
well -i dontknow, maybe im just tired.. but for some reason nugyen so and so -i didnt understand some of your first few lines.. -shruggs- gonna have to go with no doze.. allways rockin that old school swag --but i liked your verse better man, thought it was more precise
vote -Doze
Mike Wrecka
July 13th, 2009, 10:46 PM
ok
nodoze - has that direct flow, short lines that i enjoy. would sound good accapella. i was feelin the verse.
I drop hits on your chop sticks and youll feel defeat
See im one slick cat, but its only dogs that you eat
that made me laugh.
beht nguyen-
your verse started choppy. and your stuff wasnt very creative.
Bwahaha, Damn! I can't believe you actually admitted you tried!
Quit frontin'.. You dunno how to wreck with the keyed scripts,
tried, rhymin with scripts. iono. i see you kept the tried rhyme going the next two bars, but ya this is weird to me. and was not a good start.
vote - NoDoze
MoreHits
July 13th, 2009, 10:49 PM
i think beht didnt think much of nodozes verse n i can see why.........which led to him not trying.....n thinking it would be enough to beat dozes verse......he wuz wrong....maybe he didnt have to come as hard as he can.......but he needed to come harder than that......only liked the actually tried n seeded higher lines......rest i thought were weak......doze's verse main problem was it had alot of played stuff but even then i enjoyed it more than beht's verse.......it wuz slightly stronger as a whole........vote.........nodoze
MoreHits
July 13th, 2009, 10:51 PM
mike.....he wuz rhyming the line before the quote with the one after the quote lol.....funny
Mike Wrecka
July 13th, 2009, 11:09 PM
ya i see that. just reads choppy in text the way he formatted it.