God Of War
02-02-2013, 05:38 PM
David Lama
July 14th, 2009, 02:05 AM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 14th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
Recycling = Automatic DQ
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
MoreHits
July 14th, 2009, 02:47 AM
goodluck.....i'll drop early
Sound
July 14th, 2009, 10:46 AM
yep..
Sound
July 14th, 2009, 11:45 PM
Ya vocal tone ain't right. no audio tracks fa'sho
..even at work homeboys sales pitch cracks windows
he ain't want to face me. David is just makin him spar
went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw
last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures
your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner
..i put the word out. ya won't win. i can't begin to imagine it
The problem with this tourney is the left side of the bracket is heavier with talent than the right. Semi-final might be better than the final :: shrugs :
^ agreed. but you can blame that on the faggot i'm battlin
your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out
dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count
MoreHits
July 15th, 2009, 12:43 AM
round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through
i should quote a deal tooÖthe one u made with the guy who wrote that for u
ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears
u beat king davidÖ..now try beating someone who hasnít been dead for thousands of years
hits is too gully, iím typing this while iím robbing his house
my verse got sound coveredÖÖlike the muzzle i got on his mouth
me n my homies get the hottest chics, even head from lez types
my click has the best of sex lifes, sound click?ÖÖ..just a website
next round is mine, u cant even act like that crapís sicker
u didnít do enough to get dolla.....Öiím treating u like a whack stripper
Fuego.
July 15th, 2009, 12:53 AM
hmmm, pretty even. I think that morehits had a few stretched and played lines. but great flow. Sound had short lines and good punches (morehits did too, dont get me wrong) but choppy flow.
"last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures
your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner"
^^fave line from sound
"round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through
i should quote a deal too…the one u made with the guy who wrote that for u"
^^fave line from hits.
It all came down to punches and personals, and honestly...i think Sound had the better verse. good punches all around, but i think sound just came a little harder then hits.
Good battle though, good luck to whoever wins.
vote-sound.
Dolla
July 15th, 2009, 12:57 AM
break, breakdown....steady breakin this on....down....lol
Sound
Ya vocal tone ain't right. no audio tracks fa'sho
..even at work homeboys sales pitch cracks windows
^ not opener material, just wasn't that good....
he ain't want to face me. David is just makin him spar
went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw
^ this was okay, kind of related to the other punches thrown at him....
last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures
your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner
^ that was pretty hot
..i put the word out. ya won't win. i can't begin to imagine it
^ agreed. but you can blame that on the faggot i'm battlin
^ quote kind of broke it up
your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out
dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count
^ Lol not closer material but deff funny
Morehits
round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through
i should quote a deal tooÖthe one u made with the guy who wrote that for u
^ haha that was good, good job using the experience, nice flip
ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears
u beat king davidÖ..now try beating someone who hasnít been dead for thousands of years
^ fuck yeah! that was a hard ass punch!
hits is too gully, iím typing this while iím robbing his house
my verse got sound coveredÖÖlike the muzzle i got on his mouth
^ kind of filler but hey it was alright
me n my homies get the hottest chics, even head from lez types
my click has the best of sex lifes, sound click?ÖÖ..just a website
^ lol good punch
next round is mine, u cant even act like that crapís sicker
u didnít do enough to get dolla.....Öiím treating u like a whack stripper
^ thanks for the shoutout/////good closer as well
damn morehits came the best ive seen him so far and he just completely overpowered sound....
vote: morehits
NoDoze
July 15th, 2009, 01:08 AM
I disagree with Dolla, Ive seen MoreHits come better then this. But that being said, he still came pretty hot
Sound had some good lines to. Im not big on the using of the quotes. Kind of reminds me of explaining bars, or showing what word your wordplay is, just breaks up the verse and ruins it all for me.
I really liked the sound covered line, and the king david lines from Hits.
Sound I like the paint thinner line , and the sperm count was funny
All in all I thought it was pretty close. I have to go with MoreHits though for the better punches, and the verse not being broke up by quotes.
Vote MoreHits
e
July 15th, 2009, 03:31 AM
"went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw
nice
"your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner"
...and then your lungs collapse. not a bad idea for a punch tho
"your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out
dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count"
lol!
those were pretty good punches. that paint thinner line was long winded tho. 20 syllables? fuck! needs its own instrumental
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"round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through
i should quote a deal too…the one u made with the guy who wrote that for u"
LMAO great flip.
"ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears
u beat king david…..now try beating someone who hasn’t been dead for thousands of years"
long winded like hell but hillarious. one of those "ooooooooooo's"
"next round is mine, u cant even act like that crap’s sicker
u didn’t do enough to get dolla.....…i’m treating u like a whack stripper"
hahahaha. fucking great
flow got long winded at times like his verse, but your punches had some sting to them
VOTE = hits
FYI
(thats the shit about battling online. when you go first, your shit is susceptible to flippage)
Genocide
July 15th, 2009, 05:20 AM
imma be honest -i like ya steezo sound, but hits got this -had two particular bars that stuck out stronger and further than the stuff you wrote
vote -hits
July 14th, 2009, 02:05 AM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 14th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
Recycling = Automatic DQ
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
MoreHits
July 14th, 2009, 02:47 AM
goodluck.....i'll drop early
Sound
July 14th, 2009, 10:46 AM
yep..
Sound
July 14th, 2009, 11:45 PM
Ya vocal tone ain't right. no audio tracks fa'sho
..even at work homeboys sales pitch cracks windows
he ain't want to face me. David is just makin him spar
went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw
last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures
your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner
..i put the word out. ya won't win. i can't begin to imagine it
The problem with this tourney is the left side of the bracket is heavier with talent than the right. Semi-final might be better than the final :: shrugs :
^ agreed. but you can blame that on the faggot i'm battlin
your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out
dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count
MoreHits
July 15th, 2009, 12:43 AM
round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through
i should quote a deal tooÖthe one u made with the guy who wrote that for u
ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears
u beat king davidÖ..now try beating someone who hasnít been dead for thousands of years
hits is too gully, iím typing this while iím robbing his house
my verse got sound coveredÖÖlike the muzzle i got on his mouth
me n my homies get the hottest chics, even head from lez types
my click has the best of sex lifes, sound click?ÖÖ..just a website
next round is mine, u cant even act like that crapís sicker
u didnít do enough to get dolla.....Öiím treating u like a whack stripper
Fuego.
July 15th, 2009, 12:53 AM
hmmm, pretty even. I think that morehits had a few stretched and played lines. but great flow. Sound had short lines and good punches (morehits did too, dont get me wrong) but choppy flow.
"last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures
your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner"
^^fave line from sound
"round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through
i should quote a deal too…the one u made with the guy who wrote that for u"
^^fave line from hits.
It all came down to punches and personals, and honestly...i think Sound had the better verse. good punches all around, but i think sound just came a little harder then hits.
Good battle though, good luck to whoever wins.
vote-sound.
Dolla
July 15th, 2009, 12:57 AM
break, breakdown....steady breakin this on....down....lol
Sound
Ya vocal tone ain't right. no audio tracks fa'sho
..even at work homeboys sales pitch cracks windows
^ not opener material, just wasn't that good....
he ain't want to face me. David is just makin him spar
went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw
^ this was okay, kind of related to the other punches thrown at him....
last round ya got an illustration, homie i paint pictures
your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner
^ that was pretty hot
..i put the word out. ya won't win. i can't begin to imagine it
^ agreed. but you can blame that on the faggot i'm battlin
^ quote kind of broke it up
your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out
dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count
^ Lol not closer material but deff funny
Morehits
round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through
i should quote a deal tooÖthe one u made with the guy who wrote that for u
^ haha that was good, good job using the experience, nice flip
ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears
u beat king davidÖ..now try beating someone who hasnít been dead for thousands of years
^ fuck yeah! that was a hard ass punch!
hits is too gully, iím typing this while iím robbing his house
my verse got sound coveredÖÖlike the muzzle i got on his mouth
^ kind of filler but hey it was alright
me n my homies get the hottest chics, even head from lez types
my click has the best of sex lifes, sound click?ÖÖ..just a website
^ lol good punch
next round is mine, u cant even act like that crapís sicker
u didnít do enough to get dolla.....Öiím treating u like a whack stripper
^ thanks for the shoutout/////good closer as well
damn morehits came the best ive seen him so far and he just completely overpowered sound....
vote: morehits
NoDoze
July 15th, 2009, 01:08 AM
I disagree with Dolla, Ive seen MoreHits come better then this. But that being said, he still came pretty hot
Sound had some good lines to. Im not big on the using of the quotes. Kind of reminds me of explaining bars, or showing what word your wordplay is, just breaks up the verse and ruins it all for me.
I really liked the sound covered line, and the king david lines from Hits.
Sound I like the paint thinner line , and the sperm count was funny
All in all I thought it was pretty close. I have to go with MoreHits though for the better punches, and the verse not being broke up by quotes.
Vote MoreHits
e
July 15th, 2009, 03:31 AM
"went and named himself MoreHits - that's what he'll take to the jaw
nice
"your verse is a masterpiece - that needs a touch-up, tone, & a layer of paint thinner"
...and then your lungs collapse. not a bad idea for a punch tho
"your biggest claim to fame? avoidage of being a jerk out
dukes a mathmetician - struggling to raise his sperm count"
lol!
those were pretty good punches. that paint thinner line was long winded tho. 20 syllables? fuck! needs its own instrumental
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"round 1 n 2 u switched ya style, i caught that, ur through
i should quote a deal too…the one u made with the guy who wrote that for u"
LMAO great flip.
"ur drowning urself, i wont stop till ur dropping mountains of tears
u beat king david…..now try beating someone who hasn’t been dead for thousands of years"
long winded like hell but hillarious. one of those "ooooooooooo's"
"next round is mine, u cant even act like that crap’s sicker
u didn’t do enough to get dolla.....…i’m treating u like a whack stripper"
hahahaha. fucking great
flow got long winded at times like his verse, but your punches had some sting to them
VOTE = hits
FYI
(thats the shit about battling online. when you go first, your shit is susceptible to flippage)
Genocide
July 15th, 2009, 05:20 AM
imma be honest -i like ya steezo sound, but hits got this -had two particular bars that stuck out stronger and further than the stuff you wrote
vote -hits