God Of War
02-02-2013, 05:43 PM
David Lama
July 14th, 2009, 02:06 AM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 14th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
Recycling = Automatic DQ
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
Dolla
July 14th, 2009, 02:14 AM
chizzeck
good luck gaffle....may the best man win
C. Gaffle
July 14th, 2009, 10:19 AM
check
Dolla
July 14th, 2009, 09:17 PM
Look at this boy, i can't believe that your official
When they see you, only time they 'c G' is peepin your initials!
Your annoying and everyday you add to my work day stress
But i got your chick to blow me like a candel, call it birthday sex!
There's other lifeforms beating ass, maybe it's just him
not of this world, who thought that you'd get beat by an Alien again?
Unexpected, as the future is told what you should do is just quit
There aren't extensions in this battle, start removin your wig
This round is all me, why? because i called it, made it mine
Us sparing is like Bums at an auction, A Dolla takes the prize...
C. Gaffle
July 15th, 2009, 02:40 AM
hey we all gotta lose sooner or later good thing i lost here and not in the tourney....good shit plague
0-3 KO
http://www.netcees.com/forums/showthread.php?p=339690#post339690
Must be sick of losing, well I'll make sure ya climbs over friend
so try to avoid loss like the Plague...u'll only wind up KO'd again
& after i merk u, they'll make every officer and scholar work
then the search party'll comeback a day late...an a Dolla short
U copy sport...runs up and heres showin u, we're better off
cuz i'll get ridda Dolla faster...than openin up a debit card
& i can't fault you for actin tough, its the nature of war
but my punches'll put u on a power trip...straight to the morgue
In skill kid ya not near, I got the 2nd round locked queer
so I guess its bad news Dolla...cuz the Buck stops here
a lil rushed, but eh it'll do
Dolla
July 15th, 2009, 02:47 AM
that's what i call a last minute drop! haha good stuff homie....judges?
votes please?
NoDoze
July 15th, 2009, 02:58 AM
& after i merk u, they'll make every officer and scholar work
then the search party'll comeback a day late...an a Dolla short
In skill kid ya not near, I got the 2nd round locked queer
so I guess its bad news Dolla...cuz the Buck stops here
vs
Look at this boy, i can't believe that your official
When they see you, only time they 'c G' is peepin your initials!
Unexpected, as the future is told what you should do is just quit
There aren't extensions in this battle, start removin your wig
This round is all me, why? because i called it, made it mine
Us sparing is like Bums at an auction, A Dolla takes the prize...
Close battle, but I think Dollar got it by one line
Vote Dolla
timevirus
July 15th, 2009, 03:11 AM
dolla came nice. specially knowing he's 14 fucking yrs old n shit, lol. liked the initials & removin ya wig line & the b-day line.
gaffle rocked this shit though, without a doubt. some really clever, well-delivered plays in there. The 1st & 4th bar didn't hit all that hard, but the rest was fire. that debit card line to me was a haymaker.
ill battle, propers to both, vote - gaffle
e
July 15th, 2009, 03:18 AM
"Look at this boy, i can't believe that your official
When they see you, only time they 'c G' is peepin your initials!"
eh. not bad i guess. coulda went with something better though.
"Your annoying and everyday you add to my work day stress
But i got your chick to blow me like a candel, call it birthday sex!"
again, so-so. nothing amazingly creative. btw, candle is with DLE. honest mistake im sure.
"There's other lifeforms beating ass, maybe it's just him
not of this world, who thought that you'd get beat by an Alien again?"
i get it. but AGAIN, nothing creative.
"Unexpected, as the future is told what you should do is just quit
There aren't extensions in this battle, start removin your wig"
the punch wasnt too bad here. setup was though.
"This round is all me, why? because i called it, made it mine
Us sparing is like Bums at an auction, A Dolla takes the prize... "
this was your best line.
all in all, the setups were pretty mediocre and the flow was off due to 15 syllable lines. i could see if this was spat acapella but i prefer verses with better flow. OVERALL = 5/10
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"Must be sick of losing, well I'll make sure ya climbs over friend
so try to avoid loss like the Plague...u'll only wind up KO'd again"
punch was eh the setup was bad tho. poor effort.
"& after i merk u, they'll make every officer and scholar work
then the search party'll comeback a day late...an a Dolla short"
decent punch but the setup was TERRIBLE. "scholar work/dollar short". sheesh
"U copy sport...runs up and heres showin u, we're better off
cuz i'll get ridda Dolla faster...than openin up a debit card"
not bad. again, bad setup, punch was ok.
"& i can't fault you for actin tough, its the nature of war
but my punches'll put u on a power trip...straight to the morgue"
this wasn't too bad. one of ur better punches. at least the setup was tied into the punch for the most part.
"In skill kid ya not near, I got the 2nd round locked queer
so I guess its bad news Dolla...cuz the Buck stops here"
best bar of your verse, good way to end it. made me lol
so at the end of the day, the flow was smoother than Dolla's, but still choppy with those marathon lines. punches hit alot harder though. OVERALL = 6.8/10
VOTE = gaffle
Dolla
July 15th, 2009, 03:18 AM
1-2
uppin on more
MoreHits
July 15th, 2009, 03:20 AM
i wuz thinking dolla wuz going to take this one cuz ive seen him drop tight before.....he dissapointed me in this one.....only liked his last 2 bars.......c gaffle i liked everything except for the opener.........dolla i wuz rooting for u even had a line about facing u next round but gaffle got this one.....vote.......c gaffle
Dolla
July 15th, 2009, 03:22 AM
1-3
uppin....match point
Adolf Spitler
July 15th, 2009, 05:22 AM
yo man -this battle was pretty sicc, my favorite of the whole round i think --you bath came with some heat, but i honestly think gaffle got you dollla -his name flips had me crackin up man, nice verse on both counts
vote -gaffle
July 14th, 2009, 02:06 AM
No Time to Waste 2009
Keystyle Tournament
Verses due July 14th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
Recycling = Automatic DQ
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
Dolla
July 14th, 2009, 02:14 AM
chizzeck
good luck gaffle....may the best man win
C. Gaffle
July 14th, 2009, 10:19 AM
check
Dolla
July 14th, 2009, 09:17 PM
Look at this boy, i can't believe that your official
When they see you, only time they 'c G' is peepin your initials!
Your annoying and everyday you add to my work day stress
But i got your chick to blow me like a candel, call it birthday sex!
There's other lifeforms beating ass, maybe it's just him
not of this world, who thought that you'd get beat by an Alien again?
Unexpected, as the future is told what you should do is just quit
There aren't extensions in this battle, start removin your wig
This round is all me, why? because i called it, made it mine
Us sparing is like Bums at an auction, A Dolla takes the prize...
C. Gaffle
July 15th, 2009, 02:40 AM
hey we all gotta lose sooner or later good thing i lost here and not in the tourney....good shit plague
0-3 KO
http://www.netcees.com/forums/showthread.php?p=339690#post339690
Must be sick of losing, well I'll make sure ya climbs over friend
so try to avoid loss like the Plague...u'll only wind up KO'd again
& after i merk u, they'll make every officer and scholar work
then the search party'll comeback a day late...an a Dolla short
U copy sport...runs up and heres showin u, we're better off
cuz i'll get ridda Dolla faster...than openin up a debit card
& i can't fault you for actin tough, its the nature of war
but my punches'll put u on a power trip...straight to the morgue
In skill kid ya not near, I got the 2nd round locked queer
so I guess its bad news Dolla...cuz the Buck stops here
a lil rushed, but eh it'll do
Dolla
July 15th, 2009, 02:47 AM
that's what i call a last minute drop! haha good stuff homie....judges?
votes please?
NoDoze
July 15th, 2009, 02:58 AM
& after i merk u, they'll make every officer and scholar work
then the search party'll comeback a day late...an a Dolla short
In skill kid ya not near, I got the 2nd round locked queer
so I guess its bad news Dolla...cuz the Buck stops here
vs
Look at this boy, i can't believe that your official
When they see you, only time they 'c G' is peepin your initials!
Unexpected, as the future is told what you should do is just quit
There aren't extensions in this battle, start removin your wig
This round is all me, why? because i called it, made it mine
Us sparing is like Bums at an auction, A Dolla takes the prize...
Close battle, but I think Dollar got it by one line
Vote Dolla
timevirus
July 15th, 2009, 03:11 AM
dolla came nice. specially knowing he's 14 fucking yrs old n shit, lol. liked the initials & removin ya wig line & the b-day line.
gaffle rocked this shit though, without a doubt. some really clever, well-delivered plays in there. The 1st & 4th bar didn't hit all that hard, but the rest was fire. that debit card line to me was a haymaker.
ill battle, propers to both, vote - gaffle
e
July 15th, 2009, 03:18 AM
"Look at this boy, i can't believe that your official
When they see you, only time they 'c G' is peepin your initials!"
eh. not bad i guess. coulda went with something better though.
"Your annoying and everyday you add to my work day stress
But i got your chick to blow me like a candel, call it birthday sex!"
again, so-so. nothing amazingly creative. btw, candle is with DLE. honest mistake im sure.
"There's other lifeforms beating ass, maybe it's just him
not of this world, who thought that you'd get beat by an Alien again?"
i get it. but AGAIN, nothing creative.
"Unexpected, as the future is told what you should do is just quit
There aren't extensions in this battle, start removin your wig"
the punch wasnt too bad here. setup was though.
"This round is all me, why? because i called it, made it mine
Us sparing is like Bums at an auction, A Dolla takes the prize... "
this was your best line.
all in all, the setups were pretty mediocre and the flow was off due to 15 syllable lines. i could see if this was spat acapella but i prefer verses with better flow. OVERALL = 5/10
---------------------------------------------------------------
"Must be sick of losing, well I'll make sure ya climbs over friend
so try to avoid loss like the Plague...u'll only wind up KO'd again"
punch was eh the setup was bad tho. poor effort.
"& after i merk u, they'll make every officer and scholar work
then the search party'll comeback a day late...an a Dolla short"
decent punch but the setup was TERRIBLE. "scholar work/dollar short". sheesh
"U copy sport...runs up and heres showin u, we're better off
cuz i'll get ridda Dolla faster...than openin up a debit card"
not bad. again, bad setup, punch was ok.
"& i can't fault you for actin tough, its the nature of war
but my punches'll put u on a power trip...straight to the morgue"
this wasn't too bad. one of ur better punches. at least the setup was tied into the punch for the most part.
"In skill kid ya not near, I got the 2nd round locked queer
so I guess its bad news Dolla...cuz the Buck stops here"
best bar of your verse, good way to end it. made me lol
so at the end of the day, the flow was smoother than Dolla's, but still choppy with those marathon lines. punches hit alot harder though. OVERALL = 6.8/10
VOTE = gaffle
Dolla
July 15th, 2009, 03:18 AM
1-2
uppin on more
MoreHits
July 15th, 2009, 03:20 AM
i wuz thinking dolla wuz going to take this one cuz ive seen him drop tight before.....he dissapointed me in this one.....only liked his last 2 bars.......c gaffle i liked everything except for the opener.........dolla i wuz rooting for u even had a line about facing u next round but gaffle got this one.....vote.......c gaffle
Dolla
July 15th, 2009, 03:22 AM
1-3
uppin....match point
Adolf Spitler
July 15th, 2009, 05:22 AM
yo man -this battle was pretty sicc, my favorite of the whole round i think --you bath came with some heat, but i honestly think gaffle got you dollla -his name flips had me crackin up man, nice verse on both counts
vote -gaffle