God Of War
02-02-2013, 06:02 PM
David Lama
June 23rd, 2009, 07:46 AM
Stick and Move 2009
Verses due June 24th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
C. Gaffle
June 23rd, 2009, 09:38 PM
I'm in az, I work til 9...but definitely droppin when I get off
CarmeloSwag
June 23rd, 2009, 09:43 PM
ight do tat..cuz im ready
CarmeloSwag
June 23rd, 2009, 11:45 PM
This a Massive Warnin..2 otha contestants who don’t wana see their Ass Git torn N
The Caskets Callin Cuz First round I’ma “Drop C.G” like Computer Graphics Borin
The Flow is sick, I b Loadin Clips U not on nothin Hard U just Holdin Dick
Better plead I edit ma verse to meet ya strength..Hit me up “Sl0wMSwift”
Noone Knows you here Bum ya times Due..U’ll b losin to this Player
The Heat send Gaffle/Gavel to the Carpenter..Introduce him to his “Maker”
After this he gna B known as the Guy Swag Baked..He’s “Fraud” N I’m IRS, wen I hit, “no returns” Cuz Gaffles Attacks Fake/A Tax Fake
I said Im “gridin” Faggot said he wana “dance” so dem bullets made his “Ass Shake”
He cnt escape this “flow” no way this Chimps Noah…Meet this Ring Owner
Pfff Dawg U Cnt Keep Up in this Battle/Keep Uppin This Battle Cuz is been Over
Melo
EarlyYy
Who said I fell off?
C. Gaffle
June 24th, 2009, 12:44 AM
all my punches is flames, an with urs...nothins scoldin son
so if ur word is bond...my verse is the fuckin golden gun
just know to run, cuz Gafs got iller fingers n doper thumbs
ima win period...
& that blanket statement'll aphixiate all u hopeless bums
Car u chokin huh? tryna fool cats that his crafts all class
how u leader of the new school?...when i jacked ya hall pass
so when the votes ooze in, it'll change ya tune or quell ya pride
they'll sing the praises of me...either way u look at it, Melodize
so man listen, i wrote the manual on ill...every page is clutch
& u went by my book...only to be found dead from papercuts
MoreHits
June 24th, 2009, 01:21 AM
Keep Up in this Battle/Keep Uppin
plz stop doing stuff like this......its annoying carmelo......carmelo didnt bring it like he usually does........had some ok stuff......but c gaffle was fire.......had some ill wordplay and dope punches.....felt gaffs whole verse.......only like like 1 or 2 bars from swag.....voting for C gaffle
CarmeloSwag
June 24th, 2009, 01:34 AM
Morehits str8 hater haha..no problem tho i aint sweatin u..u hate my lines, so u voted against me..u jus to slow to cope wit creativity..no doubt
Godly MC
June 24th, 2009, 02:25 AM
vote-gaffle
both came dope. i enjoyed both a lot. sick battle. unfortanetly one of yous have to lose and i think the hotter of the two here was c gaffle he had that extra edge in his punches plus his lines were shorter which made his verse flow alot better. hot stuff guys. you both ill. i dig both of your styles. very good use of ya talent. i hope to see alot more from both of you in the future.
CarmeloSwag
June 24th, 2009, 08:06 AM
2-0
CarmeloSwag
June 24th, 2009, 08:34 AM
Keep Up in this Battle/Keep Uppin
plz stop doing stuff like this......its annoying carmelo......carmelo didnt bring it like he usually does........had some ok stuff......but c gaffle was fire.......had some ill wordplay and dope punches.....felt gaffs whole verse.......only like like 1 or 2 bars from swag.....voting for C gaffle
one more thing..this is text battle not audio
ya vote shouldnt even count for sayin shit like ta...pure hate
Lama check tat
Adolf Spitler
June 24th, 2009, 03:52 PM
i gotta be honest here swag --theres something about your shyt that is just impossible to read it smoothly man... thats half the fuccin battle dog -it has to rhyme, and i shouldnt have to drive myself crazy to find the rhymes... maybe its the way you do this shyt though------The Heat send Gaffle/Gavel to the Carpenter------
that right there --fuccin annoying man, it breaks the whole read up.. diverts the whole purpose of rhyming... now its become a jigsaw puzzle ....not to mention i didnt like it that much -but ill try to dissect it anyway man
This a Massive Warnin..2 otha contestants who don’t wana see their Ass Git torn N
The Caskets Callin Cuz First round I’ma “Drop C.G” like Computer Graphics Borin
this was tyte man -it rhymed and you didnt do that gay slashy thing ---i give it a 3.0
The Flow is sick, I b Loadin Clips U not on nothin Hard U just Holdin Dick
Better plead I edit ma verse to meet ya strength..Hit me up “Sl0wMSwift”
dont really know what that slowmswift shyt was... and the dicc thing man --i hate gay shyt in a tourney, come original ---1.0
Noone Knows you here Bum ya times Due..U’ll b losin to this Player
The Heat send Gaffle/Gavel to the Carpenter..Introduce him to his “Maker”
this was cool -even though i HATE plays on words when you have to misspell the shyt for it to make sense -whats the point of that? 1.5
After this he gna B known as the Guy Swag Baked..He’s “Fraud” N I’m IRS, wen I hit, “no returns” Cuz Gaffles Attacks Fake/A Tax Fake
this was cool -didnt hit verry hard in my eyes though, nice little play on IRS -ive seen shyt like it before though... 1.5
I said Im “gridin” Faggot said he wana “dance” so dem bullets made his “Ass Shake”
He cnt escape this “flow” no way this Chimps Noah…Meet this Ring Owner
Pfff Dawg U Cnt Keep Up in this Battle/Keep Uppin This Battle Cuz is been Over
this was just soft man ---1.0
verses________________________________________.... .............
all my punches is flames, an with urs...nothins scoldin son
so if ur word is bond...my verse is the fuckin golden gun
i honestly liked this line better then reals whole verse -rhymed nice and didnt need any further explanation, just raw killer shyt -3.0
just know to run, cuz Gafs got iller fingers n doper thumbs
ima win period...
& that blanket statement'll aphixiate all u hopeless bums
this wasnt verry good to me --kinda broke the rhyme up with that separation there.. that hurt -even though it diodnt hit verry hard either way...1.0
Car u chokin huh? tryna fool cats that his crafts all class
how u leader of the new school?...when i jacked ya hall pass
verry simple -but direct hit, easy concept -and easy to read... 2.5
so when the votes ooze in, it'll change ya tune or quell ya pride
they'll sing the praises of me...either way u look at it, Melodize
this wasnt really a good attack -kinda seemed filler/braggish... 1.0
so man listen, i wrote the manual on ill...every page is clutch
& u went by my book...only to be found dead from papercuts
ive seen things like this before -but placed next to his verse, it was verry effective -2.5
vote -----------C.Gaffle
NoDoze
June 24th, 2009, 04:06 PM
I dont like the slashy thing, shouldnt have to explain the rhymes in my opinion. But... I disagree with Genocide. I can find your rhthym and yours rhymes, so I can read it pretty well.
I thought Car came pretty decent, but Gaff killed it.
Vote Gaff
MoreHits
June 24th, 2009, 04:06 PM
carmelo ive voted for u several times before.......its not hating......its just that when you do that it insults the readers intelligence.......its like u saying we too dumb to get it if u didnt do that.....but we aint.......so its annoying......thats all i was saying.....how is that hating?
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June 23rd, 2009, 07:46 AM
Stick and Move 2009
Verses due June 24th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l
C. Gaffle
June 23rd, 2009, 09:38 PM
I'm in az, I work til 9...but definitely droppin when I get off
CarmeloSwag
June 23rd, 2009, 09:43 PM
ight do tat..cuz im ready
CarmeloSwag
June 23rd, 2009, 11:45 PM
This a Massive Warnin..2 otha contestants who don’t wana see their Ass Git torn N
The Caskets Callin Cuz First round I’ma “Drop C.G” like Computer Graphics Borin
The Flow is sick, I b Loadin Clips U not on nothin Hard U just Holdin Dick
Better plead I edit ma verse to meet ya strength..Hit me up “Sl0wMSwift”
Noone Knows you here Bum ya times Due..U’ll b losin to this Player
The Heat send Gaffle/Gavel to the Carpenter..Introduce him to his “Maker”
After this he gna B known as the Guy Swag Baked..He’s “Fraud” N I’m IRS, wen I hit, “no returns” Cuz Gaffles Attacks Fake/A Tax Fake
I said Im “gridin” Faggot said he wana “dance” so dem bullets made his “Ass Shake”
He cnt escape this “flow” no way this Chimps Noah…Meet this Ring Owner
Pfff Dawg U Cnt Keep Up in this Battle/Keep Uppin This Battle Cuz is been Over
Melo
EarlyYy
Who said I fell off?
C. Gaffle
June 24th, 2009, 12:44 AM
all my punches is flames, an with urs...nothins scoldin son
so if ur word is bond...my verse is the fuckin golden gun
just know to run, cuz Gafs got iller fingers n doper thumbs
ima win period...
& that blanket statement'll aphixiate all u hopeless bums
Car u chokin huh? tryna fool cats that his crafts all class
how u leader of the new school?...when i jacked ya hall pass
so when the votes ooze in, it'll change ya tune or quell ya pride
they'll sing the praises of me...either way u look at it, Melodize
so man listen, i wrote the manual on ill...every page is clutch
& u went by my book...only to be found dead from papercuts
MoreHits
June 24th, 2009, 01:21 AM
Keep Up in this Battle/Keep Uppin
plz stop doing stuff like this......its annoying carmelo......carmelo didnt bring it like he usually does........had some ok stuff......but c gaffle was fire.......had some ill wordplay and dope punches.....felt gaffs whole verse.......only like like 1 or 2 bars from swag.....voting for C gaffle
CarmeloSwag
June 24th, 2009, 01:34 AM
Morehits str8 hater haha..no problem tho i aint sweatin u..u hate my lines, so u voted against me..u jus to slow to cope wit creativity..no doubt
Godly MC
June 24th, 2009, 02:25 AM
vote-gaffle
both came dope. i enjoyed both a lot. sick battle. unfortanetly one of yous have to lose and i think the hotter of the two here was c gaffle he had that extra edge in his punches plus his lines were shorter which made his verse flow alot better. hot stuff guys. you both ill. i dig both of your styles. very good use of ya talent. i hope to see alot more from both of you in the future.
CarmeloSwag
June 24th, 2009, 08:06 AM
2-0
CarmeloSwag
June 24th, 2009, 08:34 AM
Keep Up in this Battle/Keep Uppin
plz stop doing stuff like this......its annoying carmelo......carmelo didnt bring it like he usually does........had some ok stuff......but c gaffle was fire.......had some ill wordplay and dope punches.....felt gaffs whole verse.......only like like 1 or 2 bars from swag.....voting for C gaffle
one more thing..this is text battle not audio
ya vote shouldnt even count for sayin shit like ta...pure hate
Lama check tat
Adolf Spitler
June 24th, 2009, 03:52 PM
i gotta be honest here swag --theres something about your shyt that is just impossible to read it smoothly man... thats half the fuccin battle dog -it has to rhyme, and i shouldnt have to drive myself crazy to find the rhymes... maybe its the way you do this shyt though------The Heat send Gaffle/Gavel to the Carpenter------
that right there --fuccin annoying man, it breaks the whole read up.. diverts the whole purpose of rhyming... now its become a jigsaw puzzle ....not to mention i didnt like it that much -but ill try to dissect it anyway man
This a Massive Warnin..2 otha contestants who don’t wana see their Ass Git torn N
The Caskets Callin Cuz First round I’ma “Drop C.G” like Computer Graphics Borin
this was tyte man -it rhymed and you didnt do that gay slashy thing ---i give it a 3.0
The Flow is sick, I b Loadin Clips U not on nothin Hard U just Holdin Dick
Better plead I edit ma verse to meet ya strength..Hit me up “Sl0wMSwift”
dont really know what that slowmswift shyt was... and the dicc thing man --i hate gay shyt in a tourney, come original ---1.0
Noone Knows you here Bum ya times Due..U’ll b losin to this Player
The Heat send Gaffle/Gavel to the Carpenter..Introduce him to his “Maker”
this was cool -even though i HATE plays on words when you have to misspell the shyt for it to make sense -whats the point of that? 1.5
After this he gna B known as the Guy Swag Baked..He’s “Fraud” N I’m IRS, wen I hit, “no returns” Cuz Gaffles Attacks Fake/A Tax Fake
this was cool -didnt hit verry hard in my eyes though, nice little play on IRS -ive seen shyt like it before though... 1.5
I said Im “gridin” Faggot said he wana “dance” so dem bullets made his “Ass Shake”
He cnt escape this “flow” no way this Chimps Noah…Meet this Ring Owner
Pfff Dawg U Cnt Keep Up in this Battle/Keep Uppin This Battle Cuz is been Over
this was just soft man ---1.0
verses________________________________________.... .............
all my punches is flames, an with urs...nothins scoldin son
so if ur word is bond...my verse is the fuckin golden gun
i honestly liked this line better then reals whole verse -rhymed nice and didnt need any further explanation, just raw killer shyt -3.0
just know to run, cuz Gafs got iller fingers n doper thumbs
ima win period...
& that blanket statement'll aphixiate all u hopeless bums
this wasnt verry good to me --kinda broke the rhyme up with that separation there.. that hurt -even though it diodnt hit verry hard either way...1.0
Car u chokin huh? tryna fool cats that his crafts all class
how u leader of the new school?...when i jacked ya hall pass
verry simple -but direct hit, easy concept -and easy to read... 2.5
so when the votes ooze in, it'll change ya tune or quell ya pride
they'll sing the praises of me...either way u look at it, Melodize
this wasnt really a good attack -kinda seemed filler/braggish... 1.0
so man listen, i wrote the manual on ill...every page is clutch
& u went by my book...only to be found dead from papercuts
ive seen things like this before -but placed next to his verse, it was verry effective -2.5
vote -----------C.Gaffle
NoDoze
June 24th, 2009, 04:06 PM
I dont like the slashy thing, shouldnt have to explain the rhymes in my opinion. But... I disagree with Genocide. I can find your rhthym and yours rhymes, so I can read it pretty well.
I thought Car came pretty decent, but Gaff killed it.
Vote Gaff
MoreHits
June 24th, 2009, 04:06 PM
carmelo ive voted for u several times before.......its not hating......its just that when you do that it insults the readers intelligence.......its like u saying we too dumb to get it if u didnt do that.....but we aint.......so its annoying......thats all i was saying.....how is that hating?
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