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God Of War
02-02-2013, 06:03 PM
David Lama
June 23rd, 2009, 07:47 AM

Stick and Move 2009

Verses due June 24th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l

Dot..
June 23rd, 2009, 07:08 PM

dope..

Dot..
June 23rd, 2009, 07:33 PM

i heard u was fat..

i carve through necks..
u just bet u so great..
he thought he'd starve to death..
when i said i'd leave him in a vegetable state..
this faggot sucks..
yo dudes, hes whack..
back for what?..
ur scooby snack?..
unlucky schmuck..
u stepped into king kongs ring..
merc fucked me up?..
i must've downloaded the wrong thing..
im fucking with ya..
fat fuck, ya shit sucks..
dont push up on me bra..
cuz i'll cut ya tits off..
to be darn hot..
for me its not an issue..
wannabe on top?..
u need a ladder with u...
ya shits gettin boo'd..
mine's is sick and smooth..
i'll stick and move..
while u stink and lose..
dont show son, ya gay..
im ending this now with no effort..
cuz noone can say..
this hoes better..
this herb is gay..
i herb herbs..
even merc will say..
i merked merc..

Mercules
June 24th, 2009, 04:43 PM

how many lines is that lol? whatever, check it..

Merc like a vampire, been around forever.. i aint new bud
but if i sucked as bad as you, i'd go and cop a pint of True Blood
fuckin pussy, go revaluate ya style some more
son ya Structure went out faster than that weak ass clothing store
god damn at ya style! kid u must be the worst
so what ya ya name is dots? dont put'em after every 2 words in ya verse
How ya expect ya lines to hit doing the 2-word thing?
shit, we can battle like that and I could beat ya verse by just saying "I WIN"
You aint a vet mu'fucka.. I be hating ya lies
see, i set the bar and you aint grown enough to patronize

g'nite

Genocide
June 24th, 2009, 04:52 PM

lmao -all i can say is this man, im not even breaking this one down --dots shyt was allright, sure... but murcules had me laughing pretty good over here -espescially when he said this simple shyt lmao

......"god damn at ya style! kid u must be the worst
so what ya ya name is dots? dont put'em after every 2 words in ya verse...

that was fuccin funny to me man

vote ------Mercules

NoDoze
June 24th, 2009, 05:04 PM

Yes, I agree with Gen, that line was the best of the whole battle. To funny.

I actually thought Dot came better then he has in the past. The ending sucked ass though, Herb herb and merc merc. BLAHHHH.

Anyway, even though DOT improved some, this wasnt close.

Winner Merc

David Lama
June 24th, 2009, 06:27 PM

yea mercmonster won this one easy

dots flow was choppy at times and his lines werent that hard. especially towards the middle to the end. its like he gave up

my votes for merc