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Certain
10-21-2013, 03:18 AM
http://i.imgur.com/uAJesXX.png
Season 2

Hi, all. We're returning to picture topics this week, with the theme being colors. You can use the color however you'd like in your verse, so be creative. We have our first championship match, too. Here's our matchups:

Title Match: Certain (4-0) vs. Mr. J (3-1)
Just Write (3-0) vs. Vividlyvague (3-1)
Zenland (2-2) vs. YDK (2-2)
Frank (2-2) vs. Innovator (2-2)
Vulgar (2-0) vs. Lexicon (1-1)
Adonis (2-1) vs. Mike Wrecka (1-3)
PancakeBrah (1-1) vs. breathless (1-2)
King Ra. (1-2) vs. symetrik (0-1)
Split Eight (0-1) vs. Lucifer (0-0)
Dominate (0-0) vs. TYSON (0-0)

Yes, Lucifer is the writer formerly known as Genocide.

And here are last week's results:

Zenland (2-2) beats King Ra. (1-2) 6-5
Adonis (2-1) beats Clutter Buck (1-1) 8-6
YDK (2-2) beats Mike Wrecka (1-3) 4-3
breathless (1-2) beats symetrik (0-1) 6-2
Mr. J (3-1) beats patrown (2-2) 5-0
Just Write (3-0) beats Objective (2-1) 6-0
Certain (4-0) beats Vividlyvague (3-1) 5-0
NYCSPITZ (2-2) and Frank (2-2) both fail to meet line limit
Lexicon (1-1) beats Storyteller (0-1) by no-show
PancakeBrah (1-1) beats Improvise (0-1) by no-show
Innovator (2-2) beats Scripter (1-3) by no-show

YDK
10-21-2013, 03:59 AM
Aha first to post lol

e11even
10-21-2013, 04:01 AM
Second. World's greatest underachiever. Ftw.

YDK
10-21-2013, 04:04 AM
Im going to bed, give me a good picture guys I feel inspired to tell a story no slick rick

Zen
10-21-2013, 07:24 AM
Adonis we battled last season and you won because you're a cocksucking piece of shit. And your verse was good. Mostly because you're a cocksucker though.

And breathless go fuck yourself you dumbdick turd faced fuck mouth. I don't even know you and you tell me to get the cock outta my cunt!? Take the cock outta my cunt!? You better be glad I'm peaceful or I'd e-fight you dawg. Wit cha ole stankin ass.

breathless
10-21-2013, 10:20 AM
It was actually meant to be an inoffensive razz because you were being whiny about thinking you had the inferior verse, and I voted for you, shitbiscuits

breathless
10-21-2013, 10:39 AM
And it was actually "your" cock, outta "your" cunt... As to imply hermaphroditism

Zen
10-21-2013, 11:01 AM
Did you think that message was really trying to be offensive and that I really didn't like you? What are you a girl or something? And when did I whine? Seriously.

Now I don't like you. Congratulations faggot.

breathless
10-21-2013, 11:10 AM
No
No
Don't make me quote em
That escalated quite quickly...

Jesus crabapples, are you also a frank alias?

Certain
10-21-2013, 11:10 AM
Calm down, guys.

Mike Wrecka
10-21-2013, 11:17 AM
Certain, i gotta run can you finish up the matchups. i think you get the idea of what im doing here


if not ill get at the rest in a few hours

Certain
10-21-2013, 11:56 AM
Done. Matchups have been edited into the OP here, too, so get your predictions in!

Zen
10-21-2013, 12:00 PM
No
No
Don't make me quote em
That escalated quite quickly...

Jesus crabapples, are you also a frank alias?
Since you're new here I'll understand that you don't understand my sense of humor so I forgive you for being offended by what I said. The rest of the league understand and ignores me 90 percent of the time. What I don't understand is how I "whined" and bitched at you for voting for me. Seriously. I was asleep when you voted and all I said was if I lose by one vote again ill be pissed since that happened last week too. So I ask again, what are you talking about?

breathless
10-21-2013, 12:12 PM
Ah, nah, I didn't mean you were bitching about me voting for you, and that one thing about losing by 1 vote was what I was going to quote...
Regardless though, i think we probly both misunderstood eachother's humor, totally didn't mean to come off dickish

Inno
10-21-2013, 12:22 PM
I just learned a new word.

Wan me to use it inna semtanmce here it go.

Breathless stop being dickish bro.

Ha!

Inno
10-21-2013, 12:23 PM
Zen your coming off a bit assholish man

breathless
10-21-2013, 12:33 PM
adding ish and ed to things has opened up the english language to an acceptable level of usefulishness

And really, blank, colored squares for topics? or is my computer broken? (btw, i now have pc access instead of just phoneternet so i will be more active)
if it is blank colors, that's straight, i can work with that, just wanted to make sure before i started writing

Certain
10-21-2013, 12:36 PM
Yes, colored squares. I think every color is pretty evocative of something or another.

Inno
10-21-2013, 12:41 PM
Ama ask one of franks alias' s what he would write in this instance.

Zen
10-21-2013, 12:47 PM
Zen your coming off a bit assholish man
Lol I was just joking at first then I got irritated. No harm done breathless I know it's hard to hear sarcasm when reading shit. My apologies. I love everybody.

Certain
10-21-2013, 12:47 PM
I'm not doing match previews in the mag, so:

Title Match: Certain (4-0) vs. Mr. J (3-1)
Happy hunting.

Just Write (3-0) vs. Vividlyvague (3-1)
Their styles are very, very different, and this is a clear-cut contender for battle of the week.

Zenland (2-2) vs. YDK (2-2)
Zenland killed it last week. I'd love to see YDK pin him against a very lucid story, though.

Frank (2-2) vs. Innovator (2-2)
He's probably mad about last week, right?

Vulgar (2-0) vs. Lexicon (1-1)
In another potential match of the week, Vulgar is scary while Lexicon probably still has some rust.

PancakeBrah (1-1) vs. breathless (1-2)
I predict this will be one of the shorter battles of the week, but that's absolutely not a knock on quality.

King Ra. (1-2) vs. symetrik (0-1)
I have to say I thought symetrik had a pretty nice debut. But Ra has drawn short straw and needs to win now.

Split Eight (0-1) vs. Lucifer (0-0)
Yet another great battle pits two open mic veterans. I'm giving Genocide the edge.

Dominate (0-0) vs. TYSON (0-0)
I've never read an open mic or topical verse from either, but Dominate is a solid battler.

Inno
10-21-2013, 12:49 PM
Frank. ..I swear to god I will win

Just Write
10-21-2013, 12:57 PM
Certain why wouldn't I be in the title match? We're the only undefeated people in the league. I'm not one to complain but I think that's kinda bullshit. Now that I got that out you won't hear any more from me about it... just sayin I've grown up playing competitive sports so I know how match-ups work.

Certain
10-21-2013, 12:58 PM
Certain why wouldn't I be in the title match? We're the only undefeated people in the league. I'm not one to complain but I think that's kinda bullshit. Now that I got that out you won't hear any more from me about it... just sayin I've grown up playing competitive sports so I know how match-ups work.

Mike Wrecka made the matchups. He has a formula based on strength of schedule. It's based on wins and meant to encourage people to participate in more weeks.

If you win this week, you'll get your title shot.

Just Write
10-21-2013, 01:01 PM
No worries bro, I'm really not one to complain, you won't hear anything else about it. Just had to put my thoughts out there. Good luck in your match Certain

Just Write
10-21-2013, 01:06 PM
Lol tell me why I clicked refresh on my phone like 4 times trying to get my picture to reload haha

Certain
10-21-2013, 01:07 PM
Lol tell me why I clicked refresh on my phone like 4 times trying to get my picture to reload haha

Ha. Yes, that's a black box. (CC: Vividlyvague)

breathless
10-21-2013, 01:16 PM
its all good, no hate... but, i ain't apologizing, fuck that, that shit's for the French

YDK
10-21-2013, 01:28 PM
Colored blocks tho? The moon, a red block, topic pickers are slacking hard yo

Zen
10-21-2013, 01:54 PM
Honestly the topics are cool because colors make us feel certain emotions just by looking at them. The problem will be I think will be voters saying "What does this verse have to do with green? or blue?" etc. But I don't give a fuck about that and that it'll actually be a pretty dope week.

Inno
10-21-2013, 02:11 PM
Moodring manifesto

My tittle

Adonis
10-21-2013, 02:27 PM
I guess we just signed me out huh??
Certain Mike Wrecka

Not down for a 3way but I dropped ample votes and won. Thanks for the bye week. Sure it was an accident but id rather not do a 3way

Certain
10-21-2013, 02:46 PM
I apologize. That's on me. But we may have a suitable solution.

e11even
10-21-2013, 02:58 PM
Ha. Yes, that's a black box.

quote of the week.

Frank
10-21-2013, 03:38 PM
WHO THE FUCK PICKED THOSE BORING ASS COLORS???????????

NIGGAS NEVER HAD THE CRAYOLA 64 PACK!!!???

YO COLORS HAVE COME A LONG WAY. SAD TO SEE THE CREATIVITY STIFLE LIKE THAT!!!!!

http://www.theboxdepot.com/images/standard-box-colors.jpg

Frank
10-21-2013, 03:40 PM
Frank. ..I swear to god I will win

fuck around and I'll make ya famous

symetrik
10-21-2013, 03:43 PM
WHO THE FUCK PICKED THOSE BORING ASS COLORS???????????

NIGGAS NEVER HAD THE CRAYOLA 64 PACK!!!???

YO COLORS HAVE COME A LONG WAY. SAD TO SEE THE CREATIVITY STIFLE LIKE THAT!!!!!

http://www.theboxdepot.com/images/standard-box-colors.jpg

You got Pistachio. Go nuts.

Frank
10-21-2013, 03:43 PM
Title Match: Certain (4-0) vs. Mr. J (3-1)
Just Write (3-0) vs. Vividlyvague (3-1)
Zenland (2-2) vs. YDK (2-2)
Frank (2-2) vs. Innovator (2-2)
Vulgar (2-0) vs. Lexicon (1-1)
PancakeBrah (1-1) vs. breathless (1-2)
King Ra. (1-2) vs. symetrik (0-1)
Split Eight (0-1) vs. Lucifer (0-0)
Dominate (0-0) vs. TYSON (0-0)

Dominate
10-21-2013, 04:03 PM
I guess we just signed me out huh??
Certain Mike Wrecka

Not down for a 3way but I dropped ample votes and won. Thanks for the bye week. Sure it was an accident but id rather not do a 3way

He can have my spot

If not I'll show

TYSON
10-21-2013, 04:29 PM
He can have my spot

If not I'll show

What your heart beating for? U scared!!!

Inno
10-21-2013, 04:38 PM
Frank

We got an easy one...maybe even to easy...hmmm

PancakeBrah
10-21-2013, 04:39 PM
Love is blindness

Dominate
10-21-2013, 04:43 PM
U a lame.

Stop.

(@ Tyson)

breathless
10-21-2013, 04:45 PM
is it just me or does the grey box for me and pancake look ever so slightly blue/green

King Ra.
10-21-2013, 04:51 PM
Congrats Zenland. A well deserved victory. I honestly should be 0-3 because I haven't really taken the time to put together my stories. It's an honor to have received props on my work and I feel I still have a ways to go with my writing.

Good luck in our match symetrik.

TYSON
10-21-2013, 05:04 PM
U a lame.

Stop.

(@ Tyson)

Pussy, why u trying to run then? U talked about my record at one point and now we going against each and u want to run. Bitch u moist if u don't show.

Just Write
10-21-2013, 05:08 PM
My battle record should be 4-4 not 3-4..

Dominate
10-21-2013, 05:19 PM
Pussy, why u trying to run then? U talked about my record at one point and now we going against each and u want to run. Bitch u moist if u don't show.

lmao yeah I saw who I was facing and that's why I don't want to show... u deluded faggot.

I had a fleeting desire to try topical last night when I signed up. That desire has evaporated this morning and the topic didn't help.

If you want to battle we can go regular text, 20 line pinkslip. Any time.

Zen
10-21-2013, 05:24 PM
This whole thread has had a negative vibe to it. It's my fault guys. Sorry.
King Ra. appreciate the props holmes. You came dope as hell my friend.

TYSON
10-21-2013, 05:28 PM
So u want me to go pink slip battle u after u re-nig on our topical battle? Fuck u pussy....

breathless
10-21-2013, 05:29 PM
Don't be whiny... Blame Canada

Dominate
10-21-2013, 05:30 PM
So u want me to go pink slip battle u after u re-nig on our topical battle? Fuck u pussy....

If you'll agree to a 20 line pinkslip regular battle I'll show for the topical as well

TYSON
10-21-2013, 05:30 PM
Australians are pussys

Dominate
10-21-2013, 05:32 PM
So you don't want to pinkslip?

TYSON
10-21-2013, 05:33 PM
If you'll agree to a 20 line pinkslip regular battle I'll show for the topical as well

No pink slip because I don't battle but I will do a regular battle if u show. We can have a sign/avy battle if that would satisfy?

Adonis
10-21-2013, 05:35 PM
I like pink vagay

Not sure if this helps, thought id contribute

Anyone else colorblind?

Dominate
10-21-2013, 05:35 PM
Now who's the pussy?

You pussy

Don't address me again until you're ready to sack up

TYSON
10-21-2013, 05:39 PM
I'm not the one running from a battle that is already set.....I offered the sig/avy battle

Dominate
10-21-2013, 05:42 PM
You still think I'm running from YOU

Lmao

It's a topical. Not adversarial at all.

Sig/avy doesn't satisfy me because obviously it doesn't bother you one bit to look like a lame faggot. Pink slip or nothing.

breathless
10-21-2013, 05:43 PM
I like pink vagay

Not sure if this helps, thought id contribute

Anyone else colorblind?

only racially...

but, how you know it's pink vagay? you could be poundin a wrinkley old greybush and never know, fucking botox

Adonis
10-21-2013, 05:46 PM
C'mon son. Clearly I have a hightened sense of smell.. I can sniff out aa ugly vag with ease

TYSON
10-21-2013, 05:49 PM
You still think I'm running from YOU

Lmao

It's a topical. Not adversarial at all.

Sig/avy doesn't satisfy me because obviously it doesn't bother you one bit to look like a lame faggot. Pink slip or nothing.

To me it is son. That's what I do, well did. So I see this is where my skills trump yours. U pretty much are proving that...

Mike Wrecka
10-21-2013, 06:02 PM
Adonis , you will be facing me this week. the battle will be up in a few moments.

Dominate TYSON, your battle is still on. if either of you no show that's on you.

Mike Wrecka
10-21-2013, 06:06 PM
Adonis , that is if you would like to battle me. let me know. I just red some of your other threads

TYSON
10-21-2013, 06:11 PM
O I'm showing

Mr. J
10-21-2013, 06:29 PM
I love the smell coming from this league

Dominate
10-21-2013, 06:52 PM
To me it is son. That's what I do, well did. So I see this is where my skills trump yours. U pretty much are proving that...

It's not adversarial. Especially when the topic is so broad it can and often does become apples vs oranges. That's why you see so many topical battles closing with 2 vote margins when each individual voter has a firm choice and doesn't say that it's close. Not so in regular battles. There are winners and losers in those.

But this is bordering on an intelligent discussion now when all I really wanna do is call you a faggot. You faggot.

Mike W is going against Adonis so I will show for our battle for the sake of the league. This is going to be very embarrassing for you if you lose.

TYSON
10-21-2013, 07:04 PM
It's not adversarial. Especially when the topic is so broad it can and often does become apples vs oranges. That's why you see so many topical battles closing with 2 vote margins when each individual voter has a firm choice and doesn't say that it's close. Not so in regular battles. There are winners and losers in those.

But this is bordering on an intelligent discussion now when all I really wanna do is call you a faggot. You faggot.

Mike W is going against Adonis so I will show for our battle for the sake of the league. This is going to be very embarrassing for you if you lose.

Touche

Dominate
10-21-2013, 07:24 PM
No, it won't.

This is literally the first topical I'll have written in more than five years, prior to which I wrote maybe 3 in total. I probably will lose but it doesn't mean shit to me. Obviously it means a lot to you though, which is why I'm saying... you'd better hope you win.

YDK
10-21-2013, 07:25 PM
i gotta brilliant idea for my topic, i'm posting my image so i can edit my verse into it later since i cant do it at home Zenland and Certain

TYSON
10-21-2013, 07:35 PM
No, it won't.

This is literally the first topical I'll have written in more than five years, prior to which I wrote maybe 3 in total. I probably will lose but it doesn't mean shit to me. Obviously it means a lot to you though, which is why I'm saying... you'd better hope you win.

I just would like to battle u. Fuck your excuses. And a topical battle is still a battle chump...

TYSON
10-21-2013, 07:36 PM
Go check in

King Ra.
10-21-2013, 07:36 PM
Dominate-TYSON BOTW tho'. I called it.

Zen
10-21-2013, 07:37 PM
Guys, I think I might be able to fuck a jehovah's witness bitch this weekend. I'm sure that'll be interesting.

King Ra.
10-21-2013, 07:39 PM
She gon burn you, Zen. Leakin out that holy water on your devilish ways.

Zen
10-21-2013, 07:42 PM
Lol I was thinking that was a definite possibility, but they always come and knock on my door so I figured I'd knock on one of theirs for a change......See what I did there? But yeah I hope she doesn't pull the whole "God doesn't want me to fuck" bullshit because I will legit snap.

Adonis
10-21-2013, 07:52 PM
Adonis , that is if you would like to battle me. let me know. I just red some of your other threads

If you want to participate this week I'm always able to write.

Just keep in mine I am colorblind, but id just let wifey explain the color and write a sick concept based off of that.

So, if you don't mind a bye I don't. If you want a battle I'm down..

Dominate
10-21-2013, 07:58 PM
I just would like to battle u. Fuck your excuses. And a topical battle is still a battle chump...

Obviously it means a lot to you though, which is why I'm saying... you'd better hope you win.

Mike Wrecka
10-21-2013, 08:04 PM
you battle guys sure liven up the chat thread

Dominate
10-21-2013, 08:06 PM
Always glad to help out lol

Just Write
10-21-2013, 08:10 PM
you battle guys sure liven up the chat thread

^^^^

King Ra.
10-21-2013, 08:20 PM
Feelings in question.

Adonis
10-21-2013, 08:30 PM
@Rocket Ninja Pirate Slayer


What's up with that anus??


Mhmhmhm

breathless
10-21-2013, 08:47 PM
Lol I was thinking that was a definite possibility, but they always come and knock on my door so I figured I'd knock on one of theirs for a change......See what I did there? But yeah I hope she doesn't pull the whole "God doesn't want me to fuck" bullshit because I will legit snap.

if she don't pull the god owns my puss shit, that means she ain't a real jay-z fan

"I would like you to take my watchtower"

PancakeBrah
10-21-2013, 09:17 PM
Mike Wrecka I'll have the previews to you tonight.

YDK
10-21-2013, 09:36 PM
Guys, I think I might be able to fuck a jehovah's witness bitch this weekend. I'm sure that'll be interesting.

if you fuck her, while your fuckin her, tell her satan wants her soul. i bet she squirts

breathless
10-21-2013, 09:37 PM
I think I'm gonna try to knock this one out tonight... I quit smoking weed for a job, made it 20 hours so far and realized that sobriety is the cocaine of reality... Sleep ain't happenin for a minute

YDK
10-21-2013, 09:40 PM
zzzquil an a shot of vodka bro you'll sleep good

PancakeBrah
10-21-2013, 10:06 PM
got that floating holiday tomorrow. currently off that woodford reserve. playing madden, bout to write this mag thing, then write. maybe. probably.

Just Write
10-21-2013, 10:23 PM
I really like my topic guys! I mean OMG there are so many different directions I could take it! :D

Zen
10-21-2013, 10:38 PM
if you fuck her, while your fuckin her, tell her satan wants her soul. i bet she squirts
Lol I just convinced her to smoke weed. Her church is gonna call me satan I'm sure.

Certain
10-21-2013, 10:54 PM
TYSON vs. Dominate is going to be the battle of the week.

Split
10-21-2013, 10:57 PM
Lol I just convinced her to smoke weed. Her church is gonna call me satan I'm sure.

http://i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/012/297/9uNwm.jpg

Zen
10-21-2013, 11:00 PM
http://i2.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/012/297/9uNwm.jpg
Ahahahaha

In the year 2020 it will be 4/20 for a fuckin month.

Certain
10-21-2013, 11:08 PM
Best song of the year?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-TrxrKyQMXc

Adonis
10-21-2013, 11:12 PM
I like how its a girl and he calls her faggot



Who had the "bright" idea of these topics?? You know how I know you're gay? Your topic choice is a raindbow

Certain
10-21-2013, 11:13 PM
I like how its a girl and he calls her faggot



Who had the "bright" idea of these topics?? You know how I know you're gay? Your topic choice is a raindbow

That'd be your opponent.

And honestly, I really like the idea.

NYCSPITZ
10-21-2013, 11:37 PM
dom you'll be low top tier at topicals

TYSON
10-21-2013, 11:38 PM
The only problem I see is getting people to see how your topic relates to the color. I think I got mine figured out tho.

Zen
10-21-2013, 11:41 PM
The only problem I see is getting people to see how your topic relates to the color. I think I got mine figured out tho.
I said the same thing earlier. If people don't understand mine well that'll be alright I'm used to it by now.

TYSON
10-21-2013, 11:47 PM
Purple corps. On mine....wait was there a purple lantern corp? I hope it wasnt the sapphire ones...

Dominate
10-21-2013, 11:49 PM
dom you'll be low top tier at topicals

thank you, that would be quite agreeable to me

YDK
10-22-2013, 12:17 AM
Tbh if ppl don't understand my topic this week, they're morons

Just Write
10-22-2013, 12:21 AM
we gotta sawoo world series bitches

B's up!

You know your topic is orange and not red right?

Adonis
10-22-2013, 12:27 AM
You know your topic is orange and not red right?



Haha..my wife woulda said that when I show her.. fyi, she's providing the concept this week.

TYSON
10-22-2013, 12:29 AM
Make me put my kswiss on

Just Write
10-22-2013, 12:38 AM
Haha..my wife woulda said that when I show her.. fyi, she's providing the concept this week.

Ooo oooh write about an orange & a banana, and have the last line say "orange ya glad I didn't say banana again"

Mr. J
10-22-2013, 02:47 AM
My record is backwards





so the devil speaks

YDK
10-22-2013, 03:19 AM
Heat has been brought, good luck Zenland

Zen
10-22-2013, 07:15 AM
Dope ill drop as soon as possible my friend.

NYCSPITZ
10-22-2013, 09:01 AM
thank you, that would be quite agreeable to me

Cool no problem my old friend. Your only downfall is gonna be you're gonna get the topic snow white and instead of regaling us with a beautiful permutation of the story you'll create a bar for bar battle btwn snow white and the witch with the dwarves as running commentary

Certain
10-22-2013, 10:19 AM
Cool no problem my old friend. Your only downfall is gonna be you're gonna get the topic snow white and instead of regaling us with a beautiful permutation of the story you'll create a bar for bar battle btwn snow white and the witch with the dwarves as running commentary

I'd rather read that.

Darth Yoda
10-22-2013, 12:07 PM
go0o0o0o certain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! woooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! goo certain!!!!!!!!!! (i uh cheerleader)

Certain
10-22-2013, 12:19 PM
go0o0o0o certain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! woooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! goo certain!!!!!!!!!! (i uh cheerleader)

http://i.imgur.com/4Avs0QD.jpg

YDK
10-22-2013, 01:05 PM
Lmao

Just Write
10-22-2013, 03:23 PM
No mag?

Certain
10-22-2013, 03:29 PM
Like three of the first four weeks, the magazine should be up tonight (on a Tuesday).

e11even
10-22-2013, 04:45 PM
Purple corps. On mine....wait was there a purple lantern corp? I hope it wasnt the sapphire ones...


indigo.

e11even
10-22-2013, 04:51 PM
btw. good luck Just Write. i'm in between concepts right now. thinking about a merge 'tween the two. i'm posting late this time.

King Ra.
10-22-2013, 06:09 PM
I'm aiming for an HOF verse(s) the rest of the season. You've been warned. Holler.

Mr. J
10-22-2013, 06:17 PM
that pic looks like the imps from Chrono Trigger

Zen
10-22-2013, 06:43 PM
Ya'll don't wanna hit me, ya'll just wanna dance.

e11even
10-22-2013, 07:36 PM
Ya'll don't wanna hit me, ya'll just wanna dance.


two step, to be exact. :P

King Ra.
10-22-2013, 08:13 PM
Niggas tryna waltz and shit now.

Mike Wrecka
10-22-2013, 08:47 PM
who wants to be interviewed for the mag? first interesting person to PM me wins. go

Mike Wrecka
10-22-2013, 09:05 PM
ok im still waiting. once I find someone I will post it here

symetrik
10-22-2013, 09:09 PM
who wants to be interviewed for the mag? first interesting person to PM me wins. go

yup

e11even
10-22-2013, 09:32 PM
yup


fuck.

symetrik
10-22-2013, 09:35 PM
fuck.

advantage of a lazy day, sitting here getting notifications and refreshing pages.

e11even
10-22-2013, 09:36 PM
true. i'm sure i'll eventually get fired tryna stay up to date at work lol.

YDK
10-22-2013, 11:57 PM
Mac n cheese mixed wit tuna...I crushed a box an a can lol

Frank
10-23-2013, 03:21 AM
yo you frail homie...... you get stuffed off a 6 oz can of tunafish and call it a night you light weight ass nigga - you don't got enough stamina to fuck that hoe like I would. Dog I'll be in that shit with 4000 calories to burn off in that shit. You bloated skinny dog .........past that bitch off cuz`

Adonis
10-23-2013, 09:17 AM
Title Match: Certain (4-0) vs. Mr. J (3-1) - Certain

Just Write (3-0) vs. Vividlyvague (3-1) - JDUB

Zenland (2-2) vs. YDK (2-2) - this one should be really good.. YDK

Frank (2-2) vs. Innovator (2-2)-curios to see what controversery can frank stir up this week. Frank

Vulgar (2-0) vs. Lexicon (1-1)-vulgar

Adonis (2-1) vs. Mike Wrecka (1-3)-adonis

PancakeBrah (1-1) vs. breathless (1-2) --cake

King Ra. (1-2) vs. symetrik (0-1)-king ra

Split Eight (0-1) vs. Lucifer (0-0)-double no show

Dominate (0-0) vs. TYSON (0-0)-dominate

Split
10-23-2013, 09:56 AM
Title Match: Certain (4-0) vs. Mr. J (3-1)
>interdasting first champ match.
Certain is more directed, which doesn't matter with these topics. kinda wanna give my boy Q the W for out of the box thinking and mass appeal of rhyme patterns. think Certain Will take this cos of experience.

Just Write (3-0) vs. Vividlyvague (3-1)
> Just Write is on a murdering spree. Vivid is on a calculated serial killer MO, viv will vivisect.no dex

Zenland (2-2) vs. YDK (2-2)
>Zen got this. YDK is historically weak in the league for whatever reason.. writes for himself and not to win, which equals wins.

Frank (2-2) vs. Innovator (2-2)
>Frank mad. Inno will champ the league this season but only for a week. Frank will win


Vulgar (2-0) vs. Lexicon (1-1)
> botw unless North is busy with his busyness. Got Lexicon if both come dope.

Adonis (2-1) vs. Mike Wrecka (1-3)
> Adonis. mW is too consistent. Yes, you read that right. Writes to too many constraints, usually self imposed. See challenge league victory.

PancakeBrah (1-1) vs. breathless (1-2)
>cake will win, breathless is a n00b lolol

King Ra. (1-2) vs. symetrik (0-1)
>symetrik, can't see RA liking this topic very much

Split Eight (0-1) vs. Lucifer (0-0)
>good luck... writing in like two hours, possibly.

Dominate (0-0) vs. TYSON (0-0)
> Dom will no show. Let's be real. Still would have Tyson winning otherwise.

breathless
10-23-2013, 10:52 AM
New to this site perhaps, wait until I actually spend more than an hour or so writing... Been doing this for over a decade now...

I believe I may have filled my mobile soundcloud, keep getting upload errors, made a new account and it worked first time...
Audio from last week...
http://soundcloud.com/dan-courser/sounds-from-wednesday-morning

PancakeBrah
10-23-2013, 02:32 PM
If there's a week where no one does that homo ass centering/aligning of their verses I'll send you each a dollar.

So fucking corny, hackneyed, and pompous.

Mike Wrecka
10-23-2013, 04:09 PM
I am not a fan of centering my verses but some top caliber writers have always wrote like that and always will write like that.

it feels more old school topical to me

PancakeBrah
10-23-2013, 04:23 PM
On this point we will forever disagree. To me it is tacky no matter the caliber of the piece or writer.

breathless
10-23-2013, 05:27 PM
If there's a week where no one does that homo ass centering/aligning of their verses I'll send you each a dollar.

So fucking corny, hackneyed, and pompous.

But it looks so pretty... I feel the same way actually, but I did my alignment funky for a purpose, which no one will get anyway...

Frank
10-23-2013, 07:24 PM
Innovator How are you? You ready to cross over to the other Tier, my brother? Take my hand I will guide you to middle tier where you can flourish. Give me your word you will drop your best verse and I will do the same.

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26770

PancakeBrah
10-23-2013, 07:27 PM
I'm writing now.

I'm writing to this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPSSagaJNSw

Inno
10-23-2013, 07:29 PM
Innovator How are you? You ready to cross over to the other Tier, my brother? Take my hand I will guide you to middle tier where you can flourish. Give me your word you will drop your best verse and I will do the same.

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=26770

Ive beaten you before.

Ask red glare.

Im writing now.

King Ra.
10-23-2013, 07:34 PM
Well damn.

Frank
10-23-2013, 07:46 PM
link me to that

i gotta see that

King Ra.
10-23-2013, 07:55 PM
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=4408

Frank won that 4-3.

breathless
10-23-2013, 08:03 PM
I'm writing now.

I'm writing to this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jPSSagaJNSw


Nice, diggin the dissonance, it was oddly pleasant... I wrote mine to this...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j1aA4CLwcPA

Mike Wrecka
10-23-2013, 08:33 PM
you guys have inspired me. im writing to a beat this week. I need to get off the god damn spoken word kick.

Split
10-23-2013, 08:34 PM
Transitional Joint- Black Milk


do u even instrumentals

Inno
10-23-2013, 09:04 PM
link me to that

i gotta see that

Let me find it...

Inno
10-23-2013, 09:25 PM
Frank

cant find it..ria got rid of all the topical shit..i cant find it

but I know I won that battle...

NYCSPITZ
10-23-2013, 10:30 PM
lol niggas writing to music and shit...interesting...

Adonis
10-23-2013, 10:41 PM
Wrote to a beat my brother made

Will post his album after my AA meeting yo

Split
10-23-2013, 10:43 PM
Beat the AA out of my brother

Will post the meeting after making this album yo

breathless
10-23-2013, 10:50 PM
Beat the AA out of my brother

Will post the meeting after making this album yo

Facebooked that shit

breathless
10-23-2013, 10:55 PM
lol niggas writing to music and shit...interesting...

Honestly, that's all I do, this text style is a drastic change from the usual for me, especially the story stuff I.e. names and places, typically all my songs have been fairly personal, I do this more of a release than a want to be the best

Certain
10-23-2013, 11:10 PM
I'm writing with this in mind:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J7lgner6IO0

PancakeBrah
10-23-2013, 11:12 PM
Summerteeth is good. I like Summerteeth. Quite a bit.

Certain
10-23-2013, 11:15 PM
Summerteeth is good. I like Summerteeth. Quite a bit.

I think it's much better than anything else Wilco has done. Yankee Foxtrot Hotel is one of the more overrated albums of the past 20 years. It's good, but it's a little boring.

PancakeBrah
10-23-2013, 11:21 PM
oh em gee i totally agree

Vulgar
10-23-2013, 11:32 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jlzI3_QADWc

Certain
10-23-2013, 11:37 PM
Vulgar, you're the most interesting man on Netcees.co.

I can just imagine you flipping through The Condition of the Working Class in England for the 14th time with rave music blasting and a PBS special report on in the background.

breathless
10-24-2013, 12:42 AM
I'm watching Mexican lesbians golf on the Esquire channel...

Split
10-24-2013, 12:49 AM
I'm watching Mexican lesbians golf on the Esquire channel...

o fuck


are they the hot lesbians? or like dinner party, tax-attorneys-met-at-a-polio-convention lesbians?

Split
10-24-2013, 12:52 AM
fuck it. im gonna go get hammered in Everett

e11even
10-24-2013, 01:18 AM
I have a confession: Netcees is my primetime television... that's both depressing and hilarious. fuck my life.

Certain
10-24-2013, 01:19 AM
I wouldn't do it, but it'd be kind of hilarious to go and change the colors by one shade on every battle right now.

breathless
10-24-2013, 01:26 AM
o fuck


are they the hot lesbians? or like dinner party, tax-attorneys-met-at-a-polio-convention lesbians?
I'm assuming you meant polo convention, as this is no longer 1938, but yea, their appearance definitely entailed artificial insemination disability babies, not the normal thing to fap to, but, HBO ain't started the soft core yet

Mr. J
10-24-2013, 01:54 AM
Lovely this dissected web we wove

Adonis
10-24-2013, 02:06 AM
I wouldn't do it, but it'd be kind of hilarious to go and change the colors by one shade on every battle right now.

Oh this shit got me good

Adonis
10-24-2013, 02:43 AM
I hate this fuckin Topic though

Never have issues writing, so uninspired but...Almost done

YDK
10-24-2013, 02:43 AM
What the problem is Split Eight
How I always come weak in the leagues when I've reached the playoffs or semi finals every time I've competed in one? That goes for topical leagues 1-2 punch an the story telling tourney lol I do write for myself in most cases but don't compete to lose
Fuckin butthead I hope you get a chickpea stuck in your nose

YDK
10-24-2013, 02:44 AM
Im gettin the feeling I'm underrated like a mug up in heyaah

breathless
10-24-2013, 03:01 AM
Im gettin the feeling I'm underrated like a mug up in heyaah

It's probly because you actually make music...

YDK
10-24-2013, 03:14 AM
Watchu mean?

Certain
10-24-2013, 03:24 AM
breathless, calm down. You're two votes in. Many people have made bigger turns.

Frank
10-24-2013, 03:28 AM
@king ra goodlooks son.

little homie inno false repping. claiming a red glare victory could get you murked B

breathless
10-24-2013, 03:42 AM
This being a text league, as far as I can see, people want two names and a city with some stupid plot twist that m night shyamalamadingdongus could script while on ketamine... You seem, at least write like you do, verses that would still stand in audio. That's always been my problem with text leagues, people bitch about not catching the "flow" because they aren't proficient in it, and then give negative opinions because we aren't allowed to explain/audiate ourselves, yet still get labeled as needing to improve because fuckers are stuck in text format... And we also aren't given a set of symbols to denotedissonant syllables, expressions, run on lines, stops, extra "jazz style timing" ect. .. A pm with Adonis I had for example... I explained exactly why people dont catch his flow, and all he could say is... Well, thats not how I would write it it in real life, but he couldn't provide how it would sound/read in real life because these text heads are stuck on how they already want to interpret things, rather than how the writers want them to be interpreted

breathless
10-24-2013, 03:43 AM
Btw, DQed or not this week, I will still vote unbiasedly

Certain
10-24-2013, 03:49 AM
A very wide variety of styles and approaches to content have been successful here, breathless. I don't recall many verses by Season 1 champion dead man, widely regarded as the best writer here, that included names. He often eschews storytelling entirely. And most people are not voting based on flow as much as rhyme scheme because, as you point out, flow can be interpreted in many ways.

I'll leave it up to Mike Wrecka, but I know we'd all prefer not to disqualify anyone. Please, calm down, though.

e11even
10-24-2013, 04:00 AM
Just Write when you dopping?

... I'm tryna synchronize...

YDK
10-24-2013, 04:05 AM
breathless stop comparing text to audio bro, I don't write to make songs out of then therefore they wont always flow like it. I wrote an entire book of poetry an I'd say 98% of it isn't written like I would speak it or "rap" it. This is a competitive writing league on a rap site not a written rap contest ya feel me? There is a difference in everyone's style, the best overall verse usually wins. Story verses aren't need at all but they're more relatable to the readers normally so if a good story is against a good metaphor it just depends on originality and execution not on which a more thoroughly described story with character development imagery or anything else, its just personal preference and honestly metaphorical verses or symbolic verses are generally harder to execute by nature, its just a part of writing bro, but trust me stick with it and you'll grow as a writer

Zen
10-24-2013, 07:39 AM
All I'm saying is I write topicals and my shit would still sound good on a beat.

breathless
10-24-2013, 08:39 AM
Oh alcohol, how I didn't miss thee, sadly though, I agree with everything I shouldn't have said, to me, first and foremost, this is a rap league, just being text doesnt change that, otherwise this league should be in a poetry section

PancakeBrah
10-24-2013, 08:55 AM
My flow was better. Rhymes were better. My story didn't have a twist. You're a butthurt faggot with a simple style trying to make yourself out to be Bob Dylan. Fuck your swaying, loser.

Zen
10-24-2013, 08:57 AM
All I'm saying is I write topicals and my shit would still sound good on a beat.
Foh real. Zenmaster Fresh dawg.

Split
10-24-2013, 09:21 AM
This being a text league, as far as I can see, people want two names and a city with some stupid plot twist that m night shyamalamadingdongus could script while on ketamine... You seem, at least write like you do, verses that would still stand in audio. That's always been my problem with text leagues, people bitch about not catching the "flow" because they aren't proficient in it, and then give negative opinions because we aren't allowed to explain/audiate ourselves, yet still get labeled as needing to improve because fuckers are stuck in text format... And we also aren't given a set of symbols to denotedissonant syllables, expressions, run on lines, stops, extra "jazz style timing" ect. .. A pm with Adonis I had for example... I explained exactly why people dont catch his flow, and all he could say is... Well, thats not how I would write it it in real life, but he couldn't provide how it would sound/read in real life because these text heads are stuck on how they already want to interpret things, rather than how the writers want them to be interpreted

Sure, we are. It's called punctuation.

If you stick with a rhyme pattern, or general cadence, your reader will pick up on the 'flow'.

No matter how slow or fast you read a bar, the vowel sounds, hard and soft consonants, assonance/alliteration/ etc. all fall in the same order relative to one another.


sometimes you'll run into people who don't get your rhyming, and theres nothing you can do. but i will say that between when I started writing and now, ive developed more of a sense for flow...


that being said, bad flow only negatively affects your verse when the opponent does it really well, or you had very simplistic or dropped rhymes.

in any case, patience and an open mind will get you far

I MEANT POLIO CONVENTION.

YDK i dont believe in chickpeas

YDK
10-24-2013, 10:00 AM
Are you allowed to not believe in chickpeas lol

Certain
10-24-2013, 10:45 AM
Chickpeas are delicious.

Mr. J, I'm probably going to drop pretty late.

PancakeBrah
10-24-2013, 10:49 AM
Can I write a whole essay swaying Certain? Seems like the reasonable and mature thing to do and allowable in this league.

Mike Wrecka
10-24-2013, 10:54 AM
ok what did i miss? investigating sway accusation now

YDK
10-24-2013, 11:06 AM
Fuck a sway post, I read both verses an tbh pancake got it either way I just haven't had tome to explain a vote yet

YDK
10-24-2013, 11:07 AM
Chickpeas are delicious.

Mr. J, I'm probably going to drop pretty late.

Yes they are, it takes a horrible person. To not believe in chickpeas

Mike Wrecka
10-24-2013, 11:09 AM
Hummus is my jam for like the last month. just started eating it and im addicted

PancakeBrah
10-24-2013, 11:10 AM
ok what did i miss? investigating sway accusation now

Certain deleted it. Split has it quoted in a post.

Im not calling for a DQ because I want voter feedback but it rustled my jimmies.

Certain
10-24-2013, 11:11 AM
I deleted the more egregious of the two sway posts. The second one seemed more like a philosophical debate.

Mike Wrecka
10-24-2013, 11:13 AM
ok i saw it. i can see deleted posts as well. the battle will stay open as per Pancakebrahs request.

Certain
10-24-2013, 11:14 AM
I'm going to write next week's Certain's Corner about flow and rhyme scheme.

Mike Wrecka
10-24-2013, 11:15 AM
Certain , Beck is the shit. I reviewed that Guero album for Newsday. i really enjoyed it

Certain
10-24-2013, 11:18 AM
I like Guero but love Sea Change and Odelay.

Clutter Buck
10-24-2013, 11:18 AM
I'm going to write next week's Certain's Corner about flow and rhyme scheme.

please do as it seems some haven't grasped what others are doing and doing far beyond their opponents capabilities

PancakeBrah
10-24-2013, 11:27 AM
please do as it seems some haven't grasped what others are doing and doing far beyond their opponents capabilities

Explain and pontificate Larsingtonious

e11even
10-24-2013, 12:40 PM
Swaying is gay. When ppl didn't catch my meanings I almost lost patience, but really its the writer's job to decide how attainable the point and main idea will be. Imo. If you don't know how to get across to voters, maybe you're not doing it right. Get better at wwriting and the pieces will speak for themselves.

Mr. J
10-24-2013, 12:50 PM
Chickpeas are delicious.

Mr. J, I'm probably going to drop pretty late.

I might too...if not I'll need an ext due to fatherly tendencies Certain

Adonis
10-24-2013, 12:58 PM
please do as it seems some haven't grasped what others are doing and doing far beyond their opponents capabilities

This guy with yet another slight at me

Go sulk in the corner some more, maybe then you'll grow up



Getting butt hurt over a fucking topical league because people dont "comprehend" your talent level

A bit full of ourselves are we?

fagot ass cracker

Inno
10-24-2013, 01:08 PM
Nice!!!

Fuck that saltine yo

Adonis
10-24-2013, 01:51 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/2ngcrvp.jpg

YDK
10-24-2013, 02:07 PM
I'm a cracker an I'll be damned if a drunk dude gonna start using racial slurs outta malice

Clutter Buck
10-24-2013, 03:28 PM
Explain and pontificate Larsingtonious

There are still some people in this league who throw around the term 'rhyme scheme' and by it all they mean is multies. A scheme has structure to it, ABBA etc, there are many people in this league who don't adhere to a strict rhyme scheme yet it gets commented on as a 'rhymescheme' just because they carry a multi string on at the end of a sentence.

People are calling it something it isn't.

Worse still, in my opinion, are the writers and readers that still rate single-syllable or two-syllable rhymes in a league with some of the nets best writers at present in it. From a technical aspect, the mechanics are majorly important in what I look for in a verse, equal to originality. My own mother could write a story with only having to rhyme one syllable, or sometimes not at all, and I feel the superior technical writing ability in this format should hold equal respect with originality. Single syllable rhymers need to step their game up, it's horrible to see, especially in their votes when they miss half the technical aspects going on because them themselves aren't able to do it and don't realise the technical difficulty behind what they are reading.

Long story short, there is no fucking way Adonis outwrote me in any format. Ever. I had the more original take, far superior rhyme scheme, mechanics way beyond his skill set, writers voice, pacing, you name it.

I pissed off a lot of voters by telling them they sucked in the week before my matchup, and they returned the favour by voting against me when they got the chance.

I've done this 10+ years, I know when I won, and know when I lost a fair one. I was robbed on that shit. All the voters who know what they're looking at gave me the win. The low tiers didn't.

Case closed.

PancakeBrah
10-24-2013, 03:29 PM
I agree with almost all of that. Well said!

Clutter Buck
10-24-2013, 03:29 PM
This guy with yet another slight at me

Go sulk in the corner some more, maybe then you'll grow up



Getting butt hurt over a fucking topical league because people dont "comprehend" your talent level

A bit full of ourselves are we?

fagot ass cracker

I would hand you your ass in any topic on any forum at any time, pussy.

Keep posting all friendly with people up in the chat thread so you can vote for each other.

I do me.

I ain't here to make friends.

Adonis
10-24-2013, 03:51 PM
I'm a cracker an I'll be damned if a drunk dude gonna start using racial slurs outta malice



Chill guy

Take it how you may but calling a white dude cracker ain't really racist to me.

And clutter sweatie cake, you're sad. Def beefed with half the league easily

Anyone can beat anyone @ anytime on any site

My thing is I beat you here. Mmmmmm

Mike Wrecka
10-24-2013, 03:55 PM
complaining about voters after a loss is never a good look. your better than that Lars

patrown
10-24-2013, 04:08 PM
colors were a great idea.

Mike Wrecka
10-24-2013, 04:09 PM
colors were a great idea.

much appreciated

Inno
10-24-2013, 04:28 PM
Swing away let the sway fall where it may
1, 2, 3 see scheme is free from the dismay
So hey...take it for what its worth.
Beating a dead hprse..is beating a dead horse.

Yo

Adonis
10-24-2013, 04:56 PM
Inno for prez

Zen
10-24-2013, 05:05 PM
Everyone here gets pissed or at least upset when they're voted against. If you say you don't, you're a liar. I've made the mistake of calling out voters before and honestly felt like a dick right afterwards. If you lose, you lost. Period. You don't like the voting then don't compete.

Adonis
10-24-2013, 05:59 PM
Everyone here gets pissed or at least upset when they're voted against. If you say you don't, you're a liar. I've made the mistake of calling out voters before and honestly felt like a dick right afterwards. If you lose, you lost. Period. You don't like the voting then don't compete.

I get mad every time I lose but at the same time if I know I lost because the other verse was better I don't mind

But I also realize that voting is based off preference and that flow and cadence will nearly never be the same as my writers voice. I've lost probably over 40 matches in my life, and I know there is zero point carrying resentment towards voters.

Although it took time to learn that, I was once an even bigger asshole and just bitched non stop until I ran my first league, and then it simply all changed

Split
10-24-2013, 06:20 PM
and it's true that the clouds just hung around, like black Cadillacs outside a funeral

King Ra.
10-24-2013, 06:25 PM
Everyone here gets pissed or at least upset when they're voted against.

Not true, Zenmaster. I honestly don't get upset at any votes against me nor even after a loss. If I do get upset, it's at myself for not writing my best when I could. But I hold no grudges against voters nor against opponents after I lose. I like the votes against me because I can take the criticism and use it to make my next drop better.

S'all about elevating, man. You the Zenmaster. You should know this!!!

Certain
10-24-2013, 06:37 PM
I'd say I've probably been upset with half my losses in general. That's how I feel here, too. I still can't figure out what happened in my first loss.

Zen
10-24-2013, 08:00 PM
Not true, Zenmaster. I honestly don't get upset at any votes against me nor even after a loss. If I do get upset, it's at myself for not writing my best when I could. But I hold no grudges against voters nor against opponents after I lose. I like the votes against me because I can take the criticism and use it to make my next drop better.

S'all about elevating, man. You the Zenmaster. You should know this!!!
I disagree. I refuse to believe my writing is anything less than perfect...Lol but on the real I get upset when I'm voted against and ill look at some criticism and if I agree with it ill change it, if I don't I ain't changing shit lol.

Btw this weeks topic is kickin my ass.

YDK
10-24-2013, 08:00 PM
Certain You didn't get enough votes lol

YDK
10-24-2013, 08:04 PM
I disagree. I refuse to believe my writing is anything less than perfect...Lol but on the real I get upset when I'm voted against and ill look at some criticism and if I agree with it ill change it, if I don't I ain't changing shit lol.

Btw this weeks topic is kickin my ass.

Lol I'm the same way man, like "those fucks completely missed the point to that entire verse how can I trust anything else they say"

Mr. J
10-24-2013, 08:14 PM
2 votes down Certain...I'm going to need that ext.



reality beckons

King Ra.
10-24-2013, 08:24 PM
Certain symetrik going to need an extension.

symetrik
10-24-2013, 08:30 PM
Oh, you posted in here. Hmm.
I'll allowed ext. this time, no biggy.

For future reference, I don't allow extensions.

Certain
10-24-2013, 08:33 PM
symetrik, this site's standard policy is extensions are automatically granted upon request. It took some getting used to for me, too.

symetrik
10-24-2013, 08:36 PM
symetrik, this site's standard policy is extensions are automatically granted upon request. It took some getting used to for me, too.

Grimy, do not dig. Why not just deadline Friday, then?

However, you're good to go King Ra, mandatory or not. Good luck, bruv.

Vulgar
10-24-2013, 08:46 PM
Dropped. Lexicon

Mike Wrecka
10-24-2013, 08:56 PM
symetrik , if the dead line was Friday people would ask for an extension till Saturday.

the dead line was designed to make Friday the absolute latest a verse could be dropped.

the reward for two opponents dropping early is extra feed and votes. the battles that open first almost always receive the most votes.

symetrik
10-24-2013, 09:01 PM
symetrik , if the dead line was Friday people would ask for an extension till Saturday.

the dead line was designed to make Friday the absolute latest a verse could be dropped.

the reward for two opponents dropping early is extra feed and votes. the battles that open first almost always receive the most votes.

Aight, I see it. Still, gross.
Ain't no brownie points for my opponents that be extending.

e11even
10-24-2013, 09:14 PM
Lol I'm the same way man, like "those fucks completely missed the point to that entire verse how can I trust anything else they say"


every fucking time lol. every week i just dumb shit down more.

Zen
10-24-2013, 09:20 PM
Extensions are necessary. My week has been shit and tbh the last thing I've felt like doing is writing. Tomorrow, on the extension day, I'll get some peace and quiet and finally be able to write. Lets never do colors again btw. I'm drawing blanks on this shit.

YDK
10-24-2013, 10:37 PM
every fucking time lol. every week i just dumb shit down more.

Same here man, a complex rhyme scheme isn't noticed but a mediocre one is told to be more complex, metaphors are missed but straight forwardness is told to use more metaphors. Tis a shame

PancakeBrah
10-24-2013, 10:49 PM
'Complex' metaphors that are complex just to be so are more of the problem. Most people writing here aren't that adept to pull it off. When it is done people respect it. I think people overrate their own ability to be deep.

YDK
10-24-2013, 10:55 PM
I think every one here is perfectly capable of pulling off deep metaphors but picking up on metaphors within a metaphor is the area some are slacking in tbh. Or they're so quick to say something is too blunt without trying to look deeper.

Split
10-24-2013, 10:58 PM
I dont care for metaphor

Certain
10-24-2013, 10:59 PM
I'm going to actually write tonight. But right now I'm giving a second listen to this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CBjqUEMlHTY

breathless
10-24-2013, 11:06 PM
I think every one here is perfectly capable of pulling off deep metaphors but picking up on metaphors within a metaphor is the area some are slacking in tbh. Or they're so quick to say something is too blunt without trying to look deeper.

Totally agree, I usually read the verses at least 3 times and end up picking up on new things, do the vote and then read the other people's and often realize I still missed some things.

YDK
10-24-2013, 11:08 PM
I dont care for metaphor

Wat about similes? Cuz they don't like you
see wat I did there? Did ya catch it?

zygote
10-24-2013, 11:19 PM
Sometimes 'simple' rhyme schemes are more effective than 'complex' multiple rhymes. Consider some writing to address themes of depression or nostalgia etc. In this situation perhaps move away from multi-rhymes especially ones that are close to each other and back-to-back because the nature of it would detract from the themes to develop. Worse still is when there is awkward wording because of a forced multiple rhyme. Why write something in an overly convoluted way just to meet some minimum requirement of multiple rhyming, when sometimes a simple and concise language with 1 or 2 syllable rhyme is more fitting?

YDK
10-24-2013, 11:20 PM
Totally agree, I usually read the verses at least 3 times and end up picking up on new things, do the vote and then read the other people's and often realize I still missed some things.

Exactly man, I'm sure there have been a number of votes that may not have changed but atleast been fed better if everything was picked up on. Yes its the writers job to make it understandable but its the readers job to comprehend. Shakespeare didn't dumb shit down so ppl understood better which is why he wasn't as universally known then but is now thought of as one of the greats.

YDK
10-24-2013, 11:23 PM
Sometimes 'simple' rhyme schemes are more effective than 'complex' multiple rhymes. Consider some writing to address themes of depression or nostalgia etc. In this situation perhaps move away from multi-rhymes especially ones that are close to each other and back-to-back because the nature of it would detract from the themes to develop. Worse still is when there is awkward wording because of a forced multiple rhyme. Why write something in an overly convoluted way just to meet some minimum requirement of multiple rhyming, when sometimes a simple and concise language with 1 or 2 syllable rhyme is more fitting?

Completely agree, I hate it when dialogue has a shit ton of multies cuz nobody actually believes that is the actual conversation lol

Certain
10-24-2013, 11:26 PM
The best writers get their points across clearly and cleanly while not ignoring complexity of content or rhyme.

breathless
10-24-2013, 11:28 PM
I actually tend to speak in constant multis, honest, all night long, whether lackin sleep or not tired at all

Split
10-24-2013, 11:30 PM
Ya but if readers never pick Up on tour stuff,, change yvour shit to ogetest contestants vores

YDK
10-24-2013, 11:34 PM
"If I'm in the closet then you are below me
Cuz you take the b-a-t outta basement homie"

YDK
10-24-2013, 11:35 PM
I actually tend to speak in constant multis, honest, all night long, whether lackin sleep or not tired at all

I must be completely missing your rhyme scheme

breathless
10-24-2013, 11:45 PM
Cause it isn't a scheme, its a way of life, didn't really mean for it to be taken in stride