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God Of War
02-02-2013, 10:30 PM
David Lama
June 23rd, 2009, 07:47 AM

Stick and Move 2009

Verses due June 24th 2009.
11:59PM Pacific
10 lines only - cannot exceed this amount
these are keystyle battles.
you only have a day to write.
NO EXTENSIONS WHATSOEVER.
IF YOU DONT MAKE IT ON TIME YOU LOSE
1st to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
check in. G/l

Grendel
June 23rd, 2009, 08:33 AM

Checks in.

Arlifick
June 23rd, 2009, 09:18 AM

check.....

Grendel
June 23rd, 2009, 12:05 PM

..I read the marquee, Grendel slated to text with Arli
who I'll have biting bullets by feeding him arms like calamari
there's no Cali love, my verse is Prop 8 ending yo' gay dreams
the west aint real dope cuz after this battle you'll see the Bay leaves
like picking Notre Dame's team, even Obama had you out the bracket
and like the Lakers, there's no way you winning without some magic
my habit has changed, and the difference is that I'm crippling cats
I quit smoking so burning this fag is kinda hard with my nicotine patch
skillfully tacted, this is Arli's chance to no show rather than submit..
cuz nobody expects to see bars like beating Rihanna down in public

Arlifick
June 23rd, 2009, 01:39 PM

dont know who i am, but i can tell his laughin is weary.....
and if you think you got Will....I.AM gonna beat this FAGGOT severely...
its a keystyle tourney... have this drunkard sonned, bunches...
and i know he's gonna wine.... when he gets beatin for usin old punches...
look, HOLD SOMETHIN... better hope you carryin heat now..
how you name yourself after somethin famously known for getting beat down!?
ill make quick work of him... see?.... in a breeze.....
zen-like skills'll swat this fly live, and this aint even CNBC!....
read the name of the tourney, ill stab em and move on quickly...
"stick and move" to this fag means........ well, lets just say its "pause-worthy"....

Genocide
June 23rd, 2009, 02:12 PM

..I read the marquee, Grendel slated to text with Arli
who I'll have biting bullets by feeding him arms like calamari

not sure i understand this here, i know calamari is like a baby squid, but what does feeding a man bullets and squid have in common? rhymes nice but didnt hit verry hard in my eyes.. gets a 1.5

there's no Cali love, my verse is Prop 8 ending yo' gay dreams
the west aint real dope cuz after this battle you'll see the Bay leaves

this was tight son -i liked the reference between the east coast and the west coats concerning leaves and dope (weed im assuming).. nice shyt here, gets a 4.0

like picking Notre Dame's team, even Obama had you out the bracket
and like the Lakers, there's no way you winning without some magic

pretty kOo, espescially in the wake of LA's win. i liked this alot when i read it for some reason -nice work here 4.0

my habit has changed, and the difference is that I'm crippling cats
I quit smoking so burning this fag is kinda hard with my nicotine patch

this wasnt that great, coulda been a lot better i think, the concept was Kool, the way it came out didnt impact to much for me -2.5

skillfully tacted, this is Arli's chance to no show rather than submit..
cuz nobody expects to see bars like beating Rihanna down in public

this was weak man -didnt like it at all, the closer should be stronger, 1.0


Verses__________________.......................... .
dont know who i am, but i can tell his laughin is weary.....
and if you think you got Will....I.AM gonna beat this FAGGOT severely...

nothing verry strong about this for an opener, kinda weak. 1.0

its a keystyle tourney... have this drunkard sonned, bunches...
and i know he's gonna wine.... when he gets beatin for usin old punches...

iono man -not verry strong once again, i didnt really see any old punches and ive been around a while. pretty soft man ..1.0

look, HOLD SOMETHIN... better hope you carryin heat now..
how you name yourself after somethin famously known for getting beat down!?

i dont really see the connection of grendel getting beat down -i must be missing something... again, if there is a significance -than thats great, if not -iono.. still didnt strike to hard.. 2.5

ill make quick work of him... see?.... in a breeze.....
zen-like skills'll swat this fly live, and this aint even CNBC!....

didnt like it -once again man, just doesnt hit hard, kinda soft -know what im saying?
1.0

read the name of the tourney, ill stab em and move on quickly...
"stick and move" to this fag means........ well, lets just say its "pause-worthy"....

well -this didnt even rhyme that well... weak closer man -it gets no rating


vote -grendel

Arlifick
June 23rd, 2009, 03:04 PM

im guessing you didnt understand the first 3 bars.. its all good though..

1-0 grendel

Genocide
June 23rd, 2009, 03:23 PM

nah -i guesss not, is it supposed to be personal? cuzz that wouldnt be to smart considering i dont know either one of you personnaly -it would make it kinda hard to understand, know what im talkin bout?

NoDoze
June 23rd, 2009, 05:07 PM

dont know who i am, but i can tell his laughin is weary.....
and if you think you got Will....I.AM gonna beat this FAGGOT severely...

vs

there's no Cali love, my verse is Prop 8 ending yo' gay dreams
the west aint real dope cuz after this battle you'll see the Bay leaves

my habit has changed, and the difference is that I'm crippling cats
I quit smoking so burning this fag is kinda hard with my nicotine patch



Winner Grendel

CarmeloSwag
June 23rd, 2009, 06:51 PM

grendel won this battle...this was a str8 battle..more content wit grendel and better punches

vote:grendel

Smack Hanes
June 23rd, 2009, 07:03 PM

like picking Notre Dame's team, even Obama had you out the bracket
and like the Lakers, there's no way you winning without some magic
there's no Cali love, my verse is Prop 8 ending yo' gay dreams
the west aint real dope cuz after this battle you'll see the Bay leaves
my habit has changed, and the difference is that I'm crippling cats
I quit smoking so burning this fag is kinda hard with my nicotine patch

vs

dont know who i am, but i can tell his laughin is weary.....
and if you think you got Will....I.AM gonna beat this FAGGOT severely...
its a keystyle tourney... have this drunkard sonned, bunches...
and i know he's gonna wine.... when he gets beatin for usin old punches...

would have been tied in quotables if arl had rhymed in his closer. i would have liked gren more regardless

vote - Grendel

Hush
June 23rd, 2009, 07:55 PM

Grendel
..I read the marquee, Grendel slated to text with Arli
who I'll have biting bullets by feeding him arms like calamari
hmm okay, wording not so much
there's no Cali love, my verse is Prop 8 ending yo' gay dreams
the west aint real dope cuz after this battle you'll see the Bay leaves
ok..decent concept
like picking Notre Dame's team, even Obama had you out the bracket
and like the Lakers, there's no way you winning without some magic
naw, seen to many times already
my habit has changed, and the difference is that I'm crippling cats
I quit smoking so burning this fag is kinda hard with my nicotine patch
hmm half decent
skillfully tacted, this is Arli's chance to no show rather than submit..
cuz nobody expects to see bars like beating Rihanna down in public
ha, but naa man..seen WAY too many of these

Arl
dont know who i am, but i can tell his laughin is weary.....
and if you think you got Will....I.AM gonna beat this FAGGOT severely...
hmm okay
its a keystyle tourney... have this drunkard sonned, bunches...
and i know he's gonna wine.... when he gets beatin for usin old punches...
no way
look, HOLD SOMETHIN... better hope you carryin heat now..
how you name yourself after somethin famously known for getting beat down!?
nawww
ill make quick work of him... see?.... in a breeze.....
zen-like skills'll swat this fly live, and this aint even CNBC!....
dont get it
read the name of the tourney, ill stab em and move on quickly...
"stick and move" to this fag means........ well, lets just say its "pause-worthy"....
naaaa

vote-grendel

Arlifick
June 23rd, 2009, 11:28 PM

ill make quick work of him... see?.... in a breeze.....
zen-like skills'll swat this fly live, and this aint even CNBC!....
dont get it

barack obama swatted a fly live on CNBC....


but yeh, good battle grendel.. KO..

C. Gaffle
June 24th, 2009, 02:23 AM

there's no Cali love, my verse is Prop 8 ending yo' gay dreams
the west aint real dope cuz after this battle you'll see the Bay leaves
my habit has changed, and the difference is that I'm crippling cats
I quit smoking so burning this fag is kinda hard with my nicotine patch

vs

dont know who i am, but i can tell his laughin is weary.....
and if you think you got Will....I.AM gonna beat this FAGGOT severely...

Vote Grendel by a hair, he had better concepts compared to Arli. good battle