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CopyPat
10-24-2013, 03:15 PM
i never punctuate properly, forever understate. probably better run away, copy be yellin "andale!!" all of these texters dumb and they always be gettin stuck, they ain't got the speed. catchin up to stay on to me, best of luck.. i change constantly. exit brah, you ain't on the scene, i am the stud, you ain't hardly steed. i met a bunch a great nominees for bestest buds and they honor me by pressin stuff when they on the keys, excellunce when they on NC's..impressed with us? we make quality threads and must remain top of thee present hump of this colony gettin up with technology.
im talkin internet rap boarders who rockin computers. and rock a fitted red hat sorta cocky and stupid. i log in, sit on my ass more and talk like i do this, but copy isn't yet that sort of obvious loser... god im just beauty

Neighbor
10-24-2013, 04:16 PM
This was fun

Whole first half was pretty much fire, despite you not even trying lol

We've really gotta get a cypher going soon, man

Rawn MD
10-24-2013, 05:24 PM
Dope scheming

Read smoothly and was funny

Not the best copy, but not bad

I always enjoy reading ur sht

Dove Dozer
10-25-2013, 07:53 AM
Nice flex. Im on that scheming shit now, formatting for audio.

Dove Dozer
10-25-2013, 07:53 AM
Oh and i got some new gear, ready to record if your down to collab

zygote
10-25-2013, 09:25 AM
Good writing CopyPat although perhaps you should set yourself a minimum word limit for these, or like hold onto the short ones and combine them later. Half of the fun reading it seems to be in the increasing momentum of the rhyme schemes etc, and that seems difficult with only a few lines. The steed line was a good wordplay enjoy similes like that, that line was both an easy connection and entertaining.

Certain
10-26-2013, 06:22 AM
I agree with ZYG (whose name was better as zygote). Expand and dilate. When flow is such an important part of a verse, giving us such a short snippet barely allows us to pick it up before it's over. I liked that this was about us. A few of the rhymes were clunkier than normal, but you're good at this style.

Geno
10-26-2013, 12:39 PM
Always a good read. Dope shit copy. Slayed the schemes

Zen
10-27-2013, 07:01 PM
Flow comes effortless to you. Pieces like this are one of the reasons you're one of my favorites to read. Can't remember if I told you or not but I peeped your audio too. Dope shit there as well lol. Back to this piece, your content is always light and humorous which is a nice change of pace to the om which is usually full of "I hate myself" or "someone died wahhh wahhh wahh". Keep being pat.