Exodus Eve

[Zombie]

yo -

ever gathered a segment that drifts in defection?
basked at an intervention. Scissored inception?
Inoculated love lectures, from a blistered injection?
Wilt your detection. In the arm there's sharp pains. you nudge pressure?
you're insane, then.
Beam at the jeweled spectrum- jolt the crystallized meth
Action spoke a louder verb, that symbolized death
Entwine the message, figured it'd be drama
Hide behind rejection. Cigarette or vodka?
Introverted saga. Wallflower, he could hear his own hums
Eyes watery from laughing. Verberating. Throats numb
Quandery is classic. Flashbacks on the contrast
Backnote to the bagpipes, contrary crackling
Abstinence is fear of crediting what you might be reduced to
We can see right through you- duplicity, wrath
Madness you undergo? Blood stained imagery plaque
Vivid stream synthetic flash; lights up the synergy path
Crawl before you walk, is such a realty relapse
Coffin for these gravediggers, all's just a publicity act
Live the mockery they portray. Interview my psychotic release
I sigh knowledge, sip white tonic. Deprived logic. A dream.
Headless phantom. Document the gluttons last breathing moment
May the mass reach condolence, archived in his memorandum
Infinities pass. Colloquy. These exchanges attached
Time doesn't exist. Clockwork cigar. Facing the facts
Forming facial syntax. Poppy seeds crisp your bagels with jam
The dusky sunset blazes your pale face to a hazely graham
Nasal exam. Olfactory vomit, comes the hospital que
8 calorie. Boozy refreshment from the hops that you brew
Gazed through the double helix with a kaleidoscope
Survey the fragile pieces, jigsaws-- align the globe
Awake during Hara-kiri. Provided you provide the rope
Behold the mockery of Kafkas theory, a misguided node

[Eŋg]

lol. this seems familiar? some parts were cool, others not so.

[dead man]

LOL

read it twice

Time doesn't exist. Clockwork cigar. Facing the facts
Forming facial syntax. Poppy seeds crisp your bagels with jam

[Eŋg]

NAILED IT.

[Zombie]

lol ok. lol hi black =o. Vulgar it's ok, take your time.

[PancakeBrah]

beginning sucked as an imitation. the repeated question marks threw it all off. after that, spot on.

[NYCSPITZ]

saw this on fb guess u added to it, it's cool, imitation was iight just stay with your own voice my G it's doper in paragraph form. This though was nice had some jewels in it, ended nice

[Split]

needs more lowercase letters. all of them. i liked it though, title game strong. nice parody/ impression. hazely graham was cool as was the last four lines and their structure

[zygote]

This was on netcees.com version 1, but do you have the rest of it? If so you should upload those parts. There were neighbor and dullboy satire section things too right? You wrote that it was a collaboration and most of the commentators were duped.

[BWHAHA]

Actually, lol. It wasn't. The version of this you may, slightly remember was on NC 1.0. Correct. This was a rebuffed version to match even closer. If I were to post that one, it would be an embarrassment to this one. Wording was a bit off on that one and I prefer this one much better, regardless of author ZYGote.

To my knowledge, it was done as flattery.

[Wise Wiggles]

Cool I liked it