Karaoke vs. Cashius - Karaoke Wins

[Neighbor]

NBL
Week 4

Due Tuesday, November 19th

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Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

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Karaoke Cashius

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

In...

Bye...

[Cashius]

Check. 10.

[Cashius]

Sent 10.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

gotta post in the a.m...
hope you guys understand...

Bye...

[Cashius]

Go for it.

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

I'll beat him to a pulp and wont show this guy any pity
I'm grimey and gritty, you'll get your ribs swolled up for trying to be Witty
Its obvious who you are, I'll be the first to point it out
They say season 6 lacked decent heads, that's a lie, they were all writing for ur account
But champing that season didn't prove that this guy's ill
When all he did was go through more scrubs than Malachi's grill
Bitches call me Mandingo but I really wont brag
Ur just stuck with a pussy between ur legs like Neigh during the video mag
I don't have any kids cuz I made ur mother drink mine
While I had 3 fingers up in her like I was giving her pussy the hunger games sign

Bye...

[Neighbor]

Cash's verse


Your old girl didn't even like phone sex w/ you. Yup, and Cash isn't kidding
Only time you were able to turn your Exxon Mobile is pumping gas for a living
Everything out your pen is a lie. You need to get some standards
With the Incurable shitter...to the point we all hope you get rectal cancer
He just copped a chick who's 3 bills...That whore might be dead by now, bitch
People were laughing at that New Girl wayyyy before Orc made a thread about it
It's like her belly, it droops for the hell of it dude...she should try to suck the shit in
All it takes is one look at her Khoran you'll know that this guy is in love with a pig
This broke bitch can't even get a loan. Dude, face it...it's truth
You hear F NO from Banks so often you must have his new tape on a loop

[Sentex]

Good battle.

I think both verses were pretty good. I picked up on most the references about the board from both of you. I think Karaoke's verse was quite heavily focused on the forum, not overly a bad thing but nothing really grabbed me from his verse. I think it was a solid verse though, the hunger games line was cool.. and Malachi's grill is relevant.. The neighbour pussy between the legs was funny..

Cash's verse was more reader friendly I think.. the first two lines were cool.. I thought the Khoran punch was nice.. it was my line of the battle.. F NO was cool...

pretty solid battle.. well done for showing up.. looks like this week has been a bit of a let down..

but I'm gonna have to give this one to Cash, I preferred his verse a bit more.

V/ Cash.

[KwaL!ty]

I'll beat him to a pulp and wont show this guy any pity
I'm grimey and gritty, you'll get your ribs swolled up for trying to be Witty
But champing that season didn't prove that this guy's ill
When all he did was go through more scrubs than Malachi's grill
Bitches call me Mandingo but I really wont brag
Ur just stuck with a pussy between ur legs like Neigh during the video mag


vs



Your old girl didn't even like phone sex w/ you. Yup, and Cash isn't kidding
Only time you were able to turn your Exxon Mobile is pumping gas for a living
Everything out your pen is a lie. You need to get some standards
With the Incurable shitter...to the point we all hope you get rectal cancer
It's like her belly, it droops for the hell of it dude...she should try to suck the shit in
All it takes is one look at her Khoran you'll know that this guy is in love with a pig
This broke bitch can't even get a loan. Dude, face it...it's truth
You hear F NO from Banks so often you must have his new tape on a loop


Vote- goes to cashius came overall more direct than Karie .. Cash had better misses & lotb with ---
Your old girl didn't even like phone sex w/ you. Yup, and Cash isn't kidding
Only time you were able to turn your Exxon Mobile is pumping gas for a living


the wordplay & execution on this bar was on point & as soon as i read it .. Even though Karie had a good verse i knew it was over from the opener ...

[Destroyer]

decent heads, pussy between legs

vs

Exxon, banks

I got karaoke here. I dunno. some stuff from cash just didn't hit for me
like khoran works but just makes no sense in that context
anyway, it was a decent battle

v/newsman

[Unfukwitable]

I'll beat him to a pulp and wont show this guy any pity
I'm grimey and gritty, you'll get your ribs swolled up for trying to be Witty
Its obvious who you are, I'll be the first to point it out
They say season 6 lacked decent heads, that's a lie, they were all writing for ur account
But champing that season didn't prove that this guy's ill
When all he did was go through more scrubs than Malachi's grill

v/s

Your old girl didn't even like phone sex w/ you. Yup, and Cash isn't kidding
Only time you were able to turn your Exxon Mobile is pumping gas for a living
Everything out your pen is a lie. You need to get some standards
With the Incurable shitter...to the point we all hope you get rectal cancer
It's like her belly, it droops for the hell of it dude...she should try to suck the shit in
All it takes is one look at her Khoran you'll know that this guy is in love with a pig
This broke bitch can't even get a loan. Dude, face it...it's truth
You hear F NO from Banks so often you must have his new tape on a loop

One had a cool start and ideas but I didn't feel like he executed them to his full potential and I also think his verse was better In the beginning, The other had a Nice drop some good wp and wording . I seen way stronger drops from him but I think he did just enough to get my vote . Both had good verse but one edged it . v/Cash

[Answer]

writing for your account, scrubs, pussy/cat lines are way too played, you also kind of did back to back pussy lines, whether or not they're related...it's kind of redundant. You could've just omitted the word altogether - and the line is really simplistic

Exxon mobile, New girl, Khoran



this is close, but in 2013 - i really don't think there's ever an acceptable reason to use a Cat/Pussy line - and that really hurt karaoke's verse for me. Other than that, it was mostly neck and neck..

MVGT - Cash

[CtrlF4]

kar

opener, 6 decent heads, neighbor, scrubs


vs


cash


exxon, new girl, fno


v/kar...better misses imo....I didn't like khoran really or rectal cancer....hunger games was terrible and scrubs was barely a quote

[Sharp]

I'll beat him to a pulp and wont show this guy any pity
I'm grimey and gritty, you'll get your ribs swolled up for trying to be Witty
Bitches call me Mandingo but I really wont brag
Ur just stuck with a pussy between ur legs like Neigh during the video mag



Your old girl didn't even like phone sex w/ you. Yup, and Cash isn't kidding
Only time you were able to turn your Exxon Mobile is pumping gas for a living
All it takes is one look at her Khoran you'll know that this guy is in love with a pig


sick battle. really close. it was pretty even overall, i just thought Kar had the lotb with the opener so that edges it to him for me.

v/karaoke

[Ryan 12]

I'll beat him to a pulp and wont show this guy any pity
I'm grimey and gritty, you'll get your ribs swolled up for trying to be Witty
^cool
Its obvious who you are, I'll be the first to point it out
They say season 6 lacked decent heads, that's a lie, they were all writing for ur account
^lmao
But champing that season didn't prove that this guy's ill
When all he did was go through more scrubs than Malachi's grill
^ok
Bitches call me Mandingo but I really wont brag
Ur just stuck with a pussy between ur legs like Neigh during the video mag
^rofl
I don't have any kids cuz I made ur mother drink mine
While I had 3 fingers up in her like I was giving her pussy the hunger games sign
^meh

vs

Your old girl didn't even like phone sex w/ you. Yup, and Cash isn't kidding
Only time you were able to turn your Exxon Mobile is pumping gas for a living
^dope
Everything out your pen is a lie. You need to get some standards
With the Incurable shitter...to the point we all hope you get rectal cancer
^meh played concept
He just copped a chick who's 3 bills...That whore might be dead by now, bitch
People were laughing at that New Girl wayyyy before Orc made a thread about it
^nah
It's like her belly, it droops for the hell of it dude...she should try to suck the shit in
All it takes is one look at her Khoran you'll know that this guy is in love with a pig
^wp doesnt sound right both ways tbh
This broke bitch can't even get a loan. Dude, face it...it's truth
You hear F NO from Banks so often you must have his new tape on a loop
^ok



this was an ok battle imo. nothing that great

in terms of consistency i got kar, but cash had lotb with that dope exxon wp



vote - karaoke

[CtrlF4]

4-4 first one up my two votes win

[Boredom]

ts obvious who you are, I'll be the first to point it out
They say season 6 lacked decent heads, that's a lie, they were all writing for ur account
itches call me Mandingo but I really wont brag
Ur just stuck with a pussy between ur legs like Neigh during the video mag
I don't have any kids cuz I made ur mother drink mine
While I had 3 fingers up in her like I was giving her pussy the hunger games sign

vs

Your old girl didn't even like phone sex w/ you. Yup, and Cash isn't kidding
Only time you were able to turn your Exxon Mobile is pumping gas for a living
Everything out your pen is a lie. You need to get some standards
With the Incurable shitter...to the point we all hope you get rectal cancer
He just copped a chick who's 3 bills...That whore might be dead by now, bitch
People were laughing at that New Girl wayyyy before Orc made a thread about it

battle was dope as fuck, quotables matched but kars non quotes hit harder and was slightly more consistent so for that he gmv

[CtrlF4]

5-4 karaoke


a few more votes wud be nice

[ill nik-A]

Hmm..
Kar had the account line and hunger line, didn't like the disc forum lines

Cash had the cancer line that was aight, Exxon concept is mad played, Khoran wordplay? He'll naw and I wasn't feelin the Orc disc board kar type line, banks was eh ok


Wasn't feeling much but kar wins it

[CtrlF4]

6-4 kar wins