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Dope girl
02-08-2013, 12:57 PM
4 bars Due Sunday & links on the way.

Dope girl
02-08-2013, 01:02 PM
www.artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?2005-vicdoin-(0-0)-vs-Joe-Boston-(0-0)

www.artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?161-ill-a-nik-vs-nieghbor-pics

RPK
02-08-2013, 05:20 PM
Check

RPK
02-08-2013, 05:24 PM
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?2005-Vicodin-(0-0)-vs-Joe-Boston-(0-0)-JOE-WINS
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?3374-Camp-Bell-(1-0)-vs-Defiant-(0-0)-OPEN-FOR-VOTES

Dope girl
02-10-2013, 10:46 AM
This is no Competition, I'm coming for Champion belt after I win be in hall of fame
I put this chump in hall of shame.
your error will put you in casket/Cuz you made a grave mistake/
Its eternal sorrow/ when I diss guys (disguise) like Zoro/
I'll leave a t on your bottom after I poke you now you hot.
It's plain 2 see you've got no skills// you's a chicken with whack bars its a Hennessy(Hen I see)
I pop a cap in your hand -& leave your hand on cap I'll leave you handicapped.
I run this game-I'll slit your throat bottoms in 4's so you could play quarter back
then tie you to me feet to react so flooring you is walk to the park




I tried my best g/l

RPK
02-10-2013, 09:01 PM
DBL post

RPK
02-10-2013, 09:02 PM
Do u have a thyroid condition?

Graves or Hashimoto or something?

I only ask because ur eyes look symptomatic in every pic ive ever seen of u...check it out u may have a deficient...and as u age itll progress........

just looking out for ur well-being, this is a srs post, no troll.

If uve never been Dx'd with something pertaining to ur endocrine system, u may want to get get checked out.

I'm worried about ur health,cuz I want to kill u by aimin' a weapon
So if u got Graves...hopefully its only cuz of what I lay you to rest in
U aint prepared with the substance so no one cares what ur bustin'
It makes sense that u got Underground Lines...shit,even ur avy pic looks like Harriet Tubman
We know that ur str8 queer, u ain't gettin' a place here
It don't matter if ur 2B or not 2B...I'm still ready to Shakespeare
U know that I'm scandalous,I ready to slam this bitch
Ur text battling sucks ass...and its still worse than ur grammar is

Zen
02-11-2013, 02:26 PM
I don't think this honestly needs much explanation but RPK took this. I don't wanna be mean to 2B but your verse really lacked any quotable lines and punches but least you tried.
V/RPK

Joe Boston
02-12-2013, 07:56 PM
2B ur structure confused me in some areas. Also ur attempts on wp were ok but ur wording made them lack impact.

RPK this was pretty one sided for you. Concepts hit In every bar he displayed.

V/RPK sorry didn't break it down but like I said ur structure 2b was confusing and really no quotable hits.

Allen Knight
02-13-2013, 12:51 AM
nothing (but u had some attempts)

Vs

U aint prepared with the substance so no one cares what ur bustin'
It makes sense that u got Underground Lines...shit,even ur avy pic looks like Harriet Tubman
U know that I'm scandalous,I ready to slam this bitch
Ur text battling sucks ass...and its still worse than ur grammar is

V/RPK, this was one sided....beautiful verse was weird an structured crazy u need to work on concepts
and wording make ur lines harsh wit a creative twist on them work on those things, RPK had a solid verse
i like the underground bar and the grammar one was lol, he got this easy.

RPK
02-14-2013, 12:15 PM
UP

Orc
02-14-2013, 12:46 PM
yea rpk won. robranda shudnt battle. too easy. grave line was cool from rpk. he seems okay. v/ rpk

Immaculate
02-14-2013, 09:27 PM
2B had ok lines, poor structure had a impact on your punchlines though.

RPK had good setups & witty punches, diggin that closer lol.

V/ RPK.