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Defiant
02-09-2013, 10:50 AM
BA TITLE TOURNAMENT RND1
Winner becomes the first AOB BA Champion
10 Lines Min/Max
House Rules
Due Tuesday Midnight EST
4-0 or first to 5 Joe Boston Hollywood

Hollywood
02-09-2013, 12:33 PM
check

Joe Boston
02-10-2013, 08:16 AM
check gl man

Joe Boston
02-10-2013, 05:10 PM
Your bitch brags about how i fuck her i know you've heard of me
Only time she bragging bout Hollywood is if she wanna be an actress or get plastic surgery
Stop acting like u hard you'll never bust truly
Shots will blow him back like Blizzard Nemo, we also know its this fags favorite movie
chill now that the NFL is over yeah it was great fucking year
i can see u all about having raven sensation cuz every nasty bitch you've been with made u burn down there
You never see him bagging bitches this dudes style is all wrong
When he approach every bitch be "Decking The Balls of Holly" and we know they aint reciting Christmas songs
His family poor as fuck nothing to eat and no soap to wash with
I know its sounds kinda lo mein and thats what u get when u open his fridge to some empty noodle boxes

Hollywood
02-11-2013, 02:02 PM
so Joe's a real American too? I can't tell if it's true yall..
cuz when he sees stars and stripes, I'm knocking him out w/ a pool ball
you can't hang bro, that lame flow ain't testin the flames
w/ enough weak lines chained together to anger Django & the rest of the slaves
you couldn't even place a bet, your bank account's at nothin son
you clearly ain't got no dough Joe, plus any bitch could beat you up in one
my punches certainly hurt, burstin this nerd's snout
I'm on the outskirts of perfect... he thinks he's perfect w/ skirts out
for running his mouth I'm shutting him out, very clean
I just zipped up the prick quicker than the Something About Mary scene

Joe Boston
02-11-2013, 02:28 PM
Nice drop Hollywood lets get some votes gl man

Hollywood
02-11-2013, 06:00 PM
word

good luck

Boredom
02-11-2013, 06:51 PM
Joes concepts were lacking, execution and wording were off. Holly had stars n stripes, unchained and dough joe that were fuxkin beast IMO. Holly gmv quite easily

Skunk
02-12-2013, 10:36 AM
so Joe's a real American too? I can't tell if it's true yall..
cuz when he sees stars and stripes, I'm knocking him out w/ a pool ball

very cool

Sharp
02-12-2013, 01:30 PM
Joe's last two were decent concept, but weren't pulled off cleanly enough to do much damage

v

you can't hang bro, that lame flow ain't testin the flames
w/ enough weak lines chained together to anger Django & the rest of the slaves
you couldn't even place a bet, your bank account's at nothin son
you clearly ain't got no dough Joe, plus any bitch could beat you up in one


Hollywood's verse was more consistent, had harder hitting punches and lotb. Took this pretty comfortably. I can break down further if needed, but he got my vote

V/ Hollywood

Joe Boston
02-12-2013, 02:38 PM
Skunk if u voting can u explain a bit more my dude thanks man. My bad for the freepost.

Skunk
02-12-2013, 11:39 PM
I wasn't voting, just commenting

Allen Knight
02-13-2013, 12:09 AM
His family poor as fuck nothing to eat and no soap to wash with
I know its sounds kinda lo mein and thats what u get when u open his fridge to some empty noodle boxes

Vs

so Joe's a real American too? I can't tell if it's true yall..
cuz when he sees stars and stripes, I'm knocking him out w/ a pool ball
you can't hang bro, that lame flow ain't testin the flames
w/ enough weak lines chained together to anger Django & the rest of the slaves
you couldn't even place a bet, your bank account's at nothin son
you clearly ain't got no dough Joe, plus any bitch could beat you up in one

V/holly, not a bad battle, joe that bar i quoted was nice i like it if u had more of those u coulda took this
i the hang holly i did before so it didnt hit but ur wordings the issue u have concepts work on that..
holly came wit a nice verse the pool ball & dough joe lines was nice, cool read yah'll.

RPK
02-13-2013, 11:51 AM
Your bitch brags about how i fuck her i know you've heard of me
Only time she bragging bout Hollywood is if she wanna be an actress or get plastic surgery
Simple
Stop acting like u hard you'll never bust truly
Shots will blow him back like Blizzard Nemo, we also know its this fags favorite movie
Ok
chill now that the NFL is over yeah it was great fucking year
i can see u all about having raven sensation cuz every nasty bitch you've been with made u burn down there
Meh..
You never see him bagging bitches this dudes style is all wrong
When he approach every bitch be "Decking The Balls of Holly" and we know they aint reciting Christmas songs
Ok
His family poor as fuck nothing to eat and no soap to wash with
I know its sounds kinda lo mein and thats what u get when u open his fridge to some empty noodle boxes
Ok

vs.

so Joe's a real American too? I can't tell if it's true yall..
cuz when he sees stars and stripes, I'm knocking him out w/ a pool ball
Cool
you can't hang bro, that lame flow ain't testin the flames
w/ enough weak lines chained together to anger Django & the rest of the slaves
Nice
you couldn't even place a bet, your bank account's at nothin son
you clearly ain't got no dough Joe, plus any bitch could beat you up in one
Cool
my punches certainly hurt, burstin this nerd's snout
I'm on the outskirts of perfect... he thinks he's perfect w/ skirts out
Ok
for running his mouth I'm shutting him out, very clean
I just zipped up the prick quicker than the Something About Mary scene
Ok

Joe's wording still needs improvement. With that being said,Hollywood had some cool hits. Ive got to give this to holly.
V/Holly

bleak
02-13-2013, 04:40 PM
I feel like JB used too many generics that lacked the sting to make up for it. The concepts were nice, but could have been directed towards anyone, which takes away from the quality imo. The lo mein was a miss, the others were decent.

Holly had consistency, all of his punches had at least a lil somethin behind em, so Holly gmv.