BA TITLE TOURNAMENT RND1 - Ill nik-A vs Dystopian NIKA WINS

[Defiant]

BA TITLE TOURNAMENT RND1
Winner becomes the first AOB BA Champion
10 Lines Min/Max
House Rules
Due Tuesday Midnight EST
4-0 or first to 5
ill nik-A Dystopian

[ill nik-A]

10
Welcome!

[Plot]

Thank you

[Plot]

Hit you up on this in 24 Nik, been doin real life shit.

[Defiant]

due tonight ill nik-A Dystopian

[ill nik-A]

10 sent

[Defiant]

Ill Nik-a's verse -

No matter the site my text’s worldwide cuz I’m witty, fool
u still lookin to make a splash… but its more of a slip & fall accident inside a kiddie pool
I’m killin u, peeps love unforced shit so they anoint me leader
I got The Following to back it up… u’re more like Kevin Bacon raping lil boys in Sleepers
I win battles & fuck bitches; u watch porn on the computer & lose
Whats funnier’s u pay for access… like if I was giving u the password to my tutoring group
u haven’t gotten good it’s the truth, ur wack lines traditions
who actually believes u’re the future… I mean Dystopia is usually found in science fiction
good bye’s the vision… I give ur mom dick & I’m impressed bro
cuz what that trick does with the balls… she schools the Harlem Globetrotters best show

[Defiant]

Dystopian's verse -

Im the fabled perfection, your cocks unused, gray and rejected,
Only time a fox goes down on Nick, when he loses his cable connection.
& playing games will get you crucified, this clown taunts the boss..
Crosswords with me and you'll be the 1 down 4 across.
So desperate for a loss, let me relieve your anxieties..
And expose yur Skull and Bones, quicker than leaking Secret Societies.
Your in need of psychiarty, a gnarly fiend for the Charlie Sheen,
but if thinks he'll drop me with rhymes...
he's got rocks in his head, glovebox and every other spot he can find.
Coz on the net he thugs like hes the shit, with the crappest of antics,
But irl: Nick'll back out like a bitch, coz he's wack as that band is.

[Joe Boston]

Lil nik

Ill Nik-a's verse -

No matter the site my text’s worldwide cuz I’m witty, fool
u still lookin to make a splash… but its more of a slip & fall accident inside a kiddie pool
Nice flip here

I’m killin u, peeps love unforced shit so they anoint me leader
I got The Following to back it up… u’re more like Kevin Bacon raping lil boys in Sleepers
Lol

I win battles & fuck bitches; u watch porn on the computer & lose
Whats funnier’s u pay for access… like if I was giving u the password to my tutoring group
Wasn't feeling this metaphorical comparison no hate

u haven’t gotten good it’s the truth, ur wack lines traditions
who actually believes u’re the future… I mean Dystopia is usually found in science fiction
Ok this np reference was good

good bye’s the vision… I give ur mom dick & I’m impressed bro
cuz what that trick does with the balls… she schools the Harlem Globetrotters best show
Lol

Dyp
Dystopian's verse -

Im the fabled perfection, your cocks unused, gray and rejected,
Only time a fox goes down on Nick, when he loses his cable connection.
Lol good np reference

& playing games will get you crucified, this clown taunts the boss..
Crosswords with me and you'll be the 1 down 4 across.
This was pretty creative dope concept

So desperate for a loss, let me relieve your anxieties..
And expose yur Skull and Bones, quicker than leaking Secret Societies.
Nice

Your in need of psychiarty, a gnarly fiend for the Charlie Sheen,
but if thinks he'll drop me with rhymes...
he's got rocks in his head, glovebox and every other spot he can find.
This had overall humor factor but felt could've worded better

Coz on the net he thugs like hes the shit, with the crappest of antics,
But irl: Nick'll back out like a bitch, coz he's wack as that band is.
Predictable np no hate seen this before but cool attempt

Well this was a great match but really have madd talent so props. I felt they were both equal as far as hits go.
I felt dyp had the more polished of concept that whole crossword concept did it for me and I felt he slightly edged it out with that hit. This can go either way again props to both.

V/Dyp

[ill nik-A]

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?3617-BA-TITLE-TOURNAMENT-RND1-Sik-vs-RPK-OPEN-FOR-VOTES

[SiK]

No matter the site my text’s worldwide cuz I’m witty, fool
u still lookin to make a splash… but its more of a slip & fall accident inside a kiddie pool
I’m killin u, peeps love unforced shit so they anoint me leader
I got The Following to back it up… u’re more like Kevin Bacon raping lil boys in Sleepers
I win battles & fuck bitches; u watch porn on the computer & lose
Whats funnier’s u pay for access… like if I was giving u the password to my tutoring group
good bye’s the vision… I give ur mom dick & I’m impressed bro
cuz what that trick does with the balls… she schools the Harlem Globetrotters best show

Vs.

Im the fabled perfection, your cocks unused, gray and rejected,
Only time a fox goes down on Nick, when he loses his cable connection.
& playing games will get you crucified, this clown taunts the boss..
Crosswords with me and you'll be the 1 down 4 across.

Ill Nik had some real nice concepts here. Wording was crisp, only line i didnt like was science fiction. Dys came out the gate pretty nice imo...The opener was dope...Then you just fell off, wording got sloppy....Igot Nik in quotes and for the win

V-Nika

[Sharp]

Ill Nik-a's verse -

No matter the site my text’s worldwide cuz I’m witty, fool
u still lookin to make a splash… but its more of a slip & fall accident inside a kiddie pool
I’m killin u, peeps love unforced shit so they anoint me leader
I got The Following to back it up… u’re more like Kevin Bacon raping lil boys in Sleepers
u haven’t gotten good it’s the truth, ur wack lines traditions
who actually believes u’re the future… I mean Dystopia is usually found in science fiction
good bye’s the vision… I give ur mom dick & I’m impressed bro
cuz what that trick does with the balls… she schools the Harlem Globetrotters best show

Dystopian's verse -

Im the fabled perfection, your cocks unused, gray and rejected,
Only time a fox goes down on Nick, when he loses his cable connection.
So desperate for a loss, let me relieve your anxieties..
And expose yur Skull and Bones, quicker than leaking Secret Societies.
Coz on the net he thugs like hes the shit, with the crappest of antics,
But irl: Nick'll back out like a bitch, coz he's wack as that band is.

Tight battle, thought it was really close. Overall, I felt like Nik's concepts were a little harder hitting - Kevin Bacon and Science fiction were my favorite lines of the battle and globetrotter was roflz. Dystopian had pretty good wordplay, but wasn't really consistent - he started and ended strong enough to win but didn't really hit as hard inbetween imo. Dope battle, for me its Nika by a hair

V/ Nik

[Camp Bell]

Ill Nik-a's verse -

No matter the site my text’s worldwide cuz I’m witty, fool
u still lookin to make a splash… but its more of a slip & fall accident inside a kiddie pool
lol nice

I’m killin u, peeps love unforced shit so they anoint me leader
I got The Following to back it up… u’re more like Kevin Bacon raping lil boys in Sleepers
ehh, more funny than hard hitting

I win battles & fuck bitches; u watch porn on the computer & lose
Whats funnier’s u pay for access… like if I was giving u the password to my tutoring group
good concept but didnt land quite right for me

u haven’t gotten good it’s the truth, ur wack lines traditions
who actually believes u’re the future… I mean Dystopia is usually found in science fiction
bow! nice

good bye’s the vision… I give ur mom dick & I’m impressed bro
cuz what that trick does with the balls… she schools the Harlem Globetrotters best show
LOL

vs

Dystopian's verse -

Im the fabled perfection, your cocks unused, gray and rejected,
Only time a fox goes down on Nick, when he loses his cable connection.
good opener

& playing games will get you crucified, this clown taunts the boss..
Crosswords with me and you'll be the 1 down 4 across.
ouch!

So desperate for a loss, let me relieve your anxieties..
And expose yur Skull and Bones, quicker than leaking Secret Societies.
nasty

Your in need of psychiarty, a gnarly fiend for the Charlie Sheen,
but if thinks he'll drop me with rhymes...
he's got rocks in his head, glovebox and every other spot he can find.
ehh...


Coz on the net he thugs like hes the shit, with the crappest of antics,
But irl: Nick'll back out like a bitch, coz he's wack as that band is.
nice wp


this was a dope battle. close but ima have to give the edge to dys, his lines
were more consistent and hit harder. nik had some funny shit but that was it
no real aggression.

vote: dystopian

[Sn00p]

No matter the site my text’s worldwide cuz I’m witty, fool
u still lookin to make a splash… but its more of a slip & fall accident inside a kiddie pool
I’m killin u, peeps love unforced shit so they anoint me leader
I got The Following to back it up… u’re more like Kevin Bacon raping lil boys in Sleepers
u haven’t gotten good it’s the truth, ur wack lines traditions
who actually believes u’re the future… I mean Dystopia is usually found in science fiction
good bye’s the vision… I give ur mom dick & I’m impressed bro
cuz what that trick does with the balls… she schools the Harlem Globetrotters best show

all decent to good

vs.

Im the fabled perfection, your cocks unused, gray and rejected,
Only time a fox goes down on Nick, when he loses his cable connection.
So desperate for a loss, let me relieve your anxieties..
And expose yur Skull and Bones, quicker than leaking Secret Societies.
Your in need of psychiarty, a gnarly fiend for the Charlie Sheen,
but if thinks he'll drop me with rhymes...
he's got rocks in his head, glovebox and every other spot he can find.

coulda quoted the crossword thing line too, probably, cuz it was decent as well.

well, y'all were pretty even. tbh i even thought dys coulda gotten the upset here...until i read his last line. unfortunately, that's just too played on nik. and so i got nik winning 4-3 in quotables and w/ the better unquotables.
v/nik

[Vinzr]

No matter the site my text’s worldwide cuz I’m witty, fool
u still lookin to make a splash… but its more of a slip & fall accident inside a kiddie pool
u haven’t gotten good it’s the truth, ur wack lines traditions
who actually believes u’re the future… I mean Dystopia is usually found in science fiction

vs

Im the fabled perfection, your cocks unused, gray and rejected,
Only time a fox goes down on Nick, when he loses his cable connection.
& playing games will get you crucified, this clown taunts the boss..
Crosswords with me and you'll be the 1 down 4 across.

great battle here, close call but i think nik takes the cake here. he had more hits in his verse and i felt his punches were just a tad harder overall

v/ Nik