a.m. showers

[Split]

i'd love you to keep walking
in the rain, you listen to the cloud cover
instead of holding a grudge-
-you are secretly cold,
i know because i am, too, cold,
i will probably rephrase my array of captions-
a study of art- "vanished perspectives"
those thousands of abstract points
near and yet far- the sort of thing to put behind you
as this world is too pretty an abstraction to chase
in the way i have spent too much time watching the rain









will feed later today srs ive been slacking.

[Wise Wiggles]

Poems!

yay

[ill nik-A]

Meh ok for what it is

To me it's vague

The vanished perspectives was the highlight just not captivating no pun intended

[Inno]

This makes me want to write some man poems

[PancakeBrah]

i will probably rephrase my array of captions-

good one.

[Vulgar]

I agree with nik's "meh" comment. It wasn't generous. I wanted moar. I wanted moar moar.

Keep doing fume

[Cimmerian]

in the rain, you listen to the cloud cover
instead of holding a grudge-
-you are secretly cold,
i know because i am, too,



Particularly liked this run. Keep doing.

Cimm