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CtrlF4
12-01-2013, 02:12 PM
10-12 lines

Due Monday

must vote on 5 battles

Swerve Unfukwitable

Unfukwitable
12-01-2013, 06:15 PM
checkk

votes dropped
Link 1 - http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=36289
Link 2 - http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=36296
Link 3 - http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=36293
Link 4 - http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=36297

Swerve
12-02-2013, 09:24 AM
Oh nice.

Here.

Unfukwitable
12-02-2013, 04:53 PM
This a easy win for me, Viewers don't vote for the Small talkers
So people who feel bad for Swerve on the polls, are saying R.I.P to Paul Walker .
A news crew needs to be present while you reciting them weaklin verbs
Maan, the way you showers us with rubble, It's only fair the media write pieces- Swerve .
Your chick slings pussy on the side quiet often, your Diva...
Twirls sticks around with a better back performance than Orchestra leaders .
He though he wrote a head shot for Dominate, Then he must've sensed death
So for thinking that DOM - Kennedy , that battle just went west .
He said he got dudes to fight for him.. which is off of the charts,
Psh, If he's Unleashing a Boxer, It's literally - A walk in the park .

Swerve
12-03-2013, 12:47 AM
Too sad after Saints game...here's a key.


You couldn't be a rapper though, even the thought is inconceivable,
Cause your drone delivery would have people thinking Amazon's ideas are believable.
Unfuck will need a lot to beat me, frankly its just not meant to be,
You want a spark, but couldn't catch a charge playing make believe with Rawn MD.
I'm a star, you're a nobody...that shits enough to get you choked,
You've been interfering from the sidelines for so long, you've got Mike Tomlin taking notes.
Girls don't like you, you've got no game and just straight ugly as fuck,
You've got so many unreleased issues, I'm surprised Chyeah hasn't started digging them up.
When your girl fuck face me, she wants the dick and I'm well inclined,
When she phuck face you, she reminds you that you're going to lose to him a second time.

KwaL!ty
12-03-2013, 02:49 AM
This a easy win for me, Viewers don't vote for the Small talkers
So people who feel bad for Swerve on the polls, are saying R.I.P to Paul Walker .
He though he wrote a head shot for Dominate, Then he must've sensed death
So for thinking that DOM - Kennedy , that battle just went west .
He said he got dudes to fight for him.. which is off of the charts,
Psh, If he's Unleashing a Boxer, It's literally - A walk in the park .



vs



You couldn't be a rapper though, even the thought is inconceivable,
Cause your drone delivery would have people thinking Amazon's ideas are believable.
Unfuck will need a lot to beat me, frankly its just not meant to be,
You want a spark, but couldn't catch a charge playing make believe with Rawn MD.
I'm a star, you're a nobody...that shits enough to get you choked,
You've been interfering from the sidelines for so long, you've got Mike Tomlin taking notes.
Girls don't like you, you've got no game and just straight ugly as fuck,
You've got so many unreleased issues, I'm surprised Chyeah hasn't started digging them up.


cant quote the last bar of Swerves because I was used ... unfairly ..


but my vote goes to Swerve .. the concept that FUK had w/ the Paul Walker could've been dope but poor execution & delivery .. the boxer was probably your best bar .. the middle bar I quoted was based off concept .. Swerve honestly just used current events & discussion to his advantage against you & ended it w/ a haymaker personal even though was oddly worded ..


Vote- Swerve

Greed
12-03-2013, 10:09 AM
Paul walker orchestra and walk in the park

Vs

Rawn, mike tomlin


V unfukwitable

CtrlF4
12-03-2013, 07:25 PM
un

paul walker, orchestra leaders



vs


swerve

rawn, tomlin, chyeahh



v/swerve....un started out w/some fire but it fell off at the end the bars I didn't quote from both weren't bad just didn't feel they were quotes...but props

Cashius
12-03-2013, 10:26 PM
Wasn't feeling much from either. I think the Tomlin line was lotb just because it was fresh. Maybe I'm being to picky but it felt like a FN battle. I gotta give it to Swerve, tho for having the best line.

Swerve.

Strikta
12-04-2013, 09:48 AM
This was ehhh, both didn't bring too much to the table. I got Swerve here tho cuz he seemed just a bit more consistent. The Tomlin line was the freshest outta the whole battle.. I can only base a winner off that alone. Neither brought much, like I said. Props to both, regardless.

Vote- Swerve

Allen Knight
12-04-2013, 03:46 PM
paul walker

vs

tomlin, unreleased issues


v/swerve, decent battle, un has some cool concepts just needs to work on wordin
an he'll be ight, swerve was just alot more consistent here tbh props to both.

CtrlF4
12-04-2013, 05:46 PM
5-1 Swerve wins