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Frank
02-13-2013, 06:41 PM
A cool customer breathes a sigh of relief as he finds the # for his higher release,
In a pocket, in the side of his jeans, a washing machine has made the numbers on this piece of paper hiero to read
555 5559???? Sharpie in green with a graffiti artists nonchalant mystique
Humidified on high dry till the numbers seeped through the target receipt and looked like the mark of the beast: 666-6666...
Tide foamin coatin his mouthpiece, all his tartary teeth,
Hes smiling brightly at me - blinding me from gleams of bargain brand bleach
The smell of laundry makes me think of green pastures, the blue skyís the retarded retreats
Lil bo peeps rolling up downy sheets - disregarded the sheep

Coke in white clouds drift apart from the dreams
Iím shooting the breezeí drawing blood color of the Heart when it bleeds
My Nerves jumpingí like trampolines through the Cartilage seams
My track-ridden skin is weak. No elasticity. Stretch mark stitches....see?
Rolls up my sleeve.......
I am a Fein.
recharging Until I am redeemed, I reek.., remarkably cant recall being clean.
8 balls in my sneaks, marshmallow on the balls of my feet,
Like Smores reforming from heat, throw on another log - somebody sawing the tree

2-time felon hearing the courts readjourn will be brief
Witnesses reanimating my reality being sworn in to speak
The sketch artist draws me revolting as can be
Gateway drugs
Iím speaking from the wall behind the screen

"In recent memory, has reefa been a necessity, part of your nausea regime?
We found Acid reflux in your esophagus - gauzed up by the D's
All the furniture rearranged - coffee beans frothing steam...
Refrigerator door - open a Jar, bean stalks on a lean..."
Caution!
The fog from the leafs causes a serene revolving Miserere..
Repeated life sentence we resolve sinner sinning sprees like reward beneficiaries
Living in the Lawn like honey I shrunk the kids - dwarf the imagery
Going to war with a blades of grass, cutting the head off a centipede
Hiding like a recluse reappearing confused in a spinners seize
The bank wouldn't reapprove me cause my bong cost was in the G's
Readjustment on the mortgage forged - double-crossing T's
Reinforcing me to believe I have no remorse..,

"Rehabilitation wouldnít reform this creep.."

"We recorded your tweets about the O.Z's and reported it to the New York police
You was on a RE-UP
and your reception was stormy and staticy the result of the category four in the East
You refastened your seat belt and floored your accord through a jeep"
Reflexes redirected by the reflection pouring the beam
"They say you reap what you sow; I just hope you don't knit the draws in the Bing
The judge is reasonable just no rebuttals - back and forths aint his thing"

Youíre a born again Christian, rebaptized in the faucet of spring
Youíre reapplying yourself, pursuing your gardening degree

"Please reconsider locking me behind bars where the light is hardly seen"

The rose in the concretes suffering from harvest THC

Stressed out grey hair starting to recede
Rebellious nature isnít ideal conditions for the tallest of the breeds
Relinquish knowing my regrowth will garner in your greed
Youíll rejuvenate in another form, refreshed, farmer sprawling seeds...
Rejoice while the Sun beads sweat you gone' taste the salt and heave
Recasting shadows,a culprit, a thief, watering the vault of weed

I never thought of histories repercussions I was only warned they repeat

I donít remember how many times I measured and remeasured reassured of the peak

Solitaire is a nightmare, tanning under UV rays like resorts on the beach

Remarrying, rewinding my honeymoon in my cerebral cortex for weeks

Redilberate while I reconstruct photosynthesis so my pores could breathe
Call a recess so I can resuscitate myself unhinge my jaws and wheeze

Ejected out the car seat...A reject; I got no rapport on the street
They want redemption for the night I listened to redemption crossed the intersection absorbing the beat

Angry mob reception outside the courthouse roars in the streets
The victims recovery relived in the sting of the vocal cord scream
I wish we could rekindle the moment and abort this disease
Rebuild, unfortunately, the chances of you rebounding are the worst in the league
Your reemergence is meek, I wanna reimburse you... patience is a virtue, believe
I'm gunna find the one who referred you to the merciless me

Reverse the verdict I'm not reaffirming my plea
Iím burning for eternity if religion serves me correctly I revert from my knees
The almighty returning predetermined to succeed
Relocate me carefully - their rehearsing my murder -guns out their curtains they'll squeeze
Finding a vein for my vaccination was murder as they reinserted the needl.....
I regurgitated crack rocks
Ones I was saving to refurbish my queen
Replenish my team - shield them from all the repellent debris
I regret running that red light - repenting from speed
The judge readdressing me with resentment, sovereign
Removing me - now renown for the death of a jostle teen

In a docile retreat I recount where I had refound the key
I see workers in reassembly lines putting in air bags honking the horn with the proudest of beeps
I see me relapsing behind the wheel Kapow! !

ím asleep

Theyíre trying to revive you- a vow they would keep
A republican, about to retire - white house out of reach
Doused in gasoline bound by defeat city council reassigned to a crouch in a seat
You renewed the laws on drugs, refined them down to a sleet
Then a snowplow reburied your regime under a thousand pounds for free
The whole region was a remote click away from boosting the economy,
Pushing packs of LOUD
shout and scream
They couldn't resist that shit.
It restricted their blood vessels like submarines without machines
It reminded me of your car going up in flames no fountains leak could drown the heat.
I wish my breaks were safe and sound not sleek
I wish it were repairable; I feel terrible like your body in the ICU for whats now been weeks

Allow me to reiterate my innocence from the white horse -
Remount the beast
Straight jacket - off white like 1950's wedding gowns in keep
ím off white, my nostrils haven't seen the milky cream since the cows been beefed
My pupils eclipse into a round opaque looking around astounded as the out of towners meet and ground their teeth

I am responsible for the laboratory crowned with reefs
All the drugs in my system can be retraced to the second hand smoked In my house when I was three
How do I respond to cross questioning -
No one vouching for me?
Crossing genetics, locked into my couch while I breed
Witness in the stand is clowning me pouting it's cheeks
They can't restrain me I'm 2 wild pow! Pow! pow! I've been sneaked...
The officers blare "FREEZE!"
I hit the ground like a tree
My judge refuses insanity;
brows furrow in the crowd like the brownest of leafs

"Any last requests?

Would you like to pay your last respects now? Or be at peace?"

Wheres the reset button when you need it
- controller down -
this just a dream

Yes your honor, revoke my license... this life is replaceable
I need to reproduce my seed so my time on earth will be re traceable
Recruit every aching ounce of energy into everything relateable
Until none of my information is retainable

Retractable sun roof shedding light on us in the recreational
I'm reluctant to make a move, until I see my resemblance, some poisonous plant, replete with baneful juice

The man who study the Re-up keeps the green stained wound

Sweet revenge grows harsh,


Purple Haze Perfume


-frank

Frank
02-14-2013, 03:52 PM
100 lines

try it sometime

Split
02-14-2013, 04:41 PM
1) I'm not racist?
2) as you wish man, feed deleted.

Fig
02-14-2013, 07:06 PM
Coke in white clouds drift apart from the dreams Iím shooting the breezeí drawing blood color of the Heart when it bleeds My Nerves jumpingí like trampolines through the Cartilage seams My track-ridden skin is weak. No elasticity. Stretch mark stitches....see? Rolls up my sleeve....... I am a Fein. recharging Until I am redeemed, I reek.., remarkably cant recall being clean. 8 balls in my sneaks, marshmallow on the balls of my feet, Like Smores reforming from heat, throw on another log - somebody sawing the tree

I liked this part. A lot of quotable lines running through this piece. The balance of metaphor and storyline is very well accomplished here. It kept me interested despite the length. Sweet drop, can tell you put work into your pieces.

Geno
02-15-2013, 06:55 AM
This is insanely epic. Long as fuck.
I did read, and I will feed better over the weekend. Just stopping by for now.
Be on the lookout for the open mic fight nights frank (tk2g). Winners receive accomps.

Frank
02-19-2013, 06:10 PM
Cool man, I think you dropped critique on netcees already so don't sweat it

For anyone wondering why it's a 100 lines

A nigga know a lot of Re words

dat simple

330
02-23-2013, 06:09 PM
dude thats a sick drop. im lovin the smart words. Long story, but pretty damn good.

Reverse the verdict I'm not reaffirming my plea
Iím burning for eternity if religion serves me correctly I revert from my knees
The almighty returning predetermined to succeed
Relocate me carefully - their rehearsing my murder -guns out their curtains they'll squeeze
Finding a vein for my vaccination was murder as they reinserted the needl.....
I regurgitated crack rocks
Ones I was saving to refurbish my queen
Replenish my team - shield them from all the repellent debris
I regret running that red light - repenting from speed
The judge readdressing me with resentment, sovereign
Removing me - now renown for the death of a jostle teen



^ favorite part man.

Frank
02-24-2013, 11:49 PM
Thank you sir. I does try.

Frank
01-14-2014, 06:44 PM
Thank you to Pancakebrah for qouting this piece in the tournament magazine.

What made you pick this piece? Afterall I have gazillions. Why didn't you qoute the number line? That was always my fav

Eŋg
02-15-2014, 12:34 PM
i read this.