Seth Scheinberg (1-0) vs Sebastian Brawl (1-0) - SEBASTIAN WINS

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NBL Season 7
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Due Saturday, December 7th

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Seth Scheinberg Sebastian Brawl

[Sebastian Brawl]

I intend on posting 16. if you post before me, it's whatever.
GL

[~RustyGunZ~]

lol

[Sebastian Brawl]

my 16 is done Seth Scheinberg for whenever you are ready to drop

give him the ext Sharp Nine

[~RustyGunZ~]

I might drop tonight, leave this open if you'd like

[Sebastian Brawl]

Seth Scheinberg aka Knucklehead

Get a greyhound here

I'll stab you in the waiting area

Pffft! Seth ain't bout dat lyfe, so don't even speak to be
You'd b scared dumb at that station- 2 escape you'll change radio frequencies
Honest tho, my combo flow are harmful blows w.injury links
I gotta monster punch.. yours are tropical mixed w.that energy drink
Vic caught you calling him out on an sneak.#facepalm
He asked "Who are you talking to?" You'll b like,"Jake.. from State Farm"
Vic'll flawless ya & you'll walk away w.A tragic hobble
Only time we'll see Knuckles punchin Hush is in Batman graphic novels
If you knew who I was you'd be exposed/naked.Highly silent..
..a frail white bitch swingin on my black balls- Yea, you'd b Miley Cyrus
You can't make friction w.that caveman face looking stupidly
We won't see this bitch make fire work.. fuck you think you are, Jewbilee?
You look like hell, boy.No broad'll ever let you stroke it in her..
Cauz you look like Hellboy from the comic books & motion pictures
Ya business is my business & hustling in front of ya flex is greater
I get money fucking w.your property, Seth.. so tell the wifey I'll txt her l8er ;-)



Oh & Happy Hanukkah

[~RustyGunZ~]

Gat
Hat
Cat
Rat
Scat
Flat
Mat
Brrrattttt
In the streets I'll fuck u up & make u nibble the curb, mate
Then best believe I'll put Sebastian Under the Sea... Little Mermaid
You're worth nothing, u couldn't champ the weakest tourney queer
2 bars vs. ur weeks work & we'll still see ya Fall, Brawl.. worse than this years

[Ryan 12]

lol

props to sebastian for the effort but there were no real punches in ur verse, punch/drink concepts are played as fuck, n also the balls/miley cyrus shit is old bro

vs

You're worth nothing, u couldn't champ the weakest tourney queer
2 bars vs. ur weeks work & we'll still see ya Fall, Brawl.. worse than this years




vote - the jew

[Lotto Smirk]

lol at knucklehead posting 2 bars

sebastian none of your punches really hit seen the monster line millions of times and quite alot of them had already been done b4

seth
both bars were quite decent enough to take this

vote- seth

[Concepz]

Honest tho, my combo flow are harmful blows w.injury links
I gotta monster punch.. yours are tropical mixed w.that energy drink

vs

You're worth nothing, u couldn't champ the weakest tourney queer
2 bars vs. ur weeks work & we'll still see ya Fall, Brawl.. worse than this years


Well..sebastian..u had wording trauma. here, alot of misses

seth the little mermaid concept was weak worded aswell as played. if u wouldv'e flipped it less generic u would have won, obviously you onky dropped 4 lines which makes your misses worse than his...

vote-sebastian

[KwaL!ty]

i only did 4 lines vs 4 line break down ..


&

w/ that being said Seth takes this .. even though both seemed half assed, next time Set why not just post the whole thing man ??

[Unfukwitable]

Pffft! Seth ain't bout dat lyfe, so don't even speak to be
You'd b scared dumb at that station- 2 escape you'll change radio frequencies
-wasn't feeling this .
Honest tho, my combo flow are harmful blows w.injury links
I gotta monster punch.. yours are tropical mixed w.that energy drink
- this was ight , kinda played .
Vic caught you calling him out on an sneak.#facepalm
He asked "Who are you talking to?" You'll b like,"Jake.. from State Farm"
-funny but wasn't a solid hit .
Vic'll flawless ya & you'll walk away w.A tragic hobble
Only time we'll see Knuckles punchin Hush is in Batman graphic novels
- wording fucked this up .
If you knew who I was you'd be exposed/naked.Highly silent..
..a frail white bitch swingin on my black balls- Yea, you'd b Miley Cyrus
- lml this was igh .
You can't make friction w.that caveman face looking stupidly
We won't see this bitch make fire work.. fuck you think you are, Jewbilee?
- ehh nah, ain't hit .
You look like hell, boy.No broad'll ever let you stroke it in her..
Cauz you look like Hellboy from the comic books & motion pictures
- wording was bad .
Ya business is my business & hustling in front of ya flex is greater
I get money fucking w.your property, Seth.. so tell the wifey I'll txt her l8er ;-)
- wasn't a good way to close out .


vs.

Gat
Hat
- ....
Cat
Rat
-.....
Scat
Flat
-.....
Mat
Brrrattttt
-.... uh
In the streets I'll fuck u up & make u nibble the curb, mate
Then best believe I'll put Sebastian Under the Sea... Little Mermaid
- I wasn't feeling this .
You're worth nothing, u couldn't champ the weakest tourney queer
2 bars vs. ur weeks work & we'll still see ya Fall, Brawl.. worse than this years
- this was ok ain't like the wording .


One got this easy The other wasted 8 lines and had 1 okay bar Imo Idk why he ain't try but I vote ... Sebastian

[CtrlF4]

V/Sebastian...no doubt knucks two bars were better than Sebastian's verse but Sebastian wasn't bad enough to lose to four lines maybe six but not four but yeah Sebastian for effort

[Tic]

Seth Scheinberg aka Knucklehead



Pffft! Seth ain't bout dat lyfe, so don't even speak to be
You'd b scared dumb at that station- 2 escape you'll change radio frequencies
Not really feeling this. Would've helped to lead up to your punch in the setup.
Honest tho, my combo flow are harmful blows w.injury links
I gotta monster punch.. yours are tropical mixed w.that energy drink
Better, but still not a hard punch.
Vic caught you calling him out on an sneak.#facepalm
He asked "Who are you talking to?" You'll b like,"Jake.. from State Farm"
Funny, but didn't rhyme and didn't have much behind it.
Vic'll flawless ya & you'll walk away w.A tragic hobble
Only time we'll see Knuckles punchin Hush is in Batman graphic novels
"Vic'll flawless ya?" Lolwut? Wording hurt this a bit, but it wasn't bad.
If you knew who I was you'd be exposed/naked.Highly silent..
..a frail white bitch swingin on my black balls- Yea, you'd b Miley Cyrus
Ha, okay, this isn't bad. But terribly worded.
You can't make friction w.that caveman face looking stupidly
We won't see this bitch make fire work.. fuck you think you are, Jewbilee?
*Uhhhhh
You look like hell, boy.No broad'll ever let you stroke it in her..
Cauz you look like Hellboy from the comic books & motion pictures
Funny, but not really feelin it.
Ya business is my business & hustling in front of ya flex is greater
I get money fucking w.your property, Seth.. so tell the wifey I'll txt her l8er ;-)
No.



Oh & Happy Hanukkah

Gat
Hat
Cat
Rat
Scat
Flat
Mat
Brrrattttt
In the streets I'll fuck u up & make u nibble the curb, mate
Then best believe I'll put Sebastian Under the Sea... Little Mermaid
This is okay.
You're worth nothing, u couldn't champ the weakest tourney queer
2 bars vs. ur weeks work & we'll still see ya Fall, Brawl.. worse than this years
Not bad. Probably BOTB which doesn't say much.
Sebastian - You are way too direct. Think of similes / metaphors / idioms, etc you could use. Only time you really thought outside the box was the first bar. Otherwise you were really direct with not many good punches. Be creative and try to tie it w/ your opponent.

Seth - Lol @ your blatant cocky move posting 4 lines. They were ok, but you can't expect to win posting 4 lines when your opponent posted 14. I don't care how dope the lines are.

Vote - Sebastian

[Alvin Karpis]

V/Sebastian...no doubt knucks two bars were better than Sebastian's verse but Sebastian wasn't bad enough to lose to four lines maybe six but not four but yeah Sebastian for effort


Agree w/ this wholeheartedly

v/SB

[Plot]

Yeah, you can't win with a two bar verse, medicore bars at that.
Sebastian put in the effort and had some okay concepts if a little poorly worded.
V-Seb

[Apex]

Lol seth 2 mediocre lines almost won it just needed a 1 dope bar n it was over lmao at set

V/sab

[Greed]

V/Sebastian...no doubt knucks two bars were better than Sebastian's verse but Sebastian wasn't bad enough to lose to four lines maybe six but not four but yeah Sebastian for effort

[ill nik-A]

Lol knuckle lost, the two punches were horrible IMO
Sebastian had radio frequency which was ehhh, State Farm line made me chuckle but the wording almost killed it... Not much either but better attempts
Total disrespect from Seth

Vote seb

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Pffft! Seth ain't bout dat lyfe, so don't even speak to be
You'd b scared dumb at that station- 2 escape you'll change radio frequencies
Vic'll flawless ya & you'll walk away w.A tragic hobble
Only time we'll see Knuckles punchin Hush is in Batman graphic novels

The opener was dope to me...
U had a lot of cool concepts but u didn't word them correctly...
Hell boy and Jubilee could've hit hitter...

In the streets I'll fuck u up & make u nibble the curb, mate
Then best believe I'll put Sebastian Under the Sea... Little Mermaid

if u had an actual verse and more lines like this u would've won...
other line was weak...

Sebastian was more consistent...

vote- SB...

Bye...