Apex (1-1) vs Plot (1-1) - PLOT WINS

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Apex Plot

[Plot]

Here I am,
5

[Apex]

Coo 10.

[Plot]

Ext, just a few hours due to timezones and work schedules.

[Apex]

Iight

[Plot]

Clown then beat you, rock solid? your undoubtedly see-through,
If you’re the Apex, then I guess I’m the mountain beneath you.
Stop stating you smoke dro, fake shit and I’m calling you stale kid,
You wouldn’t know dopeness, unless you asked the board like Mael did.*
No one believes your gayness, I'm more evolved at text n spitting ink,
And the only people who care 'bout Ape X...keep asking for the Missing Link.
So dudes a pathetic geek whose dissing stinks, and I’m dropping him easy,
But he might know some trix of the trade, still can’t cop a freebie.
Hopping in the Oct with Plot? And get stuck in holds till your neck breaks,
Then the Full Nelson Slammer treatment puts you away for decades.


*http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=36379

[Apex]

Me n ya girl stay makin movies, she want them hrly flix
Came found me cuz every other movie Plots climaxed in 5 mins
Get her, she reached her limit n pass her off with no gimmick
Shit she only bangbros now, 2 find her he put a .com at the end of it
Truth be told ur far from dope by miles son, the spread sheets done
The kid needs that miracle wip, n this faggot climb into a sandwich bun
Its fun how I David these goliath,take they hoes, bread 2 role a L n spark it
The only Gaint u stepped through was with that food stamp card at the supermarket

[KwaL!ty]

Clown then beat you, rock solid? your undoubtedly see-through,
If you’re the Apex, then I guess I’m the mountain beneath you.

vs


nothing ...


Vote- plot came more polished, his misses where better even though it seemed like a no show verse .. Apex for making us wait you couldve thrown a punch fam ? i thought ive seen you come better then that .. Anyways vote goes to Plot for having a quotable concept ..

[Unfukwitable]

I didn't really like the execution of lines a couple cool concepts but the wording didn't do them justice, Felt one bars we're slightly better in comparison but this may go either way hopefully yall sharpen up the wording and get the full potential of your concepts out . v/ Plot

[Tic]

Not sure why Apex only went 8 in a 10 bar battle. That immediately puts him at a disadvantage. None of his lines really did any justice. The wording was off in almost every line and it really took any sting away that the punches could have had. The ideas weren't bad, but the execution was lacking.

Plot, your execution was better, but still lacking. In order to get the punches home, you need to have effective wording. We spoke about this before and the wording is still a bit off. I still think that screwdriver line was the best line I've seen from you thus far, but this verse just seemed a bit rushed to me. However, it was enough to win.

Vote - Plot

[Plethora]

Clown then beat you, rock solid? your undoubtedly see-through,
If you’re the Apex, then I guess I’m the mountain beneath you.

This alright, a light jab

Stop stating you smoke dro, fake shit and I’m calling you stale kid,
You wouldn’t know dopeness, unless you asked the board like Mael did.*

this is a statement, not really a punch

No one believes your gayness, I'm more evolved at text n spitting ink,
And the only people who care 'bout Ape X...keep asking for the Missing Link.

this was cool

So dudes a pathetic geek whose dissing stinks, and I’m dropping him easy,
But he might know some trix of the trade, still can’t cop a freebie.

nope

Hopping in the Oct with Plot? And get stuck in holds till your neck breaks,
Then the Full Nelson Slammer treatment puts you away for decades.

statement, no punch


*http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=36379


Me n ya girl stay makin movies, she want them hrly flix
Came found me cuz every other movie Plots climaxed in 5 mins

this was better than plots opener

Get her, she reached her limit n pass her off with no gimmick
Shit she only bangbros now, 2 find her he put a .com at the end of it

forced, wording is off. A choppy read for me

Truth be told ur far from dope by miles son, the spread sheets done
The kid needs that miracle wip, n this faggot climb into a sandwich bun

nah this is corny

Its fun how I David these goliath,take they hoes, bread 2 role a L n spark it
The only Gaint u stepped through was with that food stamp card at the supermarket

your wording is making me not want to read any further, this punch is a stretch, good angle bad execution


v/PLot he had the better verse imo

[Alvin Karpis]

v/plot for fresher concepts

apex had better wording but concepts were really old and not flipped well
Plot mael line could have hit harder but nice current event
Plot got it

[CtrlF4]

Plot had

missing link, mael


vs


apex had

bangbros



v/plot...I thought he had better misses and his hits were a little harder

[Lotto Smirk]

Clown then beat you, rock solid? your undoubtedly see-through,
If you’re the Apex, then I guess I’m the mountain beneath you

vs

at a push

Get her, she reached her limit n pass her off with no gimmick
Shit she only bangbros now, 2 find her he put a .com at the end of it

badly worded

v- plot for better misses

[Greed]

Missing link

Vs

Nothing

V plot

Eh.

[ill nik-A]

Weak battle, plot had the opener, nothing else here grabbed my attention
Plot wins

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Clown then beat you, rock solid? your undoubtedly see-through,
If you’re the Apex, then I guess I’m the mountain beneath you.
Stop stating you smoke dro, fake shit and I’m calling you stale kid,
You wouldn’t know dopeness, unless you asked the board like Mael did.*
No one believes your gayness, I'm more evolved at text n spitting ink,
And the only people who care 'bout Ape X...keep asking for the Missing Link.

I quoted the first line because I really don't get it...
I loved the wording but wtf does that mean?...
The Mael line was nice I was thinking about using a similar line but forgot about it...
U don't have to explain the lines or add a link to someone else's thread...
Ape line was cool but wording made it come off forced...

Me n ya girl stay makin movies, she want them hrly flix
Came found me cuz every other movie Plots climaxed in 5 mins
Get her, she reached her limit n pass her off with no gimmick
Shit she only bangbros now, 2 find her he put a .com at the end of it

The opner is way too obvious to use against him but it wasn't a bad line...
I liked the bangbros line but it lacked sting...
Rest of your verse was too weak...

Plot got this with more creativity...
Vote- Plot...

Bye...