Tic Tac (2-1) vs Shank Sinatra (2-1) - BOREDOM WINS

[Sharp]

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Tic Tac Shank Sinatra

[Boredom]

check, 14. lets see how many played shank flips you can muster.

[Tic]

Check. 14.

[Tic]

Boredom I'll drop after you. You've no showed me once and I've been NS the last 2 weeks in this league...

[Tic]

I mayyy need til tomorrow but I doubt you'll post by then anyway.

[Tic]

Are you ready to drop? You've been online and have said nothing. Boredom

[Boredom]

will post today.

[Tic]

My verse is ready. I'll send it to Sharp Nine early tmr. I'm not near a computer and am in no rush since you haven't posted.

That cool, Sharp? Or do I need to send it tonight?

[Sharp]

It's good

[Boredom]

if i'm at the club i got dimes who grind on me. ur a loser n homo
it takes 2 to tango n u dance alone..even both of ur w's are from no shows
& you are a SHOOK faggot. This a body bag in the fast lane
I’ll put a death certificate on tic tac toe quicker then playing that game
When I have hot Sex I’m balls deep in a steaming shower w/ hoes
For u hot sex involves 50$, a morgue n any body that died an hour ago
I get massive props. When it comes to text this fag should stop
Ticklish has the same effect as that so no wonder ur a laughing stock
& ur a fruit who uses fruits as sex toys /w boys. This is a fact
Tic Tac’d love to get that melanin and I don’t mean wishing he was black
This whack fuckers stunned, w/ played concepts that lack something son
Faggot u could un intentionally champ that tourney chyeaa wants to run.

[Tic]

He's known to skip out when anyone approaches this fag
His skill is always in question, so we don't need to go back to the 90s to notice Sinbad
Kid has the worst ideas, that's why no one posts in his threads
He never shuts up, and even when he tried to keep Hush, got outspoken instead
We know he's a bitch, at the club he'll 'pop lock & drop it' for service
Since this chicken tender, I'll put Boars head in a bag quicker than Stop & Shop workers
With constant no-shows who could have respect for this lame
Once he sees a Dope line he'll withdraw without Meth entering veins
Check his 'record,' on Black Friday he'd be hard-pressed to find a deal
Cut your losses and quit, Hank, cuz the only time you'll gain points w/ text is behind the wheel
Fgt is soft & begs for attention, so he'll love the publicity of this beating he suffers
His idea of Fall Brawl is getting Bags ready, unzipped while throwing leaves @ each other

[Unfukwitable]

When I have hot Sex I’m balls deep in a steaming shower w/ hoes
For u hot sex involves 50$, a morgue n any body that died an hour ago
This whack fuckers stunned, w/ played concepts that lack something son
Faggot u could un intentionally champ that tourney chyeaa wants to run.

vs

With constant no-shows who could have respect for this lame
Once he sees a Dope line he'll withdraw without Meth entering veins
Check his 'record,' on Black Friday he'd be hard-pressed to find a deal
Cut your losses and quit, Hank, cuz the only time you'll gain points w/ text is behind the wheel

One was just better line for line the other had some ideas that wasn't set up correctly or awkwardly worded which took away from his drop v/ Tic

[KwaL!ty]

When I have hot Sex I’m balls deep in a steaming shower w/ hoes
For u hot sex involves 50$, a morgue n any body that died an hour ago
This whack fuckers stunned, w/ played concepts that lack something son
Faggot u could un intentionally champ that tourney chyeaa wants to run.


vs


We know he's a bitch, at the club he'll 'pop lock & drop it' for service
Since this chicken tender, I'll put Boars head in a bag quicker than Stop & Shop workers
With constant no-shows who could have respect for this lame
Once he sees a Dope line he'll withdraw without Meth entering veins
Check his 'record,' on Black Friday he'd be hard-pressed to find a deal
Cut your losses and quit, Hank, cuz the only time you'll gain points w/ text is behind the wheel


Vote- Tic's misses had better connection then Bore's did, i did think that the Chyeeah punch was LOTB though ... this was better then i thought it would be .. Figured Tic would body Bore but it ended up being a pretty even match ..

[StarFaggot]

Boredom:

if i'm at the club i got dimes who grind on me. ur a loser n homo
it takes 2 to tango n u dance alone..even both of ur w's are from no shows
this could've been something but delivery was meh
& you are a SHOOK faggot. This a body bag in the fast lane
I’ll put a death certificate on tic tac toe quicker then playing that game
No the punch didn't connect
When I have hot Sex I’m balls deep in a steaming shower w/ hoes
For u hot sex involves 50$, a morgue n any body that died an hour ago
No sir
I get massive props. When it comes to text this fag should stop
Ticklish has the same effect as that so no wonder ur a laughing stock
Maybe I don't fully get this but this isn't good.
& ur a fruit who uses fruits as sex toys /w boys. This is a fact
Tic Tac’d love to get that melanin and I don’t mean wishing he was black
lol.. nice wp
This whack fuckers stunned, w/ played concepts that lack something son
Faggot u could un intentionally champ that tourney chyeaa wants to run.
decentish, current

Melanin and your ending bar was cool.. Lot of misses though but they had potential just lacked execution


Tic Tac:

He's known to skip out when anyone approaches this fag
His skill is always in question, so we don't need to go back to the 90s to notice Sinbad
Sinbad nameplay is ok but whole set up is kinda wack
Kid has the worst ideas, that's why no one posts in his threads
He never shuts up, and even when he tried to keep Hush, got outspoken instead
no sir
We know he's a bitch, at the club he'll 'pop lock & drop it' for service
Since this chicken tender, I'll put Boars head in a bag quicker than Stop & Shop workers
Chicken tender and Boars head aren't the same animal.. this is a no for me
With constant no-shows who could have respect for this lame
Once he sees a Dope line he'll withdraw without Meth entering veins
playyyyed concept
Check his 'record,' on Black Friday he'd be hard-pressed to find a deal
Cut your losses and quit, Hank, cuz the only time you'll gain points w/ text is behind the wheel
No sir
Fgt is soft & begs for attention, so he'll love the publicity of this beating he suffers
His idea of Fall Brawl is getting Bags ready, unzipped while throwing leaves @ each other
nahh, could've been something

all misses here.. some ok stuff had it been developed more


MVGT Boredom for less misses.

[Plethora]

if i'm at the club i got dimes who grind on me. ur a loser n homo
it takes 2 to tango n u dance alone..even both of ur w's are from no shows

ha, personal but came off as a humorous jab at most

& you are a SHOOK faggot. This a body bag in the fast lane
I’ll put a death certificate on tic tac toe quicker then playing that game

nah, too predictable, came off corny to me

When I have hot Sex I’m balls deep in a steaming shower w/ hoes
For u hot sex involves 50$, a morgue n any body that died an hour ago

Lol..this was aiight another jab with humor

I get massive props. When it comes to text this fag should stop
Ticklish has the same effect as that so no wonder ur a laughing stock

okayish

& ur a fruit who uses fruits as sex toys /w boys. This is a fact
Tic Tac’d love to get that melanin and I don’t mean wishing he was black
nice, good wordplay

This whack fuckers stunned, w/ played concepts that lack something son
Faggot u could un intentionally champ that tourney chyeaa wants to run.

lol

He's known to skip out when anyone approaches this fag
His skill is always in question, so we don't need to go back to the 90s to notice Sinbad

ehh alright, like ur idea

Kid has the worst ideas, that's why no one posts in his threads
He never shuts up, and even when he tried to keep Hush, got outspoken instead

wording is off here, choppy this is a jab

We know he's a bitch, at the club he'll 'pop lock & drop it' for service
Since this chicken tender, I'll put Boars head in a bag quicker than Stop & Shop workers

no this is terrible, aero is correct in his analysis, you made no sense boards head is not chicken lol...

With constant no-shows who could have respect for this lame
Once he sees a Dope line he'll withdraw without Meth entering veins

Meth isn't dope...so this is a reach and played

Check his 'record,' on Black Friday he'd be hard-pressed to find a deal
Cut your losses and quit, Hank, cuz the only time you'll gain points w/ text is behind the wheel

nah, this isn't doing it for me, there is no sting to text behind the wheel

Fgt is soft & begs for attention, so he'll love the publicity of this beating he suffers
His idea of Fall Brawl is getting Bags ready, unzipped while throwing leaves @ each other

lol


V/ Shank, he had better punches and wording.

[StarFaggot]

2-2

[Sharp]

alright guys lets be cool now

I see how boredom could be concerned, since your votes were pretty similar. That said, there really isn't a history suggesting these guys have anything shady going on and retroactively saying 'this vote can't count' isn't really a great move. Let's just relax and see if these votes will actually effect anything before we get angry.

[Alvin Karpis]

this wasn't the best battle, never heard of tic tac


boredom didn't have much but melanin was kinda cool
tic had concepts but wording was off, a lot of misses in this battle but
I have boredom taking this barely

v/Boredom

[Apex]

Melanin was coo everything else was meh tic's concepts were cool but wording is what got him so boredom edged this

V/SS

[Lotto Smirk]

When I have hot Sex I’m balls deep in a steaming shower w/ hoes
For u hot sex involves 50$, a morgue n any body that died an hour ago
This whack fuckers stunned, w/ played concepts that lack something son
Faggot u could un intentionally champ that tourney chyeaa wants to run.


vs


We know he's a bitch, at the club he'll 'pop lock & drop it' for service
Since this chicken tender, I'll put Boars head in a bag quicker than Stop & Shop workers
With constant no-shows who could have respect for this lame
Once he sees a Dope line he'll withdraw without Meth entering veins

had this quite close but i think after re-reading boredom just edged it, I've got it even on quoteables but i think bore's misses were slightly better

[Plot]

I concur with Aeros breakdown, Boredom takes this one.
Better concepts, and wording. Plus the dope/meth line was a no-no.

[Greed]

V bore


Tic last 4 were decent but bore had better misses

[ill nik-A]

I liked that morgue line tbh, I think it was the best one here, I've seen the chicken tender line done differently and that was tics best, meh I guess I got boredom

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

& ur a fruit who uses fruits as sex toys /w boys. This is a fact
Tic Tac’d love to get that melanin and I don’t mean wishing he was black
This whack fuckers stunned, w/ played concepts that lack something son
Faggot u could un intentionally champ that tourney chyeaa wants to run.

I think you started off weak and ended strong...
Melanin was your best line...
Chyeaa and toe tag line were cool but the wording was off...

He's known to skip out when anyone approaches this fag
His skill is always in question, so we don't need to go back to the 90s to notice Sinbad
Kid has the worst ideas, that's why no one posts in his threads
He never shuts up, and even when he tried to keep Hush, got outspoken instead
Check his 'record,' on Black Friday he'd be hard-pressed to find a deal
Cut your losses and quit, Hank, cuz the only time you'll gain points w/ text is behind the wheel

Think u started off strong and trailed off in the end...
Boars head was a complete miss...
All around your wording was off in some places but I liked were u were going with your concepts...

Tic was more consistent....

Vote- Tic Tac...

Bye...

[Boredom]

8-3

[Tic]

Boredom We will have to do a tiebreaker another time considering we're 1-1.

[Boredom]

Long bar dont count for
Shit to me if that's what your reffering to but sure...

[Tic]

Long bar dont count for
Shit to me if that's what your reffering to but sure...
There's always an excuse with you. Your sense of faggotry is strong.