random thoughts

[Dove Dozer]

This just spawned off something i was writing and i kept going with it. Holler.


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Everything i spits cursed, verse like a chainsaw..
With so much flow as it soothes let the rain pour..
Ya know that its soldier approved, cause i aim for..
Marksman with the motion and grooves, when the flames all..
Liquid.. floatin as smoothe. An insane brawl
In my head, i cope with the blues. Im degranged. y'all probably
Have a stroke from the news.. that my game's on
Check my flow, the ocean it moves, cause my brain's raw..
Messed up Soaked in the hues everyday's all
Good so ill coast and ill cruise, get my blaze on...
always stay focused and couth.. when i was raised wrong..
I never really broke from the truth, but i stay strong..

[Mael]

It was decent. Multies were pretty simplistic. Mentioning your flow repeatedly doesn't help with your actual flow, however. Would recommend you make it longer next time, and preferably stick to a specific topic. Overall, good effort. Keep elevating.