Orc (2-0) vs Sebastian Brawl (2-0) - ORC WINS

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NBL Season 7
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Orc Sebastian Brawl

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[Orc]

j

[Sebastian Brawl]

yup

[Orc]

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we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope
I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes
Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks
Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment
Plus its funny ur whole steez is hopelessly worded
Listen. U cudn't be close to Fresh if Tic Tac ghosted ya verses
But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back
I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts
&&U been wahhhin & cryin so can't hope for clout
This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about
U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die
They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide
&&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals
Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals


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[Sebastian Brawl]

Aliens are invading earth. Unicorn's are the defence in attack.
Flying pigs are on an murderous swarm & Orc still aint winnin this match!
You'za videogame nerd, so your skill lvl's no stressin. Nxt!
When I say "Jump." You'll say, “I'm tryin" while continuously pressin X
Let me put it out there: You're a homo & it's as plain as sin
The way you drag a 'maaaan' out you guys can duet perform “It's Raining Men"
Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze
Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move
& this punchline might be played but idgaf while I'm merkin
^ Bitch. Your lil white ass shakin puts to shame Miley Cyrus twerkin
Runnin & gunnin at Brawl'll get ya deleted. Deaded. It's nothin..
I'll reverse that name you've built, Orc.. to give ya life The Cro Editin Button
Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter
Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider

illy

[CtrlF4]

Orc had

Opener, cold shoulder, jump street


Vs


Sebastian Had

Raining , closer


v/orc...i thought orc hit harder...i felt brawls aggression though lol..it was a lot of action like a old batman comic POW! lol but yeah both were cool but orc

[Unfukwitable]

Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks
Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment
U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die
They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide
&&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals
Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals

vs

Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze
Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move
Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter
Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider

i felt one was more consistant with the lines, He had better landing punches and better misses Imo v/ORC

[Alvin Karpis]

sebastian had the miley cyrus and cro flip which were cool, some bad misses though
orc had a few more lines that stood out so he got this, didn't seem to put forth that much effort though
and i did like sebastian's personal approach

v/orc

[Greed]

Pity votes cold shoulder and fake baby

Vs

Pressin x windmill and twekin

V brawl

I thought the windmill line was cold

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope
I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes
&&U been wahhhin & cryin so can't hope for clout
This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about

these were dope...
doesn't but still did enough to win...

Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter
Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider

this was cool...
windmill could've been worded better...
overall your verse was not fresh...
concepts were old to me...

I think Orc got this with better concepts and wording...
vote- Orc...

Bye...

[Plot]

Orc
we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope
I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes
..okay pers I guess,
Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks
Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment
..I think the rhymes off, but punch is good
Plus its funny ur whole steez is hopelessly worded
Listen. U cudn't be close to Fresh if Tic Tac ghosted ya verses
..nice
But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back
I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts
..I like this, fresh concept but set up is shit
&&U been wahhhin & cryin. so can't hope for clout
This mahfuckas a Fake Baby. He's like the one Strikta posts about
..meh
U ain't an undercova cop but for u this shits do r die
They call ya block Jump Street cuz ppl read ya shit n' commit suicide
..Meh, I was thinking bout 21 when I read it, its okay I guess
&&I'll murda this league, n thats truth for the rivals
Trust if Seb's picking up Steam it's to Iron my suit for the Finals
..Liked this

Seb
Aliens are invading earth. Unicorn's are the defence in attack.
Flying pigs are on an murderous swarm & Orc still aint winnin this match!
..funny but not punching
You'za videogame nerd, so your skill lvl's no stressin. Nxt!
When I say "Jump." You'll say, “I'm tryin" while continuously pressin X
..don't like this much
Let me put it out there: You're a homo & it's as plain as sin
The way you drag a 'maaaan' out you guys can duet perform “It's Raining Men"
..nuh
Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze
Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move
..weird, Like the wp but punch and set up seem strange
& this punchline might be played but idgaf while I'm merkin
^ Bitch. Your lil white ass shakin puts to shame Miley Cyrus twerkin
..nah without a good twist Mileys played
Runnin & gunnin at Brawl'll get ya deleted. Deaded. It's nothin..
I'll reverse that name you've built, Orc.. to give ya life The Cro Editin Button
..this is good, prolly been done before tho
Me?= Victorious fighter. You?= Inglorious writer/ Notorious biter
Ya lines drive's a time machine.. Stuck in the past like a broke dwn DeLorean rider
..rider? sholuda been driver, wasn't that good.

I like Sebs swagger, hes got that but kinda lacks with pushing concepts to work.
Orc got this

[Tic]

we ain't on a same tier. actin like ya shits rly dope
I shut Seth out 4 times. U barely pulled thru vs his 2 lines w/ pity votes
Shhh homie. Yappin like u wilin wen u meet chicks
Bitches dnt give u th Cold Shoulder. U cop that cryogenic treatment
But fuckkk the Burden shit. Gods back
I'll put dude on ICE & we ain't talking Emergency Contacts

Vs.


Jab! Hook! Haymaker! w.my variety of hits, faggot you're wooze
Pssh! All of ya punches blow-> Cauz the windmill's your patented move

V/Orc - better lines and misses. Brawl had ok ideas I guess, but the wording was really off.