Plot (2-1) vs Greed (2-1) - PLOT WINS

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NBL Season 7
Week 6

Due Wednesday, December 18th

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Plot Greed

[Plot]

check, 10 lines

[Greed]

I think you are wack. I was no showed last round and am waiting for you to go first.

[Plot]

Ext?

[Plot]

Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing,
Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving.
He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view.
60-40 to win against the NC punching bag, hes got no authority,
Yeah he's really dope! but If you disagreed, you'd be in the majority.
Thinks his all gangster but he's just a wack job like hit lists,
He aint no fucking Corleone, but I'll give this greaseball the business.
Dude aint got no game he's a no show, like shop window exhibits
So I'm just walking all over this dead beat, like Mall Cops on Christmas.

[Greed]

If you thought after that verse against apex youd be respected your an asshole
No quotables.. the real missing link was the one that redirected me to another battle
With generic setups weak concepts and punchlines that r far from great
If the plot thickens its due to a large supply of snicker bars and cupcakes
Your always missing something important, that's why your wack and whatnot
You couldnt be captain cause you'd have to take a pilot i's away if you want plot
My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts
Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout
U the weakest kid on earth fam, tags on your life should be i remember my first grand
With a pic thats captioned glasses jacket shirt.. call me glasses jacket shirt man

[KwaL!ty]

The opener wAs a light jab it was current but obvious .. The basement wall was a miss no sting there ... The majority was no real punch just a different way of calling him whack.... The mafia tie line was weak the set up was shit bags ... The Christmas mall line was a clear miss as we'll nothing really there ...


Va



I kind of liked the opener from greed to me it connected pretty well ... The plot thickens line could have sting with better wording but ended as a light jab in the end ... The pilot light was nothing was pretty much a miss. ... The xbox ended up as a jab could have been something but the wording kind of tortured it ... Wtf was the jacket shirt man that was a baffling bar like WTF that lost me ..


This battle was kind of even but I have to give it to greed for better jabs and attempts..


Vote greed

[Orc]

I enjoyed plots verse better. Fresher with better concepts. Liked corleone line. Greed had plot thickens but thats been done. Vote gplot. Cool batt

[ill nik-A]

Well this was just weird, plot ur set ups could work if ur punches were constructed better, I get the simplified version of them but u must follow it up with a sting, just an observation...
Greed, uve been battling for a while and yet ur concepts are no where near better, I guess ur attempts were better but nothing worth quoting

Vote greed I guess

[Plot]

Cmon voters

[King Karaoke]

Hi...

Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing,
Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving.
He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view.

first two lines were worded pretty well...
Mall cop line could have been as good but wording was a bit off...

didn't like anything from the other guy...
I felt that his lines were very forced or just didn't make sense at all...

Vote- Plot...

Bye...

[Unfukwitable]

He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view.

vs
My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts
Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout

best line from both wasn't to great tho tbh ... bad wording seems like rushed drops Imo ..v/Plot

[Tic]

Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing,
Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving.
He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view.
60-40 to win against the NC punching bag, hes got no authority,
Yeah he's really dope! but If you disagreed, you'd be in the majority.

Vs.

My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts
Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout


V/Plot - Best verse I've seen from you, Plot. Good stuff. Greed, idk I wasn't really feeling any of your verse at all. The one line above was ok, otherwise the wording was all weird and the concepts really weren't there either.

[Lotto Smirk]

Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing,
Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving.
He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view

vs
My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts
Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout

vote- Plot overall better hits/misses