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Hush
01-23-2013, 11:28 AM
I re invent myself not for respect but not to regress
live life like recess, no regrets cuz not giving a fucks like a reflex
roll up reefer when stressed, revenue reveals my success
real recognize real so the final reveal always redeems me the best
reebok boxes hold every cent of loot I recoupt no sense to refute
money, power, respect, if the shoe fits wear it & it's my religion to boot
it's how my world revolved since the womb, won't repent or regret anytime soon
& if I could rewind my life I'd resume doing the same shit til intombed
regular every day shit 24/7.. reforming is far removed from realisation
reforge a cigar, reheat the resin til eyes start to redden & refuel the sensations
theres really no remedy for relapse regarding brain cells burning out
recognized reefer sounds like refer and the drug games all about word of mouth
rejoice the rejoining of joint to mouth regions, the feeling barely register
release the inner heat without breathing & resume the reunion of blood in my retina

Zen
01-23-2013, 11:44 AM
I liked the verse all the way up until after the intombed line it seems like the flow fell off a little bit to me.

I re invent myself not for respect but not to regress
live life like recess, no regrets cuz not giving a fucks like a reflex
roll up reefer when stressed, revenue reveals my success
real recognize real so the final reveal always redeems me the best
^^Fav part

Nice
01-23-2013, 11:47 AM
no regrets cuz not giving a fucks like a reflex


This part was fire and relatable as fuck. I notice you use alot of slant rhyming and syllable rhyming which i for 1 really like cuz i think it gives it that full hittin affect. some nice meta's and wordplay in there for example the reebox box/shoe/relogion is to boot, the reefer/refer line was dope too. Havent seen too much from u in the open mic here or netcees but i really enjoyed this man. Stay up. If u get some free time can u peep my personal convictions piece. Thnxs


P.s. I always thought u and gow was the same person lol.. Am i wrong?

Geno
01-23-2013, 12:29 PM
Cool flex hush

Dug the opener and the shit about religion to boot. Dope

Had nice schemes as well. Good tto see you in om for a change

Camp Bell
01-23-2013, 12:35 PM
recognized reefer sounds like refer and the drug games all about word of mouth

this whole piece was crack but....this line just sent chills through me, crazy
dope shit yo.

Mike Wrecka
01-23-2013, 04:01 PM
reforge a cigar, reheat the resin til eyes start to redden & refuel the sensations

nice . reforge a cigar is a pretty damn creative way of saying rollin a blunt

this was a cool verse

Frank
02-14-2013, 03:12 PM
you bit my my style


repercussions

you can't reformulate my re flows and act like shit cool.

sign into the topical league ima fuck u up