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CtrlF4
12-15-2013, 11:29 AM
Due Monday

14-16 lines

G'luck

Allen Knight Swerve

Swerve
12-15-2013, 11:31 AM
This has turned into a joke.

Allen Knight
12-15-2013, 11:35 AM
Wtf.?....14 I guess

CtrlF4
12-15-2013, 11:40 AM
Swerve verse was better than strike and Allen mine so w/e

Swerve
12-15-2013, 12:09 PM
Wtf.?....14 I guess

Alright homie.

BUT IMMA SOMERSAULT KICK YOU IN THE FACE SON.

Allen Knight
12-16-2013, 11:46 PM
Aka.Patrick

Me and Allen were going halfsies on this.

You took it from under our nose.

We will make a rival site with blackjack, hookers and beer. We will force you out of the market.

False get the facts straight

U should hit up GOW, told 'em I'd play this faggot kid
Cuz my idea of goin 50/50 on the site means u payin for it full & I run half of it
Swerve in the finals? Lmao, idk if im seeing clear
Ironic constrikt forfeited u last rd,
....wen we can't wrap our heads around the thought of u being here
U love bags & will follow thru wit w.e he wants u to do lame
This faggot shined the wardens shoes more fucking times than andy dufresne
I fuck hos that call me papi, this gay is a fraud
Last time a bitch called trick daddy, she was using the ghetto slip n slide he made in the yard
Ur a faggot snitch, ur whole life been a trip son
Shit paddle tell everything if u full fill his gay ass fantasy of beating him wit one
Ur girl uses u for paper, she's to much for u to handle lame
Wen u give ya dalton of money she's using it to buy me front row tickets to a bengal game
U didnt play baseball for sport, im just ending the doubts
When he has a ball in his mitty fantasies about having a pair of them in his mouth

Swerve
12-17-2013, 12:05 AM
Remember Allen was desperate to buy the site, he begged me in messages,
Wanted to go half and half…even though he was broke working as a Barista making those beverages.
This spic is a crooked cars salesman? Nah, noones believing this fag,
Cause if he ever sold a lemon, it was at the side of the highway with Hush for 5 dollars a bag.
I got no hesitations when I decide to knock you out, dude it aint shit,
Punt you so hard, you’ll be left with a broken jaw and vertebrae like Kevin Huber against Pitt.
I come with an artillery army, you’ll find shards in Allen real deep inside,
I’ll put so many caps in his body…Split’ll pull them out to replace the ones your cousins took off his ride.
You reference Anth in EVERY post, you prolly talk about him in your verses,
Your infatuation with Bags goes far beyond your fondness and love for women’s purses.
I'll start throwing body blows at this faggot, it's a fact you gone lose,
Feed you so many punches, it'll make you so sick even Neigh won't wanna be in your shoes.
Your girl say your sex game is wack, so stop now and quit all your playin,
When it's crunch time, she says your tip amounts to nothing....like AJ Green against the Ravens.

Allen Knight
12-18-2013, 11:44 AM
Votes

Sharp
12-18-2013, 05:53 PM
Swerve in the finals? Lmao, idk if im seeing clear
Ironic constrikt forfeited u last rd,
....wen we can't wrap our heads around the thought of u being here
U love bags & will follow thru wit w.e he wants u to do lame
This faggot shined the wardens shoes more fucking times than andy dufresne
Ur a faggot snitch, ur whole life been a trip son
Shit paddle tell everything if u full fill his gay ass fantasy of beating him wit one
U didnt play baseball for sport, im just ending the doubts
When he has a ball in his mitty fantasies about having a pair of them in his mouth


Remember Allen was desperate to buy the site, he begged me in messages,
Wanted to go half and half…even though he was broke working as a Barista making those beverages.
This spic is a crooked cars salesman? Nah, noones believing this fag,
Cause if he ever sold a lemon, it was at the side of the highway with Hush for 5 dollars a bag.
I come with an artillery army, you’ll find shards in Allen real deep inside,
I’ll put so many caps in his body…Split’ll pull them out to replace the ones your cousins took off his ride.
Your girl say your sex game is wack, so stop now and quit all your playin,
When it's crunch time, she says your tip amounts to nothing....like AJ Green against the Ravens.


alright

first off thanks for not disappointing with this finals guys

This was mad close, I thought the deciding factor here really was who's lines hurt more and swerve was clever as fuck but Allen was harsher. Either guy deserves it but I think ak edged it

V/allen

KwaL!ty
12-19-2013, 09:59 AM
Swerve in the finals? Lmao, idk if im seeing clear
Ironic constrikt forfeited u last rd,
....wen we can't wrap our heads around the thought of u being here
I fuck hos that call me papi, this gay is a fraud
Last time a bitch called trick daddy, she was using the ghetto slip n slide he made in the yard
Ur a faggot snitch, ur whole life been a trip son
Shit paddle tell everything if u full fill his gay ass fantasy of beating him wit one


vs


Remember Allen was desperate to buy the site, he begged me in messages,
Wanted to go half and half…even though he was broke working as a Barista making those beverages.
This spic is a crooked cars salesman? Nah, noones believing this fag,
Cause if he ever sold a lemon, it was at the side of the highway with Hush for 5 dollars a bag.
Your girl say your sex game is wack, so stop now and quit all your playin,
When it's crunch time, she says your tip amounts to nothing....like AJ Green against the Ravens.




This was a pretty even battle ... But i have to give it to Allen for the Paddle line.. that shit was dope & his bars just seemed smoother to read .. Pat's seemed very stretched to me even though a few had some nice sting

Vote- Allen Knight

CtrlF4
12-21-2013, 10:57 AM
I'll vote before Monday

Texcellence
12-27-2013, 12:59 PM
Ur a faggot snitch, ur whole life been a trip son
Shit paddle tell everything if u full fill his gay ass fantasy of beating him wit one


You reference Anth in EVERY post, you prolly talk about him in your verses,
Your infatuation with Bags goes far beyond your fondness and love for women’s purses.

Overall, this battle was a close one. Without sounding like a dick the both of you are clearly rusty but I found Allen's verse a little easier to read and thought it was the more direct verse of the two. Swerve you had some great ideas but didn't execute on them as well as you could have and sometimes that can be more frustrating to read than a verse with no punches!

Vote: Allen Knight

Lotto Smirk
12-29-2013, 07:52 AM
Swerve in the finals? Lmao, idk if im seeing clear
Ironic constrikt forfeited u last rd,
....wen we can't wrap our heads around the thought of u being here
I fuck hos that call me papi, this gay is a fraud
Last time a bitch called trick daddy, she was using the ghetto slip n slide he made in the yard
Ur a faggot snitch, ur whole life been a trip son
Shit paddle tell everything if u full fill his gay ass fantasy of beating him wit one

vs

Remember Allen was desperate to buy the site, he begged me in messages,
Wanted to go half and half…even though he was broke working as a Barista making those beverages.
This spic is a crooked cars salesman? Nah, noones believing this fag,
Cause if he ever sold a lemon, it was at the side of the highway with Hush for 5 dollars a ba

Dope ass battle guys this was alot closer than the quotes look both verse's were dope i just thought allen's lines come off a bit cleaner and the shit paddle line had me cracking, swerve you was very unlucky in this one.

vote- allen knight

Unfukwitable
12-29-2013, 11:24 PM
Swerve in the finals? Lmao, idk if im seeing clear
Ironic constrikt forfeited u last rd,
....wen we can't wrap our heads around the thought of u being here
I fuck hos that call me papi, this gay is a fraud
Last time a bitch called trick daddy, she was using the ghetto slip n slide he made in the yard
Ur a faggot snitch, ur whole life been a trip son
Shit paddle tell everything if u full fill his gay ass fantasy of beating him wit one

vs.

Remember Allen was desperate to buy the site, he begged me in messages,
Wanted to go half and half…even though he was broke working as a Barista making those beverages.
I come with an artillery army, you’ll find shards in Allen real deep inside,
I’ll put so many caps in his body…Split’ll pull them out to replace the ones your cousins took off his ride.
You reference Anth in EVERY post, you prolly talk about him in your verses,
Your infatuation with Bags goes far beyond your fondness and love for women’s purses.

Close match I def enjoyed the read one just slightly got it for me v/Swerve

Tic
12-30-2013, 10:02 AM
False get the facts straight

Swerve in the finals? Lmao, idk if im seeing clear
Ironic constrikt forfeited u last rd,
....wen we can't wrap our heads around the thought of u being here
I fuck hos that call me papi, this gay is a fraud
Last time a bitch called trick daddy, she was using the ghetto slip n slide he made in the yard
Ur a faggot snitch, ur whole life been a trip son
Shit paddle tell everything if u full fill his gay ass fantasy of beating him wit one

Vs.

Remember Allen was desperate to buy the site, he begged me in messages,
Wanted to go half and half…even though he was broke working as a Barista making those beverages.
This spic is a crooked cars salesman? Nah, noones believing this fag,
Cause if he ever sold a lemon, it was at the side of the highway with Hush for 5 dollars a bag.
I come with an artillery army, you’ll find shards in Allen real deep inside,
I’ll put so many caps in his body…Split’ll pull them out to replace the ones your cousins took off his ride.
You reference Anth in EVERY post, you prolly talk about him in your verses,
Your infatuation with Bags goes far beyond your fondness and love for women’s purses.

V/Swerve - He had better hits and less misses IMO. Good battle though, cool lines from both.

King Karaoke
12-30-2013, 06:34 PM
Hi...


Swerve in the finals? Lmao, idk if im seeing clear
Ironic constrikt forfeited u last rd,
....wen we can't wrap our heads around the thought of u being here
U love bags & will follow thru wit w.e he wants u to do lame
This faggot shined the wardens shoes more fucking times than andy dufresne
I fuck hos that call me papi, this gay is a fraud
Last time a bitch called trick daddy, she was using the ghetto slip n slide he made in the yard
Ur a faggot snitch, ur whole life been a trip son
Shit paddle tell everything if u full fill his gay ass fantasy of beating him wit one
Ur girl uses u for paper, she's to much for u to handle lame
Wen u give ya dalton of money she's using it to buy me front row tickets to a bengal game

Good verse, pretty consistent...


This spic is a crooked cars salesman? Nah, noones believing this fag,
Cause if he ever sold a lemon, it was at the side of the highway with Hush for 5 dollars a bag.
I got no hesitations when I decide to knock you out, dude it aint shit,
Punt you so hard, you’ll be left with a broken jaw and vertebrae like Kevin Huber against Pitt.
I come with an artillery army, you’ll find shards in Allen real deep inside,
I’ll put so many caps in his body…Split’ll pull them out to replace the ones your cousins took off his ride.


Cool verse...
Caps line was line of the battle...
Felt like you were reaching with the personals, hes a mechanic I think....

Although Swerve had the lotb, I think AK was more consistent here...

Vote- AK...

Bye...

Sharp
01-02-2014, 12:53 PM
5-2 AK just a few more votes
Texcellence ill nik-A Alvin Karpis Plot Mael CtrlF4 @anyone ?

ill nik-A
01-02-2014, 08:08 PM
Both openers cancel each other out and they were both cool
Now AK had the trick daddy shit cuz of the twist u gave it, dalton was Kool, but the paddle and Strikt lines were super yucky, no likey
Swerve had cousins line and that concept I've seen the way u did it, same for lemon, both football references killed u for being super vague... They're like saying... u scared yellow like the banana I ate yesterday at 4pm

I got AK winning

ill nik-A
01-02-2014, 08:09 PM
Sharp Nine

Start the damn week man