Vinzr (0-0) vs. Jay (0-0) JAY WINS

[Vinzr]

10 lines due 24 hours - house rules

[Jay]

in it

[Vinzr]

i'll get something in tonight before bed

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[Vinzr]

ugh just getting this in asap. drop whenever

This faggot has an overdose of estrogen, I’d pound this guy….10 times in the face
His claimin he hitting bulls eyes… but even they have more testosterone in em’ than Jay
Hard to think this nut is a cheater, even if he did bite lines he makes them weaker
We all know talk is cheap, & now we’re about to find out Jay’s talk is even cheaper
This cat get his first win in the league, but homie we saw no scripture
Now we know when Jay comes to mind, Immaculate aint even in the picture
You got a way with words, especially with men who you wish to marry
Your on some broke back shit, but that’s cause you putting on more than you can carry
Drop ya with a punch, this bitch wont get up before the gong
You could hit me with your best shot <- bet that reminded u of your favourite song

[Jay]

droppin in a couple hours. that ok?

[Vinzr]

yea, all good

[Jay]

im battling a gay kangaroo, whats this world coming too
not only a circus animals living behind rusty bars, they come here and drop them too
this loaner never seeing action, Jay known to get it messed up
last time Vin went down on a chick, he had a small fry with a gang of ketchup
bet this aint even a guy, i'll twist its head n not stop
and leave Vin spread all over the place quicker than a cartel chop shop
u shoulda just cut a vein, u bout to feel nuthin but pain
when i hit you with that fire, you'll miss a Heart Beat like your name was Eddy Cain
Vin likes to play with his clit, remove his fingers and sniff like cronic
so if he has a nose for talent.... its not interrogation when i say he a pro at bondage

[Jay]

tops

[Defiant]

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[Spartacus]

im battling a gay kangaroo, whats this world coming too
not only a circus animals living behind rusty bars, they come here and drop them too
this loaner never seeing action, Jay known to get it messed up
last time Vin went down on a chick, he had a small fry with a gang of ketchup

VS

You got a way with words, especially with men who you wish to marry
Your on some broke back shit, but that’s cause you putting on more than you can carry

based on the number quotables i think Jay won

Vote= Jay

[Split]

im battling a gay kangaroo, whats this world coming too
not only a circus animals living behind rusty bars, they come here and drop them too
>lmao nice
this loaner never seeing action, Jay known to get it messed up
last time Vin went down on a chick, he had a small fry with a gang of ketchup
>I have definitely seen this before
bet this aint even a guy, i'll twist its head n not stop
and leave Vin spread all over the place quicker than a cartel chop shop
>haha aight nice angle but could've been pieced together nicer
u shoulda just cut a vein, u bout to feel nuthin but pain
when i hit you with that fire, you'll miss a Heart Beat like your name was Eddy Cain
>eh
Vin likes to play with his clit, remove his fingers and sniff like cronic
so if he has a nose for talent.... its not interrogation when i say he a pro at bondage
>NO

ugh just getting this in asap. drop whenever

This faggot has an overdose of estrogen, I’d pound this guy….10 times in the face
His claimin he hitting bulls eyes… but even they have more testosterone in em’ than Jay
>stretched
Hard to think this nut is a cheater, even if he did bite lines he makes them weaker
We all know talk is cheap, & now we’re about to find out Jay’s talk is even cheaper
>naw
This cat get his first win in the league, but homie we saw no scripture
Now we know when Jay comes to mind, Immaculate aint even in the picture
>I don't understand the concept
You got a way with words, especially with men who you wish to marry
Your on some broke back shit, but that’s cause you putting on more than you can carry
>okay
Drop ya with a punch, this bitch wont get up before the gong
You could hit me with your best shot <- bet that reminded u of your favourite song
>ok but setup could've been done a lot better

Not a bad battle. Definitely have Jay winning this though. One of his bars is definitely, definitely suspect, idk bros. You aint bitin i hope. anywyas Jay took this with consistency

[Flow]

Wasnt a bad battle but to be honest I wasnt feeling it - nothing Vinz had grabbed me much other then maybe the broke back line.

Jay had a few quoteables and that opener was boss.

Vote Jay easy win

[Big Game]

Vinzr

This faggot has an overdose of estrogen, I’d pound this guy….10 times in the face
His claimin he hitting bulls eyes… but even they have more testosterone in em’ than Jay

Ehh – no not at all

Hard to think this nut is a cheater, even if he did bite lines he makes them weaker
We all know talk is cheap, & now we’re about to find out Jay’s talk is even cheaper

I think that this would have worked out better with the set up as the punch – the way it is now takes major sting from it

This cat get his first win in the league, but homie we saw no scripture
Now we know when Jay comes to mind, Immaculate aint even in the picture

Maybe there is something behind this that I don’t know about – but as of now it is a miss

You got a way with words, especially with men who you wish to marry
Your on some broke back shit, but that’s cause you putting on more than you can carry

This was okay

Drop ya with a punch, this bitch wont get up before the gong
You could hit me with your best shot <- bet that reminded u of your favourite song

Lol – that was kinda funny but not much of a hit


Jay


im battling a gay kangaroo, whats this world coming too
not only a circus animals living behind rusty bars, they come here and drop them too

this was okay – I’m not a fan of the stretched line tho – it takes some sting from the bar

this loaner never seeing action, Jay known to get it messed up
last time Vin went down on a chick, he had a small fry with a gang of ketchup

ehh – aint really feeling this

bet this aint even a guy, i'll twist its head n not stop
and leave Vin spread all over the place quicker than a cartel chop shop

ehh – this was a little forced – could have been worded better

u shoulda just cut a vein, u bout to feel nuthin but pain
when i hit you with that fire, you'll miss a Heart Beat like your name was Eddy Cain

This was actually creative – props on this one

Vin likes to play with his clit, remove his fingers and sniff like cronic
so if he has a nose for talent.... its not interrogation when i say he a pro at bondage

Eh – not feeling it

Jay edges this with one effective hit more than Vin
Decent battle
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