Hollywood vs. Boredom {Hollywood wins}

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Hollywood Boredom

[Hollywood]

10, good luck

[Boredom]

Check.

[Hollywood]

Boredom aka Alphabet aka Soon to be 0-2 against me

this rookie thinks he's nice? ain't nobody tellin 'em he's ill..
so WTF is Boron? cuz ya sure as hell don't have any Elements of skill
I'm climbin in chicks, but I'm only accepting riders for bitches
my girl listens to Xzibit & Tyga, while yours sleeps next to the tiger exhibit
I've been ruining vets, so you'd be stupid to bet I'm losing
you're such an easy Mark, the producers of Ted want YOU for a 2nd movie
you had ya moments, but there's no avoiding that I'm nullin them
so if you're relevant for a split second, that's me opening your skull again
I like to fuck a lot.. and your catch? I took her in the process
speaking of catches, why did I catch you butchering my concepts?....
I'd say leave her and run, but you need her to fuck & pound it
you keep pics of that catch on your wall, but she needs to be stuffed & mounted
I have dimes who mount me n get stuffed, i bust n bounce quick
the bitches u fuck are so ugly n beast like they should be stuffed n mounted

[Boredom]

mine was better..

ur a lying homo hiding under alias, ur a joke n u know its true..
only time u drop a dohpe verse is when the vets from that crew ghost for u
holly a known faggot, a cloned maggot whose bin made bitch in the past
ur wp is such a forced stretch the helping hand u need could fit in ur ass
i get whatever i want from females, hoes love it when i defile em cuz dawg
bore is wild w/ em broads......ur bitches are a bore and look wild like them hogs
i'm vicious w/ the sword killin kids w/ force, ur a no name bitch
if i go out on a limb it's to chop up hollywoods faster than nika on a cocaine binge
n ur never fuckin the cunt, u can trust girls love me cause son..
bitches kill to give my ego a stroke, ur ugly ass looks like u've suffered from one

[El Muffin]

this rookie thinks he's nice? ain't nobody tellin 'em he's ill..
so WTF is Boron? cuz ya sure as hell don't have any Elements of skill
(aha fresh nameplay)
I'm climbin in chicks, but I'm only accepting riders for bitches
my girl listens to Xzibit & Tyga, while yours sleeps next to the tiger exhibit
(doooooooooooope lotb ..and i aint even read the rest of your verse yet..i like this alot)
I've been ruining vets, so you'd be stupid to bet I'm losing
you're such an easy Mark, the producers of Ted want YOU for a 2nd movie
(decent)
you had ya moments, but there's no avoiding that I'm nullin them
so if you're relevant for a split second, that's me opening your skull again
(cool concept..thought u should have emphasized the split but still good)
I like to fuck a lot.. and your catch? I took her in the process
speaking of catches, why did I catch you butchering my concepts?....
(meh thought u could have done more considering the quotes)

ur a lying homo hiding under alias, ur a joke n u know its true..
only time u drop a dohpe verse is when the vets from that crew ghost for u
(played....seen this a thousand times..except..it was towards people who arent in dohpe..iono if u aint know..but hollywood IS in dohpe)
holly a known faggot, a cloned maggot whose bin made bitch in the past
ur wp is such a forced stretch the helping hand u need could fit in ur ass
(decent)
i get whatever i want from females, hoes love it when i defile em cuz dawg
bore is wild w/ em broads......ur bitches are a bore and look wild like them hogs
(ha nice)
i'm vicious w/ the sword killin kids w/ force, ur a no name bitch
if i go out on a limb it's to chop up hollywoods faster than nika on a cocaine binge
(i dont get this..out on a limb/chop up hollyWoods part i get but nika on a cocaine binge tie in i dont..)
n ur never fuckin the cunt, u can trust girls love me cause son..
bitches kill to give my ego a stroke, ur ugly ass looks like u've suffered from one
(stroke general concept quite olden...ive seen similar..for example..i had a stroke of genius..u look like u suffer from those on the regular..real simplistic..and really played)

i got boron,tyger xzibit, split vs

bore and helping hand which was borderline quotable

v.hollywood

took it relatively easy imo

[~RustyGunZ~]

this rookie thinks he's nice? ain't nobody tellin 'em he's ill..
so WTF is Boron? cuz ya sure as hell don't have any Elements of skill
I'm climbin in chicks, but I'm only accepting riders for bitches
my girl listens to Xzibit & Tyga, while yours sleeps next to the tiger exhibit

split line wasn't hitting for me, seen people use mark insertlastname wordplays similar to that, closer was a good personal but super generic

vs

i get whatever i want from females, hoes love it when i defile em cuz dawg
bore is wild w/ em broads......ur bitches are a bore and look wild like them hogs

helping hand was okay kinda gay, the rest was a bit played but nothing to bad

v/holly

[Boredom]

Muff chopping up hollywoods i.e big rails of cocaine.

thanks for the votes. 2-0 holly

[El Muffin]

never heard of that reference tbh

sorry for clogging snoop

over n out

[Sn00p]

Up over noshows.

[Dominate]

this rookie thinks he's nice? ain't nobody tellin 'em he's ill..
so WTF is Boron? cuz ya sure as hell don't have any Elements of skill
nice nameplay, flipped well with a punch
I'm climbin in chicks, but I'm only accepting riders for bitches
my girl listens to Xzibit & Tyga, while yours sleeps next to the tiger exhibit
heh, cool... think it needed a reference to her being beast like in the set up
I've been ruining vets, so you'd be stupid to bet I'm losing
you're such an easy Mark, the producers of Ted want YOU for a 2nd movie
cool bc of current event, 'mark' wp been done tho
you had ya moments, but there's no avoiding that I'm nullin them
so if you're relevant for a split second, that's me opening your skull again
not feeling
I like to fuck a lot.. and your catch? I took her in the process
speaking of catches, why did I catch you butchering my concepts?....
I dont think the 'catch' wp complimented this punch concept very well... don't like how you worded it

vs

ur a lying homo hiding under alias, ur a joke n u know its true..
only time u drop a dohpe verse is when the vets from that crew ghost for u
the punch concept is a personal and it's good, but the 'dohpe' wp just really didn't work, wayyyyy too obv/played
holly a known faggot, a cloned maggot whose bin made bitch in the past
ur wp is such a forced stretch the helping hand u need could fit in ur ass
almost, the helping hand concept was good but wording was just not quite right
i get whatever i want from females, hoes love it when i defile em cuz dawg
bore is wild w/ em broads......ur bitches are a bore and look wild like them hogs
decent, like the rhymes
i'm vicious w/ the sword killin kids w/ force, ur a no name bitch
if i go out on a limb it's to chop up hollywoods faster than nika on a cocaine binge
never heard that reference either I'm afraid
n ur never fuckin the cunt, u can trust girls love me cause son..
bitches kill to give my ego a stroke, ur ugly ass looks like u've suffered from one
nah that wp is old

you got potential... stick with it, you'll work out what's played and what's fresh just from being around a while longer


Holly's opener sealed it for him... the next 2 were OK as well... Bore had elements I liked in some lines but none that I liked completely overall

v/ Hollywood

[bleak]

this rookie thinks he's nice? ain't nobody tellin 'em he's ill..
so WTF is Boron? cuz ya sure as hell don't have any Elements of skill -LOTB
Wow, a periodic table reference. And it didn't suck.
you had ya moments, but there's no avoiding that I'm nullin them
so if you're relevant for a split second, that's me opening your skull again
I like to fuck a lot.. and your catch? I took her in the process
speaking of catches, why did I catch you butchering my concepts?....
Could have been a lot nicer, but still effective.


holly a known faggot, a cloned maggot whose bin made bitch in the past
ur wp is such a forced stretch the helping hand u need could fit in ur ass
n ur never fuckin the cunt, u can trust girls love me cause son..
bitches kill to give my ego a stroke, ur ugly ass looks like u've suffered from one

Lenient with the first quote. I've seen you come harder, you didn't have the consistency to have an effective verse as a whole.

MVGT HOLLY for consistency and creativity.

[Vinzr]

this rookie thinks he's nice? ain't nobody tellin 'em he's ill..
so WTF is Boron? cuz ya sure as hell don't have any Elements of skill
I've been ruining vets, so you'd be stupid to bet I'm losing
you're such an easy Mark, the producers of Ted want YOU for a 2nd movie

vs

i get whatever i want from females, hoes love it when i defile em cuz dawg
bore is wild w/ em broads......ur bitches are a bore and look wild like them hogs

gotta give this one to hollywood, he had the fresher and more creative concepts and in the end really made his verse stand out a lot more over boredom's.

v/ Hollywood

[Mac]

this rookie thinks he's nice? ain't nobody tellin 'em he's ill..
so WTF is Boron? cuz ya sure as hell don't have any Elements of skill
I've been ruining vets, so you'd be stupid to bet I'm losing
you're such an easy Mark, the producers of Ted want YOU for a 2nd movie

vs


ur a lying homo hiding under alias, ur a joke n u know its true..
only time u drop a dohpe verse is when the vets from that crew ghost for u

ok . hollywoods opener is dope , ted line is cool. boredom came up kinda played with punchlines and rusty. crew ghost line is kinda good but the concept is very played. barely quotable. i'm voting for hollywood. sort of 1 sided battle fellas.

[RPK]

this rookie thinks he's nice? ain't nobody tellin 'em he's ill..
so WTF is Boron? cuz ya sure as hell don't have any Elements of skill
I'm climbin in chicks, but I'm only accepting riders for bitches
my girl listens to Xzibit & Tyga, while yours sleeps next to the tiger exhibit
I've been ruining vets, so you'd be stupid to bet I'm losing
you're such an easy Mark, the producers of Ted want YOU for a 2nd movie

vs.

i get whatever i want from females, hoes love it when i defile em cuz dawg
bore is wild w/ em broads......ur bitches are a bore and look wild like them hogs

Hollywood dropped pretty nice. I think it was a pretty good showing from both, but I think Holly took it.
V/Hollywood