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View Full Version : AOWL WK 3: Dave (0-0) VS. Mac (0-0) [MAC WINS BY NO SHOW.]


King Ra.
02-25-2013, 11:24 PM
16 lines minimum, 32 lines maximum.

Verses are due THURSDAY at 11:59 PST.

Extensions are due FRIDAY 3/1 at 11:59 PST. NO LATER!!!

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TOPIC: Water is the only drink for a wise man.


Good luck to both participants. Dave Mac

Dave
02-26-2013, 05:43 AM
Check. Dope, last time we faced off Mac you'd only been writing for a little while. About 8 months later, so should be a dope one. Good luck mate.

Mac
02-28-2013, 12:43 PM
yo! didnt notice this until i saw my notifications. never notice them.
i might need an ext if possible, my bad.

likewise good luck

Dave
02-28-2013, 06:40 PM
Well I'm posting in a few hours, like 6/9 from now. Don't know how that factors into the whole Americano style of things, but if that warrents an extension then it's all good.

Mac
03-01-2013, 05:49 PM
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I gave up hopes of ever becoming sober
trying to quit drinks made me a frequent smoker
My weak willpower determined i wasn't strong enough
and due my anger issues i had to keep distance from everyone
I lost everything, there was no reason to keep drinking
but I had to compensate the fact I was still breathing
The alcohol is the fuel that keeps me drinking more
i can't answer questions as my mind's never clear

I can't focus on anything, i get distracted easily
all mondays i wake up in a bar without my shoes & money
My wife left me and took the children without any warning
i refuse to give her my properties & the lawyer keeps calling
I decided to gather forces and stay sober for a long time
and reach the happyness mountain I could never climb



It's been six years since I had a drink
i have a job, family and now i can think
Then suddendly I got an anonymous call,
saying that my mother crashed her vehicle into a wall..
I assisted to her funeral then went to a bar pain
woke up in the monday with nothing.. once again

Dave
03-02-2013, 06:17 AM
Only now have seen the line limit. I'm like 54 lines in. Awesome. I'll edit it and post it in like 2 hours after I get back from kickboxing. I know I'm over so if you want to N/S me it's alright. Me and Mac can get it in regularly (wierd wording) so I won't bitch (much).

King Ra.
03-02-2013, 09:24 AM
MAC WINS BY NO SHOW.