Hollywood vs. Muff {Hollywood wins}

[Sn00p]

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Hollywood Muff

[Hollywood]

14-16

good luck, brother

[Hollywood]

let's talk rankings...

this fuckin geek's like number 3, but cuz of me he'll drop
I'd have to bang his bitch on the couch just to see muffin crease his spot
I'll be passin him w/ flames & I'm only half of him in age
I don't know why this Elder Scrolls, the only magic he still has is in the game
peep my rap sheet.. w/ so much assault & battery, I was born to fight
Muff's idea of a rap sheet has a Dr. Seuss pattern and keeps him warm at night
I take my car on vacations to places earned & get away from 'burbs
meanwhile, the only road trip he's had involves heroin and his favorite curb
punches? he ain't survivin mine.. this guy defines bitches
his face'll need enough numbing agents to start their own private eye business
I'm constantly hot, beasting.. s'only Tuesday & I dropped easy son
I could give you a 5 year window and you couldn't even get a job cleaning one
but TBH I can't ignore your shit, I'm forced to spit good rhymes..
bcuz I'm expecting a WIDE variety of punches.......... from 4 to 6 foot lines
I ain't murkin ya, but I am pummeling you on the cheek..
so when you die from natural causes, you'll know it had nothing to do w/ ya teeth

16

[El Muffin]

sorry for the wait. i gtg so forgive me for minor technical mishaps..have no time to prune this at all..gbye


Holly's like FUCK WORK..sits at home attending his nails
Heard you cant turn a Ho into a housewife..try telling that to this effeminate male
Youll get shot on purpose..beating me? homie thats NOT for certain
If u think 'Muff Cottonelle..shud hav seen his mom try2 wipe out the cumshot that birthed em
Im genocidal. start to lollygag..you and all comers get bodybagged
U never seen Euthanasia'..you just get aroused while spectating a karate class
N ur bitch? once i get her to sit on my lap bro the shit is a wrap
'I fill her cup up and Get that Frothy Head' like the bar had some Guiness on Tap
Whats game with you punk? you know its a shame that you suck
You? Ill never add-mire'..shit im already dragging your name through the muck
im a menace fraud..niggas know my steelo coz i been a force
'Ull never get in a bitches Guts'.. sorry tapeworm transfer doesnt count as intercourse
On to the next sequence. losing is a DICK. thats how the vets reason
But losing to you isnt a Phallus-See..we already know you like erect penis
your old school like me. but all your shit is goodness gracious lame
Theres'No need to spell it out'..'but ur Over the hill' like the landmark that displays ur name

[Hollywood]

votes?

[Defiant]

this fuckin geek's like number 3, but cuz of me he'll drop
I'd have to bang his bitch on the couch just to see muffin crease his spot
peep my rap sheet.. w/ so much assault & battery, I was born to fight
Muff's idea of a rap sheet has a Dr. Seuss pattern and keeps him warm at night
I take my car on vacations to places earned & get away from 'burbs
meanwhile, the only road trip he's had involves heroin and his favorite curb
punches? he ain't survivin mine.. this guy defines bitches
his face'll need enough numbing agents to start their own private eye business
I'm constantly hot, beasting.. s'only Tuesday & I dropped easy son
I could give you a 5 year window and you couldn't even get a job cleaning one

vs

Holly's like FUCK WORK..sits at home attending his nails
Heard you cant turn a Ho into a housewife..try telling that to this effeminate male
Youll get shot on purpose..beating me? homie thats NOT for certain
If u think 'Muff Cottonelle..shud hav seen his mom try2 wipe out the cumshot that birthed em
im a menace fraud..niggas know my steelo coz i been a force
'Ull never get in a bitches Guts'.. sorry tapeworm transfer doesnt count as intercourse
your old school like me. but all your shit is goodness gracious lame
Theres'No need to spell it out'..'but ur Over the hill' like the landmark that displays ur name

good battle, alot of generic lines tho, would of liked to seen more personals. Hollys verse was alot smoother imo, windowcleaner line was dope. Muff wording wasnt as good as usual, some of his shit seemed kinda basic tho, like the euthanasia n over the hill line. First 4 lines were dope tho. Close battle but i think holly takes this with smoother wording and harder punches.

vote - hollywood

[Dominate]

Holly:

Flow/rhythym/multies and wording was on point as usual, I have to say this wasn't your best showing concept wise though... in a 16 line verse I wanna see more personals than what you had... Elder scrolls was kind of a personal I suppose, but could have been set up better for that aspect of it... you didn't really have misses but for the most part they were just OK/cool... window line was the only one that really stood out to me.... I mean 16 lines of OK/cool with no misses is a pretty solid showing, but from YOU I had expected a couple more standouts

Muff:

Flow and swag were very good and your wording/flips for the most part made for harsh punchlines. Flips were creative as well. The level of your concepts was much more varied. You had the closer which was clever and the muff caught an L which although not 100% technically sound was close enough and the punch was funny and harsh... those 2 were standouts.... buuut, then you had Euthenasia (played) and Phallus-see (played and corny). The rest was cool/decent.


Kind of close but Holly had the LOTB and no real misses, Muff had 2 I thought missed and his 2 standouts weren't quite as good... although generally speaking I think his wording for punches (harshness) and creativity of the flips was better than Holly's, he just didn't have as good concepts to word/flip overall on this occassion.

Close, but

V/ Hollywod

[Hush]

Did read, didn't enjoy.

[Hollywood]

no personals, no new nameplays, no inspiration

I'll try not to let you down next time, rofl

[Hush]

No offense btw, the fact I read this battle is a testament to the fact that I respect both you and Muff as writers. I really wanted to vote but couldn't bring myself to do so. Will check next weeks battles tho.

[El Muffin]

aww come on

admittedly we both dropped verses full of generics..

i dont think it warrants that kind of response though

its whatever yo

[~RustyGunZ~]

I'll be passin him w/ flames & I'm only half of him in age
I don't know why this Elder Scrolls, the only magic he still has is in the game
punches? he ain't survivin mine.. this guy defines bitches
his face'll need enough numbing agents to start their own private eye business
I'm constantly hot, beasting.. s'only Tuesday & I dropped easy son
I could give you a 5 year window and you couldn't even get a job cleaning one


muffin crease was a cool concept but it just didn't turn out well imo. dr seuss was kind of funny but any rap wordplay is a no. elder scrolls was dope, road trip was just okay, private eye was fresh in my eyes. 5 year window was fire. idk why u added the closers they just seemed rushed and basic.

vs

Youll get shot on purpose..beating me? homie thats NOT for certain
If u think 'Muff Cottonelle..shud hav seen his mom try2 wipe out the cumshot that birthed em
Whats game with you punk? you know its a shame that you suck
You? Ill never add-mire'..shit im already dragging your name through the muck
your old school like me. but all your shit is goodness gracious lame
Theres'No need to spell it out'..'but ur Over the hill' like the landmark that displays ur name

opener was okay. caught an l was dope. youth in asia hell no meng. i've seen more than a few head/beer foam lines, so nah. phallus played. through the muck was cool. hollywood sign bar was good idk if it's been used on him but if it has the flip would still be pretty clever.

close but

v/holly

muff had more misses with some used concepts, seems u both slacked but it still produced some ill lines

[bleak]

Decent battle, I don't feel like either of you was as good as you could have been. Nameplays are hard against guys named Muff and Holly, considering everyone has prolly heard every variation. That euthanasia line would have been ill, but you didn't connect the wordplay. euthanasia puts people to sleep, and you didn't include that in your punch.

I got-

numbing agents, 5 year window (Would have Elder Scrolls but old jokes are getting boring)

vs.

Cottonelle, over the hill (read above for why euthanasia isn't included)

close as hell, so I gotta go by who's verse I enjoyed reading more. Both use cool rhyme schemes to propel their bars towards the punches, so again, this aspect is also close. Holly's closers were not flattering, he should have put one of his quotes on the end tbh. I'ma have to go wit Muff, even tho you failed to make euth as dope as it could have been.

v/Muff

[megatron]

Vote holly I liked heroin, Dr Suess , 5yr window

Vs

Cotonelle n tape worm

Hollys verse had the better concepts , I couldve quoted a few others like the numbing agent was ok elder scrolls could've been bettermuffs misses were worse than Hollys so vote wood

[Sn00p]

4-1, Hollywood. First to 5 wins. Must win by 2.

[WRATH]

V HOLLY

ROAD TRIP WAS KILLER. COUPLE OTHER SPOTS WAS COOL.

@ MUFF A LOT OF THE WORDPLAY WAS NOT CONNECTING AS IT WAS PROBABLY INTENDED. TOO MUCH REACHING. CANT WIN ON HOW GOOD THEY COULD HAVE BEEN.

[Utmost]

this fuckin geek's like number 3, but cuz of me he'll drop
I'd have to bang his bitch on the couch just to see muffin crease his spot
I'll be passin him w/ flames & I'm only half of him in age
I don't know why this Elder Scrolls, the only magic he still has is in the game
punches? he ain't survivin mine.. this guy defines bitches
his face'll need enough numbing agents to start their own private eye business
I'm constantly hot, beasting.. s'only Tuesday & I dropped easy son
I could give you a 5 year window and you couldn't even get a job cleaning one


vs


Youll get shot on purpose..beating me? homie thats NOT for certain
If u think 'Muff Cottonelle..shud hav seen his mom try2 wipe out the cumshot that birthed em
N ur bitch? once i get her to sit on my lap bro the shit is a wrap
'I fill her cup up and Get that Frothy Head' like the bar had some Guiness on Tap
your old school like me. but all your shit is goodness gracious lame
Theres'No need to spell it out'..'but ur Over the hill' like the landmark that displays ur name

cool battle here. Holly had elder scrolls, numbing agents and windowcleaner that were pretty new to me..the rest werent bad.Muff had some nice stuff but it was spread out, cottonelle ive seen done quite a bit, but i liked how tied it in, over the hill was a nice hit too. what hurt you here was just some of the played ish really.

v/Holly a lil more consistent and had fresher concepts