AOWL Week 4: Boredom (0-0) VS. Kuja (1-1) KUJA WINS BY NS

[King Ra.]

16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum.

Verses are due THURSDAY 3/7 at 11:59 PST.

Extensions are due FRIDAY 3/8 at 11:59 PST. NO LATER!!!

You MUST check in.

You must vote on at least 3 other battles and post links. For every absent link, you will be deducted ONE vote next week.

If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league.


TOPIC: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EQcuwVLx01o

Good luck to both participants. Boredom Kuja

[Atheist]

Che'ck

[Atheist]

Sitting on the train, subway
Hiding underground, avoiding sunrays
Trying to hustle ya,
Sneaking on board, like a paying customer
A humble smuggler, number thirteen
Complexion dirty, oily skin, working
Hurting, eyeing a couple flirting
Ex cocaine seller, a pain helper
Now a train dweller, my rain shelter
Either way my life spiralled like an Elter Skelter
Spare change?, penny for my thoughts
Anything of course,
The wave of poverty’s force
Has me drowning, full of remorse
This is reality, maybe even destiny
Fate has taken my wealth,
Now it wants the rest of me
Living in these tunnels, on the run, I dig it
So fuck the sky, for me your grounds the limit





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