Hollywood vs. bleak {Hollywood wins}

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Hollywood bleak

[bleak]

Sup

14-16?

[Hollywood]

I'd rather 10-12

not gonna have time

[bleak]

12 it is.

[Hollywood]

10 it is

I'm doin it G, suited in fleece.. while you rock unusual tees w/ stains
in fact the only time you looked Sharp was at your own funeral HE arranged
one lonely punch'll open chumps, giving phony punks battle scars
I catch 'em all on the chin...
you catch 'em all on Gameboy and rep Pokemon avatars
ya'll just need to go. I remember when this league was so relentless..
but now there's only one animal on deck, while you go every week w/ Noah tension
I won't lie, I cop coke on the block.. knowing that God is testing
but I'd rather wrestle w/ the thought of blow than blow at the thought of wrestling
& I ain't gonna say good battle... I don't hand out gold stickers to dudes failing
I Caught Wind that this would be an easy week & you're the definition of Smooth Sailing

[bleak]

You're D List, my friend. I'm a boss that's a factor.
Watch me use you as a stepping stone like Blockbuster actors.
If I'm fronting the sack, like Nextel- you pay for minutes.
You're fronting the sack too, but only cause your face is in it.
It's bananas, you think you're nice. I do feel pity tho.
not that Hollaback girl, just the ugliest bitch in the Stefani video
No prequel to your punch'll drop your spot from the top.
Contender? Ignoring the setup will get you robbed of that shot.
You're #1 in a dying art. I say different if I'm picking who lose.
If it's said that 'H' is hard, he should get to LicH King his wounds.

good looks

[Plot]

HollyWood
I'm doin it G, suited in fleece.. while you rock unusual tees w/ stains
in fact the only time you looked Sharp was at your own funeral HE arranged
Pretty good
one lonely punch'll open chumps, giving phony punks battle scars
I catch 'em all on the chin...
you catch 'em all on Gameboy and rep Pokemon avatars
Yeah, I've seen the 'catch 'em all' slogan for Pokemon, its ok
ya'll just need to go. I remember when this league was so relentless..
but now there's only one animal on deck, while you go every week w/ Noah tension
Nice, wp.. seen 'Noah/know a' before but this is a nice flip
I won't lie, I cop coke on the block.. knowing that God is testing
but I'd rather wrestle w/ the thought of blow than blow at the thought of wrestling
Hmmm, just okay
& I ain't gonna say good battle... I don't hand out gold stickers to dudes failing
I Caught Wind that this would be an easy week & you're the definition of Smooth Sailing
Another okay.

Pretty safe verse, no misses and 1 good bar

Bleak
You're D List, my friend. I'm a boss that's a factor.
Watch me use you as a stepping stone like Blockbuster actors.
Hmm, pretty cool
If I'm fronting the sack, like Nextel- you pay for minutes.
You're fronting the sack too, but only cause your face is in it.
Okay
It's bananas, you think you're nice. I do feel pity tho.
not that Hollaback girl, just the ugliest bitch in the Stefani video
Hmm, not for me really
No prequel to your punch'll drop your spot from the top.
Contender? Ignoring the setup will get you robbed of that shot.
Meh, not much here
You're #1 in a dying art. I say different if I'm picking who lose.
If it's said that 'H' is hard, he should get to LicH King his wounds.
Ohh! liked the Lich King wp, think it coulda been used better tho

I think Holly edges this one, more polish and consistency

[Witty]

I'm doin it G, suited in fleece.. while you rock unusual tees w/ stains
in fact the only time you looked Sharp was at your own funeral HE arranged
Nice
one lonely punch'll open chumps, giving phony punks battle scars
I catch 'em all on the chin...
you catch 'em all on Gameboy and rep Pokemon avatars
Kinda played tbh but haven't seen it done like this
ya'll just need to go. I remember when this league was so relentless..
but now there's only one animal on deck, while you go every week w/ Noah tension
Lol this was nice
I won't lie, I cop coke on the block.. knowing that God is testing
but I'd rather wrestle w/ the thought of blow than blow at the thought of wrestling
lmao
& I ain't gonna say good battle... I don't hand out gold stickers to dudes failing
I Caught Wind that this would be an easy week & you're the definition of Smooth Sailing
Clever...good shit

vs

You're D List, my friend. I'm a boss that's a factor.
Watch me use you as a stepping stone like Blockbuster actors.
Cool, kinda simple
If I'm fronting the sack, like Nextel- you pay for minutes.
You're fronting the sack too, but only cause your face is in it.
Lol...cool
It's bananas, you think you're nice. I do feel pity tho.
not that Hollaback girl, just the ugliest bitch in the Stefani video
Nah
No prequel to your punch'll drop your spot from the top.
Contender? Ignoring the setup will get you robbed of that shot.
Wasn't feeling
You're #1 in a dying art. I say different if I'm picking who lose.
If it's said that 'H' is hard, he should get to LicH King his wounds.
Nice closer, feeling this

Cool battle, Hollywood had some dope lines that were really clever and made me laugh, Bleak had some clever lines too but his misses were just far bigger than Holly's. Gotta go with the more consistent dude in this one.

Vote - Hollywood

[Maximus]

Opener
noah tension
smooth sailing
vs
fronting the sack
lich king
.
.
Good read here guys, i felt bleak wasnt consistent here, had some cool stuffs like the ones i quoted but just not enuff to overshadow holly's hits, who had a pretty solid verse with barely a miss. I just quoted his strongest lines from the bunch. Neways keep at it fellas...
V/holly

[Vinzr]

ya'll just need to go. I remember when this league was so relentless..
but now there's only one animal on deck, while you go every week w/ Noah tension
I won't lie, I cop coke on the block.. knowing that God is testing
but I'd rather wrestle w/ the thought of blow than blow at the thought of wrestling
& I ain't gonna say good battle... I don't hand out gold stickers to dudes failing
I Caught Wind that this would be an easy week & you're the definition of Smooth Sailing

vs

If I'm fronting the sack, like Nextel- you pay for minutes.
You're fronting the sack too, but only cause your face is in it.
You're #1 in a dying art. I say different if I'm picking who lose.
If it's said that 'H' is hard, he should get to LicH King his wounds.

Holly's last 3 lines were dope as fuck. bleak came pretty decent, overall i think it is clear that Holly had the harder hits though, i just thought his concepts were a lot more creative

v/ Hollywood

[Mac]

I'm doin it G, suited in fleece.. while you rock unusual tees w/ stains
in fact the only time you looked Sharp was at your own funeral HE arranged
ya'll just need to go. I remember when this league was so relentless..
but now there's only one animal on deck, while you go every week w/ Noah tension
& I ain't gonna say good battle... I don't hand out gold stickers to dudes failing
I Caught Wind that this would be an easy week & you're the definition of Smooth Sailing

vs

If I'm fronting the sack, like Nextel- you pay for minutes.
You're fronting the sack too, but only cause your face is in it.
You're #1 in a dying art. I say different if I'm picking who lose.
If it's said that 'H' is hard, he should get to LicH King his wounds.

seen bleak come way better. he came up kind of basic on this battle, ok hits. holly came up decent with fresh hits. smooth sailing line was dope sharp came off abit basic and noah was cool. hollywood edged this for coming stronger overall. v.holly

[Utmost]

Holly had a pretty nice verse throughout, noah joint was prob lotb rest was above par..had some nice flips in there. Bleak i dunno, just seemed a bit basic in his attempts really. some of the setups coulda used work lich was a good idea so was a couple others.

v/Holly,consistency n better hits, flips here

[Strikta]

Vote- Hollywood

But Bleak did well imo(I WILL ELABORATE SOON)

If u can't tell who Holly is u'd be a damn fool.. I'll be back to vote after I drink this beer & crush these MnMs.

[Origin]

I'm doin it G, suited in fleece.. while you rock unusual tees w/ stains
in fact the only time you looked Sharp was at your own funeral HE arranged
ya'll just need to go. I remember when this league was so relentless..
but now there's only one animal on deck, while you go every week w/ Noah tension
& I ain't gonna say good battle... I don't hand out gold stickers to dudes failing
I Caught Wind that this would be an easy week & you're the definition of Smooth Sailing

vs

If I'm fronting the sack, like Nextel- you pay for minutes.
You're fronting the sack too, but only cause your face is in it.
You're #1 in a dying art. I say different if I'm picking who lose.
If it's said that 'H' is hard, he should get to LicH King his wounds.

That Noah like was hard. I recently tried to write one and that made me not want to write it haha. Bleak was nice but Hollywood had it from the opener and didn't let up. Nextel line was nice. Good battle overall.

My vote is for Hollywood.

[Ox]

HOLLY



I'm doin it G, suited in fleece.. while you rock unusual tees w/ stains
in fact the only time you looked Sharp was at your own funeral HE arrangedya'll just need to go. I remember when this league was so relentless..
but now there's only one animal on deck, while you go every week w/ Noah tension& I ain't gonna say good battle... I don't hand out gold stickers to dudes failing
I Caught Wind that this would be an easy week & you're the definition of Smooth Sailing

vs

Bleak

If I'm fronting the sack, like Nextel- you pay for minutes.
You're fronting the sack too, but only cause your face is in it.
You're #1 in a dying art. I say different if I'm picking who lose.
If it's said that 'H' is hard, he should get to LicH King his wounds.

v/ Holly..good battle though guys nice shit felt holly had the better bars

[~RustyGunZ~]

I'm doin it G, suited in fleece.. while you rock unusual tees w/ stains
in fact the only time you looked Sharp was at your own funeral HE arranged
one lonely punch'll open chumps, giving phony punks battle scars
I catch 'em all on the chin...
you catch 'em all on Gameboy and rep Pokemon avatars
rofl
& I ain't gonna say good battle... I don't hand out gold stickers to dudes failing
I Caught Wind that this would be an easy week & you're the definition of Smooth Sailing

animals on deck is a dope concept didn't like how u used it. wrestling line was eh. closer was simple but crisp.

vs

If I'm fronting the sack, like Nextel- you pay for minutes.
You're fronting the sack too, but only cause your face is in it.
No prequel to your punch'll drop your spot from the top.
You're #1 in a dying art. I say different if I'm picking who lose.
If it's said that 'H' is hard, he should get to LicH King his wounds.

blockbuster line was to simple tbh. fronting the sack was cool but u could have used it to a much higher potential. same with hollaback girl, nice nameplay weak connection. contender line was weeeeeak. closer was pretty nice. idk man i feel u could use a longer bar style or that's just my preference, ur punches are to basic to really get the wow factor for the most part. concepts were there just need to make them hit harder.

v/holly
more polished with better use of concepts. could have gone to bleak though if he did a little more with his shit.

[bleak]

Vote- Hollywood

But Bleak did well imo(I WILL ELABORATE SOON)

If u can't tell who Holly is u'd be a damn fool.. I'll be back to vote after I drink this beer & crush these MnMs.

This

Good battle Holly

[Hollywood]

guess you a fool then

good battle though