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Sn00p
03-11-2013, 10:20 PM
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Knucklehead Defiant

~RustyGunZ~
03-11-2013, 10:22 PM
12 u fluffy faggot

Defiant
03-14-2013, 06:20 PM
ext

~RustyGunZ~
03-14-2013, 08:25 PM
it won't make ur verse any better but sure

Sn00p
03-15-2013, 08:28 PM
Defiant has PM'd me 12 lines, Knucklehead.

~RustyGunZ~
03-16-2013, 01:09 AM
Defiant. aka Diso

u BEEN mad u get 0 respect from legends, face facts u lame ole faggot
the worlds tiniest violin stay stringin' Disaccord while he complains about that state of his HOF status
srsly there is not one single fucking pro to ur legacy on this here net
it'd take a decade to count Defcons, & 4x that for u to even be as good as that mid-tier vet
u are the lamest/softest UK txtcee. also u can't fit in XXL clothes
apply a small bit of pressure & this Brittle Break quicker than when he snags a box of those
ur city doesn't want u to repersent. they consider u the fattest mistake, bro
u're from West Ham, but direction is irrelevant once u start running w/ mashed potatoes
so winner gets contender status, unfortunately ur hopes are ruined
in regards to this league: don't think being the only Def in it means you'll ever be a shoe in
u stay home & eat cheetos with milk, knuck get high with 9s & ascend son
i get bitches when i'm Zoned out.. u're so pathetic u've never even reached the Friend one

faggggot

Defiant
03-16-2013, 06:05 AM
............Knucklehead aka Demo


veritas can u help me with my nicotine addiction

i dip

and i've been trying for like 6 months now

explain chewing tabacco? id love 2 son
in your mouth 2 spit it out - the complete oppisite of what ya mothers done
ya lines are as simple as fuck, ya gonna need some corrupt tricks
when we say demographic for kids, its because he goes 2 parks to pick up chicks
you're a fat red haired faggot, so ya love life ive figured weak
asked if this gingerbread, forget sex he'd rather have a pastry, pie or sugared treat
hes never faced a struggle, he'd only bring defeats
his idea of desperate measures is skipping lunch n emptying shelfs for something to eat
no bitch is gonna find you attractive, even ya lover lie
the way your such a down and out, it explains what ya girl does to every other guy
your biggest threat is forgotten when heart failure enters
hes used to a life of malteasers, not the snack - the mocking in shopping centres

Witty
03-16-2013, 09:00 AM
u BEEN mad u get 0 respect from legends, face facts u lame ole faggot
the worlds tiniest violin stay stringin' Disaccord while he complains about that state of his HOF status
Pretty clever
srsly there is not one single fucking pro to ur legacy on this here net
it'd take a decade to count Defcons, & 4x that for u to even be as good as that mid-tier vet
Cool
u are the lamest/softest UK txtcee. also u can't fit in XXL clothes
apply a small bit of pressure & this Brittle Break quicker than when he snags a box of those
Cool flip on the british shit
ur city doesn't want u to repersent. they consider u the fattest mistake, bro
u're from West Ham, but direction is irrelevant once u start running w/ mashed potatoes
Nah
so winner gets contender status, unfortunately ur hopes are ruined
in regards to this league: don't think being the only Def in it means you'll ever be a shoe in
Nameplay was ok, just didn't think it was a hard punch at all
u stay home & eat cheetos with milk, knuck get high with 9s & ascend son
i get bitches when i'm Zoned out.. u're so pathetic u've never even reached the Friend one
Decent

vs

explain chewing tabacco? id love 2 son
in your mouth 2 spit it out - the complete oppisite of what ya mothers done
Wasn't feeling it
ya lines are as simple as fuck, ya gonna need some corrupt tricks
when we say demographic for kids, its because he goes 2 parks to pick up chicks
Nah
you're a fat red haired faggot, so ya love life ive figured weak
asked if this gingerbread, forget sex he'd rather have a pastry, pie or sugared treat
lol'd
hes never faced a struggle, he'd only bring defeats
his idea of desperate measures is skipping lunch n emptying shelfs for something to eat
Didn't see anything clever with this one
no bitch is gonna find you attractive, even ya lover lie
the way your such a down and out, it explains what ya girl does to every other guy
Decent I guess, kinda simple though
your biggest threat is forgotten when heart failure enters
hes used to a life of malteasers, not the snack - the mocking in shopping centres
Cool closer

This was a pretty cool battle, both had some nice lines but I think Knuck was just more consistent, his punches were more clever, I think defiant was a little too simple.

Vote - Knucklehead

Vinzr
03-16-2013, 09:06 PM
u BEEN mad u get 0 respect from legends, face facts u lame ole faggot
the worlds tiniest violin stay stringin' Disaccord while he complains about that state of his HOF status
srsly there is not one single fucking pro to ur legacy on this here net
it'd take a decade to count Defcons, & 4x that for u to even be as good as that mid-tier vet
so winner gets contender status, unfortunately ur hopes are ruined
in regards to this league: don't think being the only Def in it means you'll ever be a shoe in

vs

you're a fat red haired faggot, so ya love life ive figured weak
asked if this gingerbread, forget sex he'd rather have a pastry, pie or sugared treat
your biggest threat is forgotten when heart failure enters
hes used to a life of malteasers, not the snack - the mocking in shopping centres

Good battle here guys...personally i felt that Knuckle had a lot better attempts than Def and more hits as well. So i got to give him the slight edge

v/ Knucklehead

Mac
03-16-2013, 10:08 PM
u BEEN mad u get 0 respect from legends, face facts u lame ole faggot
the worlds tiniest violin stay stringin' Disaccord while he complains about that state of his HOF status
u are the lamest/softest UK txtcee. also u can't fit in XXL clothes
apply a small bit of pressure & this Brittle Break quicker than when he snags a box of those
so winner gets contender status, unfortunately ur hopes are ruined
in regards to this league: don't think being the only Def in it means you'll ever be a shoe in
u stay home & eat cheetos with milk, knuck get high with 9s & ascend son
i get bitches when i'm Zoned out.. u're so pathetic u've never even reached the Friend one

vs

you're a fat red haired faggot, so ya love life ive figured weak
asked if this gingerbread, forget sex he'd rather have a pastry, pie or sugared treat
your biggest threat is forgotten when heart failure enters
hes used to a life of malteasers, not the snack - the mocking in shopping centres

knucklehead came up hilarious on this battle, consistent clever verse overall with decent hits. defiant seen him do better in another battles. he lacked consistency. the pastry n pie line was funny and shopping centre was a decent-ish hit. the rest were misses or didnt land like they should. overall i'm giving the vote to knucklehead for pulling the concepts better, stronger & having less misses than defiant

Origin
03-17-2013, 12:36 AM
u BEEN mad u get 0 respect from legends, face facts u lame ole faggot
the worlds tiniest violin stay stringin' Disaccord while he complains about that state of his HOF status
srsly there is not one single fucking pro to ur legacy on this here net
it'd take a decade to count Defcons, & 4x that for u to even be as good as that mid-tier vet

u are the lamest/softest UK txtcee. also u can't fit in XXL clothes
apply a small bit of pressure & this Brittle Break quicker than when he snags a box of those

so winner gets contender status, unfortunately ur hopes are ruined
in regards to this league: don't think being the only Def in it means you'll ever be a shoe in

vs.
you're a fat red haired faggot, so ya love life ive figured weak
asked if this gingerbread, forget sex he'd rather have a pastry, pie or sugared treat

your biggest threat is forgotten when heart failure enters
hes used to a life of malteasers, not the snack - the mocking in shopping centres

Knucklehead had a solid verse overall and landed more punches. Def only had the these two bars above and I really wasn't feeling the set up on the second bar. The punch was okay. It was a good battle but I say Knuckles takes it clean with those Brittle and Death in it, definite lines.

My vote is for Knucklehead

Utmost
03-17-2013, 01:15 AM
u BEEN mad u get 0 respect from legends, face facts u lame ole faggot
the worlds tiniest violin stay stringin' Disaccord while he complains about that state of his HOF status
srsly there is not one single fucking pro to ur legacy on this here net
it'd take a decade to count Defcons, & 4x that for u to even be as good as that mid-tier vet
u are the lamest/softest UK txtcee. also u can't fit in XXL clothes
apply a small bit of pressure & this Brittle Break quicker than when he snags a box of those
u stay home & eat cheetos with milk, knuck get high with 9s & ascend son
i get bitches when i'm Zoned out.. u're so pathetic u've never even reached the Friend one

vs

ya lines are as simple as fuck, ya gonna need some corrupt tricks
when we say demographic for kids, its because he goes 2 parks to pick up chicks
you're a fat red haired faggot, so ya love life ive figured weak
asked if this gingerbread, forget sex he'd rather have a pastry, pie or sugared treat


good battle here, seems like def rushed a his verse or somethin, seen better from him he still had gingerbread which leaned me. Knuck was just more consistent here tho, even his misses were decent
I got him on with more hits

v/ Knuck

Hollywood
03-17-2013, 02:38 AM
Defcons, Brittle Break, friend zone

vs.

gingerbread, mall teasers

this was really close IMO, cuz I actually preferred Defiant's quotables, but Knuck had one more

I've seen a lot of the concepts & nameplays in this battle done already, couldn't quote, Knuck just had one less miss

gtg w/ one more quote... V/Knucklehead

bleak
03-17-2013, 01:53 PM
Def, brittle

The other lines weren't misses, these just stood out

vs.

gingerbread

stood out.

Both verses were decent, Def's wording could have been polished. Knuck had a solid 12, and took it from Def.

V/Knuck

Sharp
03-17-2013, 03:57 PM
Brittle Break, Friend zone

v

Gingerbread


Nice battle, felt like Knuck was a little more consistent. Almost quoted one more from each so knuck ends up with one extra quote.

V/ Knucklehead

RPK
03-18-2013, 09:49 AM
u BEEN mad u get 0 respect from legends, face facts u lame ole faggot
the worlds tiniest violin stay stringin' Disaccord while he complains about that state of his HOF status
srsly there is not one single fucking pro to ur legacy on this here net
it'd take a decade to count Defcons, & 4x that for u to even be as good as that mid-tier vet
u are the lamest/softest UK txtcee. also u can't fit in XXL clothes
apply a small bit of pressure & this Brittle Break quicker than when he snags a box of those
u stay home & eat cheetos with milk, knuck get high with 9s & ascend son
i get bitches when i'm Zoned out.. u're so pathetic u've never even reached the Friend one

vs.

you're a fat red haired faggot, so ya love life ive figured weak
asked if this gingerbread, forget sex he'd rather have a pastry, pie or sugared treat
your biggest threat is forgotten when heart failure enters
hes used to a life of malteasers, not the snack - the mocking in shopping centres

Pretty Cool battle, but I have to give it to Knuck. He was more consistent and had more quotables.
V/Knucklehead