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King Ra.
03-12-2013, 08:10 PM
AOWL WEEK 5 #2 CONTENDER MATCH:

Split (Platinum) (3-1) VS. Vinzr (Titanium) (2-0)


16 lines minimum, 48 lines maximum.

Verses are due FRIDAY 3/15 at 11:59 PST.

Extensions are due SATURDAY 3/16 at 11:59 PST. NO LATER!!!

You MUST check in.

You must vote on at least 4 other battles. For every absent link, you will be deducted ONE vote next week.

If you no-show, you will be removed from next week and have to sign back into the league.


TOPIC: “Coincidence is God's way of remaining anonymous.” -Albert Einstein


Good luck to both participants. Split Vinzr

Vinzr
03-13-2013, 10:43 AM
Check

Split
03-14-2013, 10:50 AM
oye

Split
03-15-2013, 12:27 AM
might need ext... editing in here either way

Vinzr
03-15-2013, 10:34 PM
I'll take one as well

Vinzr
03-16-2013, 02:09 PM
He kneels before the statue, hands pressed against each other
Muttering his prayers aloud while his voice begins to stutter
Emotions hit him hard, reminiscing the day’s prior the misfortune
Attempting walk through the memories, uncover the secrets bestrewn
His passing wife, he feels her spirit standing there awake before him
The clock strikes 12, the church’s bells ring as though they’re calling
He slowly rises to his feet, struggling as he stumbles in the process
The light seeps through the windowpane, a fate he doesn’t know yet

Her acquaintances mock her shyness; toss her into world’s pool
Readily seek for her match to arrive as she waits by herself on a stool
The café that she awaits quietly sipping on her usual beverage
Attempting to make conversation, using beauty as her leverage
They’re attracted to her physical features, but she thinks otherwise
She judges them unfairly, as though possessing her own mother’s eyes
All of a sudden she’s had enough, stands up and walks away
But little does she know, this was about to change her day

Outside the cathedral, the sun’s rays glare straight onto the steps
Dave is the name of the man, who had sat there as he wept
The cement that covered the ground was beginning to heat
Katy is the name of the lady, who though love was never hers to keep
The road that Katy walked led her straight to the Church’s door
Something about this place just helped her climb her inner walls
All the fear she ever saw, crept back into the darkness
She flicked on the switch inside her and used the light as a harness
Held onto all the good vibes that she is feeling, most of it was fate
Walked onto the steps of the Church, slipped and fell on top of Dave
They looked into each other’s eyes, reminded of their lives
The reflection drew out their inner beauties, as though sighted at a height
Perhaps this was a coincidence that their love was born at such a place
They both saw everything past their face, instantly knew love was made

King Ra.
03-17-2013, 09:01 AM
VINZR WINS BY NO SHOW.