bleak (5-0) vs. Def_fuckin_5 (0-0) DEFCON 5 WINS

[bleak]

10 lines. due in 3 days midnight.

[bleak]

Def_fuckin_5

Chineck

[Def_fuckin_5]

i'm here i'lll probably post tomorrow

[Def_fuckin_5]

i'm rusty as hell but here goes

i peeped ya shit n fell asleep now i'm at a loss dude
i doubt u could even read ya verses without dozing off too
that's my word i'd knock u out u better focus on dodgin
or u'll see this promise land that would even leave moses astonished
so yeah i call it desperation..some would call it shame yo
either way it's sad as fuck when u have to create ur own hall of names posts
ur in over ur head..i got this match sealed and ziplocked
perfect name..those r ur chances of winnin with ya shit drops
just stop the madness..approach me n i'll stomp ya writtens
i saw ya verses n hadn't seen that much ass since a twerk competition

blah rusty right now forgive me

[bleak]

You got shouts out from Knuck, wow. Joined a new site as streak seekers
Yall aint washed up... Just dying slowly on the beach with the sea creatures.
I got Defiant in AOBL, his mini me in BA. It's not what's preferable to them.
You haven't heard the news? bleak gets put in two battles that are DEFINITELY wins.
Where are these text vets coming from? I'm dumpin. Killin "Herbs"
I haven't seen this many Rebirths since Wayne tried something similar.
So now you don't have a losing record... I wouldn't bother to send.
There's more bandwagon hopping now, then when San Fran started to win.
You ain't a hero. to return's anotha name that's shook when I'm baggin
We aren't your friends, and these HAPPY homecomings make you look like a faggot.

Outtie.

Lol how'd we finish at the same time?

http://artofbattling.com/forum/showthread.php?4353-RPK-(3-1)-vs-Flo-Real-(2-1)-OPEN-FOR-VOTES&p=30940#post30940

[Flow]

i'm rusty as hell but here goes

i peeped ya shit n fell asleep now i'm at a loss dude
i doubt u could even read ya verses without dozing off too
mm not hard hitting but ok
that's my word i'd knock u out u better focus on dodgin
or u'll see this promise land that would even leave moses astonished
Same as above
so yeah i call it desperation..some would call it shame yo
either way it's sad as fuck when u have to create ur own hall of names posts
ok - better
ur in over ur head..i got this match sealed and ziplocked
perfect name..those r ur chances of winnin with ya shit drops
same as above
just stop the madness..approach me n i'll stomp ya writtens
i saw ya verses n hadn't seen that much ass since a twerk competition
lost on me a bit
blah rusty right now forgive me
forgiven
You got shouts out from Knuck, wow. Joined a new site as streak seekers
Yall aint washed up... Just dying slowly on the beach with the sea creatures.
Ok
I got Defiant in AOBL, his mini me in BA. It's not what's preferable to them.
You haven't heard the news? bleak gets put in two battles that are DEFINITELY wins.
kk
Where are these text vets coming from? I'm dumpin. Killin "Herbs"
I haven't seen this many Rebirths since Wayne tried something similar.
hmm statementish to me
So now you don't have a losing record... I wouldn't bother to send.
There's more bandwagon hopping now, then when San Fran started to win.
Lost on me brother
You ain't a hero. to return's anotha name that's shook when I'm baggin
We aren't your friends, and these HAPPY homecomings make you look like a faggot.
lol nice closer
Outtie.

surprised at this - didnt think it would be as close as this. I came in here thinking it was a bleak win (no pun) and to be honest i feel that some of his stuff was lost on me which why i didnt want to open voting cus i think im missing something, but as no one voted and as i shouldnt really need a punch explaining to that degree - for that reason only im voting def fuckin 5

vote def 5 (no hate bleak feel i let you down here fam)

[Split]

i'm rusty as hell but here goes

i peeped ya shit n fell asleep now i'm at a loss dude
i doubt u could even read ya verses without dozing off too
>eh
that's my word i'd knock u out u better focus on dodgin
or u'll see this promise land that would even leave moses astonished
>lol nice
so yeah i call it desperation..some would call it shame yo
either way it's sad as fuck when u have to create ur own hall of names posts
>good personal
ur in over ur head..i got this match sealed and ziplocked
perfect name..those r ur chances of winnin with ya shit drops
>used n abused
just stop the madness..approach me n i'll stomp ya writtens
i saw ya verses n hadn't seen that much ass since a twerk competition
>old

blah rusty right now forgive me

You got shouts out from Knuck, wow. Joined a new site as streak seekers
Yall aint washed up... Just dying slowly on the beach with the sea creatures.
>terrible set up, not hard hitting punch tho aight concept
I got Defiant in AOBL, his mini me in BA. It's not what's preferable to them.
You haven't heard the news? bleak gets put in two battles that are DEFINITELY wins.
>awkward wording, bad nameflip
Where are these text vets coming from? I'm dumpin. Killin "Herbs"
I haven't seen this many Rebirths since Wayne tried something similar.
>not feeling it yo
So now you don't have a losing record... I wouldn't bother to send.
There's more bandwagon hopping now, then when San Fran started to win.
>naw man
You ain't a hero. to return's anotha name that's shook when I'm baggin
We aren't your friends, and these HAPPY homecomings make you look like a faggot.
>naw

Bleak I know u better than that. nothing hit. Def 5 merked, bleak you shoulda came nice and put a text legend win on ya rec

[Big Game]

Def

i peeped ya shit n fell asleep now i'm at a loss dude
i doubt u could even read ya verses without dozing off too

nah nothing special

that's my word i'd knock u out u better focus on dodgin
or u'll see this promise land that would even leave moses astonished

okay – but it’s edging it

so yeah i call it desperation..some would call it shame yo
either way it's sad as fuck when u have to create ur own hall of names posts

nah not feelin this

ur in over ur head..i got this match sealed and ziplocked
perfect name..those r ur chances of winnin with ya shit drops

nah not feeling this either

just stop the madness..approach me n i'll stomp ya writtens
i saw ya verses n hadn't seen that much ass since a twerk competition

ehh this was a miss – it had potential tho




bleak

You got shouts out from Knuck, wow. Joined a new site as streak seekers
Yall aint washed up... Just dying slowly on the beach with the sea creatures.

Ehh – it had potential – but overall missed

I got Defiant in AOBL, his mini me in BA. It's not what's preferable to them.
You haven't heard the news? bleak gets put in two battles that are DEFINITELY wins.

I don’t know the history in this – that’s why I think you should use expos here at AOB.
It still doesn’t seem like much of a hit

Where are these text vets coming from? I'm dumpin. Killin "Herbs"
I haven't seen this many Rebirths since Wayne tried something similar.

Ehh – maybe if it was worded better

So now you don't have a losing record... I wouldn't bother to send.
There's more bandwagon hopping now, then when San Fran started to win.

This is a nice metaphor but I don’t see how it hurts your opponent

You ain't a hero. to return's anotha name that's shook when I'm baggin
We aren't your friends, and these HAPPY homecomings make you look like a faggot

Nah – just a statement

It just seems that bleak has a couple of bars there aren’t aimed at his opponent directly. (bars 2 and 4)
Def stayed more direct with his personals.

Overall it was a very basic battle.
MVGT: Def
Stay Up

[Jimbo]

Originally Posted by Def_fuckin_5

i'm rusty as hell but here goes

i peeped ya shit n fell asleep now i'm at a loss dude
i doubt u could even read ya verses without dozing off too
>no
that's my word i'd knock u out u better focus on dodgin
or u'll see this promise land that would even leave moses astonished
>good
so yeah i call it desperation..some would call it shame yo
either way it's sad as fuck when u have to create ur own hall of names posts
>lol
ur in over ur head..i got this match sealed and ziplocked
perfect name..those r ur chances of winnin with ya shit drops
>ok
just stop the madness..approach me n i'll stomp ya writtens
i saw ya verses n hadn't seen that much ass since a twerk competition
>no

blah rusty right now forgive me





Originally Posted by Pimp Daddy Payne

You got shouts out from Knuck, wow. Joined a new site as streak seekers
Yall aint washed up... Just dying slowly on the beach with the sea creatures.
>no
I got Defiant in AOBL, his mini me in BA. It's not what's preferable to them.
You haven't heard the news? bleak gets put in two battles that are DEFINITELY wins.
>lol hell no
Where are these text vets coming from? I'm dumpin. Killin "Herbs"
I haven't seen this many Rebirths since Wayne tried something similar.
>no
So now you don't have a losing record... I wouldn't bother to send.
There's more bandwagon hopping now, then when San Fran started to win.
>no
You ain't a hero. to return's anotha name that's shook when I'm baggin
We aren't your friends, and these HAPPY homecomings make you look like a faggot.
>no


This battle wasnt what I expected - vote def for having some ok bars which is enough to pinch it

[Sharp]

Promise land

V

Washed up


Both can drop hotter. Def's concept was worded better and I felt hit harder

V/Defcon