Sharp Nine vs. RPK {Sharp Nine wins}

[Sn00p]

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Sharp Nine RPK

[RPK]

Check...10?

[Sharp]

cool cool cool

10's good

[RPK]

ext?

[Sharp]

if you need it sure

[Sharp]

RPK has the wording down,
but comes incredibly lazy at times. Don't get me wrong,
his wording's still good at those times, but he just does
not give a fuck about putting thought into his concept.

your contents just neglected, that aint the greatest a' decisions
those verses got such immaculate concept shun they could be the basis of a religion
think youre a powerhouse? last week proved thats crap dude
you got the strength of an Ox... meaning you're about on par w/ that noob
n you + girls is a joke, they wont touch that cock ya monster
Only people that believe in 'PK scoring are huuuuuge soccer watchers
My attire's slick, lookin smooth while i blast geeks
but only time this fag was in choice threads, he was lurkin disc. last week
Guy's been talked up, but i know he aint blessed to bash foes
Used to hear 'PK fire' all the time... then I stopped using Ness in Smash Bros

[RPK]

ur girl thinks ur a tool,she knows that ur soft and mild
I don't have to spend money on that hoe...I make Sharpei and still fuck her doggystyle
This geek doesn't get angry,so I'm killing this lame after splitting his frame
He never blows off Steam...that's just the site he uses to download videogames
Faggot u aren't hot to me,u always drop sloppily
so I'll quickly give SNL...everybody knows it'll be pure comedy
U'll never win in this league,ur chance to champ is looking slim
Shit u got such an invalid domain...Diasick would report it to VBulletin
I kill nerds artfully,everyone knows my style,son
So when I make Sharp chord inversions...u know that its his spinal one

[Cashius]

Immaculate conception, ox

Vs.

Sharpei

Sharps verse hit harder. I was impressed, cuz he's improved since I've been gone. RPK was ok, just a little bland for my taste.

[Split]

Immaculate conception was forced good attempt
Choice threads was nice and so was ox

Vs

Sharpei, sharp chord was worth a mention

RPK you had solid concepts but the twist you was putting on those lines was fucking up your delivery. Like spinal being separated from chord really weakened the word play connection and invalid domain was a stretch. This was a close match. Sharp hit harder on all fronts IMO despite having the worst miss of the battle, didnt hurt him too bad in the schem of things

V/sharp nine

[Flow]

Not a great battle expected better from both.

Sharp wins for me on his closer which for me is lotb by far.

[Orc]

DIFFERENT STYLES AT SHOW HERE..SHARP HAD CLEANER WORDING ON SOME BAD CONCEPTS WHEREAS RPK HAD SOME OKAY IDEAS BUT THE WORDING WAS BLAND AND LAZY..THE THING IS SHARP HAD MORE OF HIS EXECUTION ON POINT THAN RPK..WHETHER IT BE WORDIN/PUNCH/CONCEPT..IT WAS MORE OF THE COMPLETE PACKAGE AND MORE CONSISTENT THROUGHOUT..SHARP NINE WINS

[Sn00p]

4-0, Sharp Nine. More votes please.

[~RustyGunZ~]

think youre a powerhouse? last week proved thats crap dude
you got the strength of an Ox... meaning you're about on par w/ that noob
My attire's slick, lookin smooth while i blast geeks
but only time this fag was in choice threads, he was lurkin disc. last week
Guy's been talked up, but i know he aint blessed to bash foes
Used to hear 'PK fire' all the time... then I stopped using Ness in Smash Bros

i used a PK line against him. PK fire was dope. choice threads was nice use of a current boarding event. ox line was used in his battle but i'll assume that hadn't been dropped.

vs

This geek doesn't get angry,so I'm killing this lame after splitting his frame
He never blows off Steam...that's just the site he uses to download videogames
U'll never win in this league,ur chance to champ is looking slim
Shit u got such an invalid domain...Diasick would report it to VBulletin
I kill nerds artfully,everyone knows my style,son
So when I make Sharp chord inversions...u know that its his spinal one

sharpie was used against him and was bad then. SNL is played. rest was okay

I'm gonna give it to

v/sharp

but close. rpk used 2 concepts on him that were used in his newbie champ match haha.. hmm

[Maximus]

Hmm.. Not a bad battle, kinda expected more tbh but still not bad tho. Sharp had choice threads and strenght of an ox while rpk had the sharp chord line which was a cool np.
V/sharp