Ryan 12 vs Pyro - RYAN WINS

[Ryan 12]

Ryan 12 vs Pyro


10 lines


due Tuesday check

[Pyro]

checking in.. G'luck bro. Don't let my record fool you ;)

[Ryan 12]

Your existence is controlled by the code of fagg0ts, that's no lie
The man who directed Brokeback Mountain also directed the Life of Pi
This guy is offically gay as fuck
Batty said he'd fuck Johnny Depp in the ass & that day you made him your avatar
With no W's, I'll make sure your record stays low, stupid
Till yu think I was teachin him ethnics the way I'll add Morals to it
You're not fresh, your concepts are ancient as shit you fagg0t fuck
After 3 interactions you're repeating the same shit like an AI character
lol @ "don't let my record fool you".. that's funny, bruh
Cuz your record didn't, it actually pm'd me telling me your whack as fucking fuck
Pyro

[Pyro]

You quoted me to be a fag right? How Ironic
you've been left behind all your life because you was known to be the drag type.
which makes you a queen b, but you don't sting so what's your Philosophy?
"Pyro keeps more Clips n Techs/text like Johnny Depps Filmography!?"
Na it's more to it cause they say Ryan has no future in which it holds vendor
Cookin his dreams on Ice with sticks that's why his goals tender.
Bro, member you ain't a pro member, I'm a Stoned blender so why you Choose me?
I'm known for turning a Fruit into a Smoothie.
you kind've cool tho, I like that mask on your face, lookin vile kid
till i Smack that front off, now lets see that pretty smile.. Bitch

sorry Netcees wasn't working for me all yesterday

[Ryan 12]

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=45310
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=49231

OPEN FOR VOTES


Pyro get ur links

[Pyro]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=49231
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=263852

[Allen Knight]

Opener, morals

Vs

Goal tender


V/Ryan, decent battle, pryo had alot of ideas but wording was off..
Ryan had a solid verse. Opener was nice He was more consists here imo he wins.

[Hush]

Ryan by a neck

Surprised I never saw that more ls wp b4

[Plot]

the 'teaching him ethnics' typo was the only lol here.

[Loot]

Vote ryan. The morals line, n the life of pi line were cool. The life of pi line was way smoother. Both of you have weird wording at times.

The fruit smoothie was aite, n that lets see ya smile bitch would've prolly been ok live.

[Orc]

morals line was dopeee

smoothie line had cool execution

ryans had the life of pi that was cool too

vote ryan

[Sicc]

Your existence is controlled by the code of fagg0ts, that's no lie
The man who directed Brokeback Mountain also directed the Life of Pi

Ok concept - wording off, IMO. Came off a lil statement'ish.

This guy is offically gay as fuck
Batty said he'd fuck Johnny Depp in the ass & that day you made him your avatar

No, doesn't even rhyme either, tho.

With no W's, I'll make sure your record stays low, stupid
Till yu think I was teachin him ethnics the way I'll add Morals to it

Dope concept - could have executed better tho. Morals/More L's, I've seen flipped a few times.

You're not fresh, your concepts are ancient as shit you fagg0t fuck
After 3 interactions you're repeating the same shit like an AI character

No, a lot of filler here. Could have choose some relevant to rhyme with character.

lol @ "don't let my record fool you".. that's funny, bruh
Cuz your record didn't, it actually pm'd me telling me your whack as fucking fuck

Played concept.

vs

You quoted me to be a fag right? How Ironic
you've been left behind all your life because you was known to be the drag type.

Played concept.

which makes you a queen b, but you don't sting so what's your Philosophy?
"Pyro keeps more Clips n Techs/text like Johnny Depps Filmography!?"

Techs/Text wp's are extremely played. Probably more played then Defeat/Da feet.

Na it's more to it cause they say Ryan has no future in which it holds vendor
Cookin his dreams on Ice with sticks that's why his goals tender.

Eh - could have been dope, poorly executed, IMO.

Bro, member you ain't a pro member, I'm a Stoned blender so why you Choose me?
I'm known for turning a Fruit into a Smoothie.

Nah. Had potential tho. Lazy execution.

you kind've cool tho, I like that mask on your face, lookin vile kid
till i Smack that front off, now lets see that pretty smile.. Bitch

No

v/Ryan - More consistent with less misses.

[fresh]

Your existence is controlled by the code of fagg0ts, that's no lie
The man who directed Brokeback Mountain also directed the Life of Pi
Not great, its lacking sting
This guy is offically gay as fuck
Batty said he'd fuck Johnny Depp in the ass & that day you made him your avatar
Damn man this could have been great, decent concept and nice personal but the wording made it a dud
With no W's, I'll make sure your record stays low, stupid
Till yu think I was teachin him ethnics the way I'll add Morals to it
This is better, nice punch/wordplay/concept
You're not fresh, your concepts are ancient as shit you fagg0t fuck
After 3 interactions you're repeating the same shit like an AI character
Whats with the no rhyming? This didn't work for me
lol @ "don't let my record fool you".. that's funny, bruh
Cuz your record didn't, it actually pm'd me telling me your whack as fucking fuck
Not feeling it


You quoted me to be a fag right? How Ironic
you've been left behind all your life because you was known to be the drag type.
I see what your going for but the connection isn't there. Why was he left behind? because he was a drag queen? decent concept poorly executed
which makes you a queen b, but you don't sting so what's your Philosophy?
"Pyro keeps more Clips n Techs/text like Johnny Depps Filmography!?"
no
Na it's more to it cause they say Ryan has no future in which it holds vendor
Cookin his dreams on Ice with sticks that's why his goals tender.
ehhh concept there but again execution is shit
Bro, member you ain't a pro member, I'm a Stoned blender so why you Choose me?
I'm known for turning a Fruit into a Smoothie.
wtf? hell no
you kind've cool tho, I like that mask on your face, lookin vile kid
till i Smack that front off, now lets see that pretty smile.. Bitch
wtf again no

Ryan takes this easily, with the morals line which was dope, and nothing else quotable but still had better bars than pyro. Pyro work on your wording dude, its killing you. You had a couple iight concepts but they fell flat do to poor wording.

v/Ryan