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Sharp
01-27-2014, 02:28 PM
NBL Season 7
Week 9

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Neighbor Tic Tac

Tic
01-28-2014, 09:43 AM
12?

Tic
01-29-2014, 08:53 AM
Neighbor Sharp Nine

Is this happening?

Tic
01-29-2014, 12:01 PM
If I can find you a replacement by the end of the day would that be alright? (It may have to be me)
Yeah that's cool. I'm gonna be honest though, I probably won't be able to drop until Sunday.

Sharp
01-31-2014, 09:57 PM
sunday sounds great

Tic
02-02-2014, 11:59 PM
It's embarrassing bro, in that Champ Match we saw Bobbypin Sharp like Tacs were exposed
You're wack 'n it shows, that loss doesn't just stick out like a Sore Thumb, more like Kapernick's nose
He's the faggy type, he writes hard but no one believes it like Nappy whites
He'll never last in fights, cuz after one punch he'll Brews worse than Natty Ice
There comes a Point where whatever Sharpen remains dull, never Sharp as a Tac
His attempts to impress end up like his career, cuz last time he tried leavin a Market collapsed*
I knew this prick was a fag when he started giving Certain gestures
But I swear I never thought I'd see rhymes & concepts played worse than Denver
I'm not sure which you'll get 1st, a girl or proper voting links
Cuz the only time he'll get Pinky up is a night out w/Orc holding drinks

*Mark it

Sharp Nine When you see this, post whenever you get the chance

Sharp
02-03-2014, 12:43 AM
dudes style is whack. needs a week just to not sound played
cause anything Tackey been outta style for over a decade
you think we don't know you're queer? pshhhh, please dude
christ, you dont just PikMen - you could be the mascot for the Wii U
ya girl won't touch you. that pussy lives for me but for you its dead, sir
you were counting on that spread but got disappointed... like everyone who bet on Denver
she's easy as shit. easy lay. i dont even have to try, bro
if she shows up its just to Give it Away - like the Chili Peppers at the Halftime show
you're pathetic. nothing. i'll be leaving you rattled
you may be gettin SlapsTic... but the whole site was laughin at you way before this battle

Tettris
02-03-2014, 09:20 AM
He's the faggy type, he writes hard but no one believes it like Nappy whites
He'll never last in fights, cuz after one punch he'll Brews worse than Natty Ice

vs

you think we don't know you're queer? pshhhh, please dude
christ, you dont just PikMen - you could be the mascot for the Wii U
you're pathetic. nothing. i'll be leaving you rattled
you may be gettin SlapsTic... but the whole site was laughin at you way before this battle

pretty decent battle...sharp with the extra quote...

v/sharp

ill nik-A
02-03-2014, 11:38 AM
Sharp had the better verse, I mean tac used an explain punch astric, a big no no
The wii line was lotb prolly
Sharp wins

ill nik-A
02-03-2014, 12:23 PM
Can you explain a little more? Always trying to improve.

Sure man, let me get home, later today

Sn00p
02-03-2014, 05:12 PM
tic was aite. nothing was really bad. the opener was a bit too long-winded. natty ice was good. don't explain punches. either it's too forced or we'll get it anyways. denver wasn't flipped enough. the played wp/connection was too basic. closer was too indirect imo.

sharp was cool. seemed u didn't put too much effort into this, but i liked slapstick & wii u. rest weren't misses either. props.

so yea. tic has the basics down, but still needs some work. sharp was very consistent and had the best 2 quotes of the battle.

v/s9

ill nik-A
02-03-2014, 06:10 PM
Tic Tac as promised

It's embarrassing bro, in that Champ Match we saw Bobbypin Sharp like Tacs were exposed
You're wack 'n it shows, that loss doesn't just stick out like a Sore Thumb, more like Kapernick's nose
He's the faggy type, he writes hard but no one believes it like Nappy whites
He'll never last in fights, cuz after one punch he'll Brews worse than Natty Ice
There comes a Point where whatever Sharpen remains dull, never Sharp as a Tac
His attempts to impress end up like his career, cuz last time he tried leavin a Market collapsed*
--- stick out... The nose thing makes it ehh, too simple, the brews/ bruise wordplay is played but ur flip was effective and kinda worked
--- never explain a punch, if u feel u have the need to, it's either not worded good enough or it's a stretch

I knew this prick was a fag when he started giving Certain gestures
But I swear I never thought I'd see rhymes & concepts played worse than Denver
I'm not sure which you'll get 1st, a girl or proper voting links
Cuz the only time he'll get Pinky up is a night out w/Orc holding drinks
--play u like a sport line, too obvious and played..
--the pinky line just doesn't really hit him, it's more of a shot at Orc
Basically it's all about wording with a fresh take... If the concept has been done before u better have an extra fresh take on it for it to work

Let me know if u have any questions

Destroyer
02-03-2014, 08:49 PM
natty ice was decent, asterisk was a big no no

vs

slapstick was decent and so was wii u
more than enough to win handily

v/sharp

Alphabet
02-03-2014, 10:45 PM
natty ice

vs

wiiU n slapstick

mvgt to sharpnine for the harder hitters/consistent verse and having the lotb which imo was slapstic

Clash
02-04-2014, 01:09 AM
Mvgt sharpnine

Punches hit harder. Better wording and flow. The wii line was the best.
Of your verse imo. Tic was decent but need his punches hit harder by
Better wording and makin all his lines relevant. The broncos was a good
Idea but felt like you just threw it in there.

JonTheDon
02-04-2014, 01:39 AM
Last n fights

Vs.

Slaptic, wii u

Iight battls tic just had that 1 didnt really like anything else, sharp had slaptic lol n wii u was lls definitely enough 4 the win

V/sharp9

Tic
02-04-2014, 09:15 AM
Good shit Sharp Nine