Poetic (me & you)

[Dope girl]

You are my everything,
I don't want noone but you.
I been thinkin bout you day & night,
I don't want you to leave me.
Everyday we fussing & cursing but I stick with you,
Because I love you.
When I look into your eyes,
I see connection meant to be.
These are the reasons why I love you,
you are loyalty,
you are faithful.
you are Charming.

suppose to be Poetic

[Certain]

I love you, too.

[Objective]

''you are loyalty,''
^ I liked this line. Dope shit.

[Dope girl]

thanks!

[Exis]

This is why I hate poetry.

[Smooth]

^ nahh this was cool. A little simple yeah but poetry can be whatever, that's the cool shit about it. I was feeling the emotion in this.. for some people its hard to give in and put themselves out there in their own writing. I think writings the perfect place TO do that, one of the only places for me.. so I appreciate how deep you got with this. Nice.