Whip Game proper

[Eviscerate]

The Garsons quality's higher, 3-peice complete shod in tires
on the block ..it's fire, Continental's swabbed with McGuiars
hella flush. that stance meaner than anything seen on 19's
projectors reflecting diamond gleam intensity of HID beams
for a glimpse of Eviscerate, spectators place they face on the glass
with an air of grace and of class, way that i flash suede on the dash
pass, the Grey Poupon. peasants i poop-on, and take swigs of Hennessy
cognac enters me. this shit is heavenly, reclined in leathery
nobody knows it's me, but they notice me. burl wood below my seats
premium package all i see, Junction Produce from over seas
kit costs 6 G's. I don't ball on clothes, instead, my Whip game proper
Work Equips. drivin big bodies, lookin straight mobster..

[PancakeBrah]

Ha this was entertaining. The first line was the best, flow wise. Very slick. It was refreshing to see something other than the normal types of open mic pieces. You wrote about something you're passionate about in a style you're known for. Good stuff. Write more things.

[Frank]

Whattup

[Exis]

Havn't read sumthin' from you in a long time, this was solid...the middle section was tight imo.

Stay upwards.

[Hush]

Dope

[CopyPat]

haha sup evis i liked this shit man. fairly simple on a technical basis but mad imagery, really swaggy feel to it. reminded me of some old jayz kinda. dropped some cool vocab that flowed nice. leathery peasants i poop on grey poupon etc. really gave it that classy rich feel hahaha. enjoyable man. also could see this being a nice lil aduio verse. all the lines were kept at the same length etc . good shit bro. post more

[Eviscerate]

thnx doods