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Vulgar
03-26-2013, 12:57 AM
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PancakeBrah
03-26-2013, 01:00 AM
you're probably the best writer on this site.

your writing personality leaves a fuckton to be desired, though.

Vulgar
03-26-2013, 01:02 AM
http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-Tl6zRW9ucWc/TlvFU4L0OPI/AAAAAAAAAIw/b4DSZ84KThI/s1600/142644-obama-2.jpg

What you say rings true...

am I too emotionless?

Nigma
03-26-2013, 04:35 AM
"I see Lazarus baring his teeth in a palace disparaged, collapsed in the barracks
While progressing your interesting train of thought through this portion of the verse, this line, in the midst of it, was a very suiting moment of imagery

Keep your top hats on, my brothers from a number of troubling tribes
Please take your prayer beads out and raise 'em up to the discomforting sky
My point to make is that the age of accountability doesn’t apply;
if we don’t live in an age of accountability, but that‘s the crux of this lie.
Too legit

The first steps that they take…stamping on the human face forever, in baby shoes.
Interesting extending metaphor. Lines like these really made this an enjoyable piece.