Ox vs. Cashius {Cashius wins}

[Sn00p]

AOBL
ArtofBattling.com Text Battle League




Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Friday,
March 29th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Sunday 11:59 PM PST.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are normally 24 hours
(unless requested otherwise, that is),
can be no longer than 36 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.



Line Limit:

Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.



Voting:

Must vote on 5 battles and post your links.
Post the links in the thread titled "Week 6 Voting Links".
You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links.
You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you
don't have to cry later. Details about this are to be
found in the "Week 6 Voting Links" thread.



General Rules:

1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
means you will disqualified.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.




Ox RPK

[Ox]

Check, 10?

[Cashius]

Ok.

[Ox]

Gratz on bein awarded assistant coach on namix squad...


How do I switch from the mobile version? Or is that a really dumb question?

Sharps verse hit harder. I was impressed, cuz he's improved since I've been gone.


Ur On 9's dick for bein amazed by remarks
Its only cuz ur the dullest tool in the shed, Who praise to be sharp
Bro ur on a journey to become a Better man.
& like the punches in ur verse, u lostboys are bound to neverland.
Cash is dealt w/ everyday, so let this sham ramble.
He's the face of losers everywhere, as cash always ends up bein Man handled.
Ur Not Valued & when u left no 1 dwelled or grieved.
Ur returns like bein paid for nursin sick relatives, its not well received.
He's 2nd rate & the assistant coach who lacks sly antics.
& he has it all backswards, he doesn't understand, he just stands under dynamix.

[Cashius]

my bad check work is crazy

Damn...we got ourselves a baller?

Nahhhhh, he's broke as fuck. This bitch ain't getting paid
But the dude IS making cake!...the ones in the urnal that I piss on everyday
Faggot doesn't pull bitches. If he says he's landing tens, it's all frontin'
If you've ever met a Babe that blue ox...it was standing next to Paul Bunyan
Go back to your old name. You ain't gettin' the ass from hoes, right?
Inertia involves resistance...and chicks've been giving you THAT your whole life
You're a fag and we know...you LOVE getting poked in the ass by a bloke
Everyone knows you love the Pole Ox...You won't even laugh at those jokes
I fuck an actress. You fuck a fat bitch...believe that hoe's lumpy
When your Calcutta piece of cake...it's big enough to feed that whole country

[Split]

Cash is dealt w/ everyday, so let this sham ramble.
He's the face of losers everywhere, as cash always ends up bein Man handled.
Ur Not Valued & when u left no 1 dwelled or grieved.
Ur returns like bein paid for nursin sick relatives, its not well received.


Faggot doesn't pull bitches. If he says he's landing tens, it's all frontin'
If you've ever met a Babe that blue ox...it was standing next to Paul Bunyan
Go back to your old name. You ain't gettin' the ass from hoes, right?
Inertia involves resistance...and chicks've been giving you THAT your whole life
You're a fag and we know...you LOVE getting poked in the ass by a bloke
Everyone knows you love the Pole Ox...You won't even laugh at those jokes

Cashius had this easy. maybe being generous with the quotes, but in the context of this battle, definitely took it


Ox, work on making your wordplay work smoother, or switching up your concepts more. your first punch was more of a punch against sharp or poorly worded.

V/ Cashius

[Orc]

CASHIUS THE CALCUTTA WP HAS BEEN DONE X100 U SHOULD HAVE LEFT THAT OUT OF YA VERSE..OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS COOL..THE OPENER WAS FRESH AND FUNNY..ONLY THING I'D SAY IS TRY SWITCH UP YOUR DELIVERY CUZ UR STARTING TO GET LAZY AND EXECUTING EVERY BAR THE EXACT SAME...GETS BORING..OX YOUR WORDING IS KILLING YOU..HAVE A LOOK AT HOW SOME OF THE TOP HEADS WORD THEIR BARS..FLUIDITY IS KEY...MAKE IT SOUND NATURAL...WEED OUT THE BASIC SPELLING AND GRAMMAR ERRORS AND YOU'LL BE SURPRISED AT HOW MUCH EASIER IT GETS..YOUR CONCEPTS WERE OKAY BUT YEAH..THE NOT WELL RECEIVED WAS A NICE FLIP..KEEP DOING MORE LIKE THAT..CASHIUS WINS

[Sharp]

Neverland

V

Bunyan, inertia



Ox could definitely do with some improvements to wording, but his concepts are getting stronger. Cash had some funny lines, no real misses, give it to him for a stronger verse

V/ Cashius

[Dominate]

Seen never land and understand/stand under a lot before... Other concepts all were cool but delivery/wording just isn't doing them justice IMO

Vs

Paul bunyon was dope, the rest were OKish concepts but executed well... Pole ox almost dope

V/- Cash

[Maximus]

Man handled, well received
vs
bunyan, inertia and pole ox
.
.
V/cashius
his wording was better and his punches were more direct, ox had some really poorly worded concepts that had potential to be dope.

[namix]

Ox - liked the concept of not well received because its so effin true, money for nursing family members, i liked that. i seen so many flips on neverland in the day - your other concepts would have resonated a bit more with stronger wording, bring your punch into context in the setup a bit better, and some of those would have hit a bit more effectively.

Cash- lmao @ the paul bunyin reference, nice. pole ox was a good concept that woulda been doper with a bit tighter wording, but still funny. was the 'cal' part of the 'calcutta' representing 'gal', mighta been a bit of a stretch there. overall still def. got it with better execution and a couple zingers in there. lotb - babe blue ox lol, good shit.

vote- cashius

[RPK]

Ur Not Valued & when u left no 1 dwelled or grieved.
Ur returns like bein paid for nursin sick relatives, its not well received.

Vs.

Faggot doesn't pull bitches. If he says he's landing tens, it's all frontin'
If you've ever met a Babe that blue ox...it was standing next to Paul Bunyan
Go back to your old name. You ain't gettin' the ass from hoes, right?
Inertia involves resistance...and chicks've been giving you THAT your whole life
You're a fag and we know...you LOVE getting poked in the ass by a bloke
Everyone knows you love the Pole Ox...You won't even laugh at those jokes

Thought this was pretty one sided. Cash was pretty consistent and took it .
V/Cashius

[Sn00p]

Ur Not Valued & when u left no 1 dwelled or grieved.
Ur returns like bein paid for nursin sick relatives, its not well received.
He's 2nd rate & the assistant coach who lacks sly antics.
& he has it all backswards, he doesn't understand, he just stands under dynamix.
^this feels played but i haven't seen it and i'm too lazy to check

vs.

Faggot doesn't pull bitches. If he says he's landing tens, it's all frontin'
If you've ever met a Babe that blue ox...it was standing next to Paul Bunyan
You're a fag and we know...you LOVE getting poked in the ass by a bloke
Everyone knows you love the Pole Ox...You won't even laugh at those jokes

yeah, cashius did enough to win here, since his unquotes were better. it was kinda close tho. but cash wording was better too. so yeah, he got this. ox wasn't too bad tho. he always has some lines, but he's just not consistent enough so far.
v/cash