Twenty One vs. namix {namix wins}

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Twenty One namix

[Twenty One]

nevermind went 16..

[namix]

dropping 10-12...

hello,

are you really going to show?

I'll match you if you drop first.

[Twenty One]

namix is old school and I haven't seen him battle since like 05 haha, but I'll assume he brings some fire.
namix: 70/30


Predictions overrated, n your case outdated..your hypes n slumber queer
2005's text is dead..savage & the highest Peek of your wonder years
hype for what? no chick would Believe shit even with told wisdom
cuz if Na mix..er, is only cuz he intoxicates bitches to sleep with him
face it G, Hollywood spits crack, & snoops dope..so it makes you think
that Mixes trouble in paradise & his Signature beverage druggin womens drinks
enough name plays time to get serious faggot.. n to realise
if red bull gives you wings then Namix would berry well be a fruit fly
u dumb? 21s the chick causin harm, break arms u bout ta get sonned
N nas lines Blank & in Your case shootin to battle of wits out gunned
seriously ya styles naughty child sticky & touchin trouble w/ out fear
if you read mixed lines, its what he been doing w/ old concepts for years
so knuck & dom u'd assume this fag'll bring heat, this punked or a parody?
cuz if namix'll bring the fire men...it'll be the entertainment to his next bachlor party
& this wins a open door to success & stepping stone to fame shawty
so if namix windows pane...it'll be the place ware they'd have to fetch his body

16.

[namix]

vs. who?! that pic? oh shit!
yo Split, at first I thought I was facing that 2 eyes ‘n a mouth guy -_-
my opponent's known to underscore, but she aint dashing on the outside!
if only you had followed your heart… you woulda opted to back track
but ya chose to follow ya nose…. turn up, get pointed and laughed at!!
some are young ‘n drinking beer, some are waiting to do it legally here
but now the only chicks who wanna be 21 are bulimics wit mirrors.
someone put that pic up on hot or not, she wont see praise or get love
shit, i bet people wont even start raiding her until after she's bugged!
you're naively optimistic, but ya game has holes - I dig the ones ya dug
half-full or half-empty… either way there’s something missing in ya mug
ya no rapper, no lie- I’ll have this maverick on ice - man, it’s so vicious
the last goose that was this cooked had great balls of fire go with it
now bottom barrel meets top gun, hun, you aint budgin this mountain
kinda cool ya first L is comin from someone who’s won in the thousands.
70/30 is clear- the odds are so nice they pretended she has a chance now
she could train wit Malachi's dad 'n STILL wont catch me wit my pants down!

[Sharp]

seriously ya styles naughty child sticky & touchin trouble w/ out fear
if you read mixed lines, its what he been doing w/ old concepts for years
so knuck & dom u'd assume this fag'll bring heat, this punked or a parody?
cuz if namix'll bring the fire men...it'll be the entertainment to his next bachlor party

v

yo Split, at first I thought I was facing that 2 eyes ‘n a mouth guy -_-
my opponent's known to underscore, but she aint dashing on the outside!
you're naively optimistic, but ya game has holes - I dig the ones ya dug
half-full or half-empty… either way there’s something missing in ya mug
70/30 is clear- the odds are so nice they pretended she has a chance now
she could train wit Malachi's dad 'n STILL wont catch me wit my pants down!



21 doesn't quite have a grounding in text, but this was a decent showing. a few concepts that ended up being misses took away from the verse. Namix when in on that avy pic lol, thought the opener was lotb, and was generally pretty good. Giving it to him for harder hitting verse

v/namix


Editing out the mentions, my bad split and rob

[Cashius]

21...I felt a lot of your concepts were stretched. None of the name plays really had any impact cuz they were all reaches. It was a decent verse at best.

Namix...I liked the follow your nose line. Mug line was cool. Those were the two that stood out. Everything else was decent. Strong verse.

Namix took this pretty easily.

[Lotto Smirk]

seriously ya styles naughty child sticky & touchin trouble w/ out fear
if you read mixed lines, its what he been doing w/ old concepts for years

vs

yo Split, at first I thought I was facing that 2 eyes ‘n a mouth guy -_-
my opponent's known to underscore, but she aint dashing on the outside!
you're naively optimistic, but ya game has holes - I dig the ones ya dug
half-full or half-empty… either way there’s something missing in ya mug
70/30 is clear- the odds are so nice they pretended she has a chance now
she could train wit Malachi's dad 'n STILL wont catch me wit my pants down!

vote- namix took this pretty easy

[Maximus]

Well, twenty one got the logic down but his nameplays were forced and stretched which made them had no impact, just work on better concepts and an effective delivery and i think u'll be fine. Namix had some lols, good opener and half empty line was cool too. Surprised u used a bug/raid concept, u should know thats plaaaaaayyyed as fuck. Anyways i got namix taking this with better hits.

[RPK]

yo Split, at first I thought I was facing that 2 eyes ‘n a mouth guy -_-
my opponent's known to underscore, but she aint dashing on the outside!
you're naively optimistic, but ya game has holes - I dig the ones ya dug
half-full or half-empty… either way there’s something missing in ya mug
70/30 is clear- the odds are so nice they pretended she has a chance now
she could train wit Malachi's dad 'n STILL wont catch me wit my pants down!

Vs.

seriously ya styles naughty child sticky & touchin trouble w/ out fear
if you read mixed lines, its what he been doing w/ old concepts for years
so knuck & dom u'd assume this fag'll bring heat, this punked or a parody?
cuz if namix'll bring the fire men...it'll be the entertainment to his next bachlor party

Thought this was decently close. Namix had one more quotable, but his non quotes were stronger as well.
V/namix

[bleak]

half empty, underscore

vs.

mixed lines

21, some of your concepts just didn't completely connect. You had the idea, but just barely missed on most of them. Work on making everything in your verse relevant to the rest of it. Nam came pretty nice. Idk if I had ever seen a battle from nam that wasn't in archives, so it's nice to read a current verse. I am surprised that you used a Raid line. although you prolly didn't bring flamethrowers to this meeting, considering that you didn't know who 21 was. I think namix got this pretty easily, stay up tho 21.

[Wicked]

seriously ya styles naughty child sticky & touchin trouble w/ out fear
if you read mixed lines, its what he been doing w/ old concepts for years
so knuck & dom u'd assume this fag'll bring heat, this punked or a parody?
cuz if namix'll bring the fire men...it'll be the entertainment to his next bachlor party
& this wins a open door to success & stepping stone to fame shawty
so if namix windows pane...it'll be the place ware they'd have to fetch his body

I personally think that these 3 bars may have been some nice hit had you worded them a little better.
Great concepts though.

vs

if only you had followed your heart… you woulda opted to back track
but ya chose to follow ya nose…. turn up, get pointed and laughed at!!
some are young ‘n drinking beer, some are waiting to do it legally here
but now the only chicks who wanna be 21 are bulimics wit mirrors.
someone put that pic up on hot or not, she wont see praise or get love
shit, i bet people wont even start raiding her until after she's bugged!

These bars were the best in your verse in my opinion and they weren't nothing hard hitting at all.

I feel that this battle was very close. 21 had some great concepts and was very close to throwing together some solid hits. Namix definitely focused on the pic too much, it got real tired real fast.
Even though Namix's verse was not very effective it did have a couple of bars that were put together well.
21 if you would have landed just one of them concepts you would have taken this match easily.

V: Namix

[Sn00p]

seriously ya styles naughty child sticky & touchin trouble w/ out fear
if you read mixed lines, its what he been doing w/ old concepts for years
so knuck & dom u'd assume this fag'll bring heat, this punked or a parody?
cuz if namix'll bring the fire men...it'll be the entertainment to his next bachlor party

vs.

yo Split, at first I thought I was facing that 2 eyes ‘n a mouth guy -_-
my opponent's known to underscore, but she aint dashing on the outside!
if only you had followed your heart… you woulda opted to back track
but ya chose to follow ya nose…. turn up, get pointed and laughed at!!
some are young ‘n drinking beer, some are waiting to do it legally here
but now the only chicks who wanna be 21 are bulimics wit mirrors.
70/30 is clear- the odds are so nice they pretended she has a chance now
she could train wit Malachi's dad 'n STILL wont catch me wit my pants down!

yeah, namix was consistently hitting. he had some cool concepts, but so did 21. what really separated them was wording, since namix's was really good and helped his concepts hit while 21's was hindering her ideas' impact. if she can sort that out, she won't be bad tho. anyways, here, namix had enough to win with better wording and thus more consistency and more hits and less misses.
v/nam