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View Full Version : Contender match: destroyer (3-3) vs lotto smirk (4-4) - Destroyer WINS by DQ, OPEN FOR FEED (will count as voting link)


Allen Knight
02-05-2014, 07:37 PM
NBL Season 7
Week 9

Due FRIDAY, Feb 7th

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Max - 16 lines
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Destroyer Lotto Smirk

Destroyer
02-05-2014, 07:41 PM
Friday? really?
in for 12

Lotto Smirk
02-07-2014, 07:30 PM
wow didn't realise this was due gonna need the ext

Destroyer
02-07-2014, 07:51 PM
yeah you can have it obv
let's just go 10

Allen Knight
02-07-2014, 08:37 PM
Ext 24-hours

Destroyer
02-08-2014, 03:17 PM
des been doin this. I keep my punches & jabs tight
if lotto up & coming, it's under his sheets w/ a playboy & flashlight
I'm serious. cats see des & they run cuz they fear me kid
meanwhile, u got beat by jimmy, like ur girl just missed her period
des will destroy u. champ match? nah, I'm hurtin ur case
it's like I borrowed the Joker's blade the way I'm leaving smirk on his face
& I don't mean a fake smile, this dude's bars are straight vile
that's why my motto for lotto is the same as b rabbit's from 8-mile
think u got a chance @ this? think u can turn this battle into a killing?
ur not only the wrong man for the job, security is escorting u out of the building
Lotto Smirk

Lotto Smirk
02-08-2014, 09:26 PM
Sick of uranus attitude,styles outdated yet ya still stick with it
If it's out of this world..I hope it Crash's & burns n can't make the return visit
Always running ya mouth off in discussion, man it really flips me off
talking descant stop bitching about how unfair the votes were when he lost

all i cud do

Clash
02-09-2014, 06:02 AM
Up n coming, joker

Vs

Nothing


Des had a couple hits here, nothing to crazy but was jabbin with
All his bars. Obviously des had the quantity advantage, lotto was
Cool wit the planet scheme the second bar was ok, but lacked that
Sting, sort of statementish. Really sounds like lotto rushed this. .
For more volume of attacks

Mvgt des

Destroyer
02-09-2014, 08:03 AM
why is this open for votes?
it says right at the top, "MINIMUM 10 lines."

Sharp
02-09-2014, 08:29 PM
des been doin this. I keep my punches & jabs tight
if lotto up & coming, it's under his sheets w/ a playboy & flashlight
solid
I'm serious. cats see des & they run cuz they fear me kid
meanwhile, u got beat by jimmy, like ur girl just missed her period
ok
des will destroy u. champ match? nah, I'm hurtin ur case
it's like I borrowed the Joker's blade the way I'm leaving smirk on his face
lol nice
& I don't mean a fake smile, this dude's bars are straight vile
that's why my motto for lotto is the same as b rabbit's from 8-mile
eh
think u got a chance @ this? think u can turn this battle into a killing?
ur not only the wrong man for the job, security is escorting u out of the building
slick


Sick of uranus attitude,styles outdated yet ya still stick with it
If it's out of this world..I hope it Crash's & burns n can't make the return visit
alright, but wording's awkward
Always running ya mouth off in discussion, man it really flips me off
talking descant stop bitching about how unfair the votes were when he lost
descant coulda been a newish nameflip i think but it woulda been tough as fuck to flip, but at the moment this just says 'des can't' unless im missing something


but yeah, destroyer was really solid all around, lotto was clearly rushed but had two cool ideas that didnt really come out as well as they couldve. good stuff overall, woulda liked to see the full battle

King Karaoke
02-10-2014, 10:25 AM
Hi...

I think that Des' last 3 were good especially the smirk on the face line...
I know of Lotto's circumstances so I understand why the wording is a little off but Uranus lines are somewhat played...
I liked the descant line because it was fresh and creative...
Wouldn't mind seeing this battle go down somewhere down the line...

Bye...

Tic
02-10-2014, 10:35 AM
des been doin this. I keep my punches & jabs tight
if lotto up & coming, it's under his sheets w/ a playboy & flashlight
Ehh. Execution wasn't bad, but concept has been done.
I'm serious. cats see des & they run cuz they fear me kid
meanwhile, u got beat by jimmy, like ur girl just missed her period
Didn't get this one.
des will destroy u. champ match? nah, I'm hurtin ur case
it's like I borrowed the Joker's blade the way I'm leaving smirk on his face
No. Played
& I don't mean a fake smile, this dude's bars are straight vile
that's why my motto for lotto is the same as b rabbit's from 8-mile
Not bad. Liked what you did here.
think u got a chance @ this? think u can turn this battle into a killing?
ur not only the wrong man for the job, security is escorting u out of the building
Thought this was cool as well.

Not sure if you rushed this, but a few played concepts. Execution was good though.
Lotto Smirk

Sick of uranus attitude,styles outdated yet ya still stick with it
If it's out of this world..I hope it Crash's & burns n can't make the return visit
Seems like it could be a played concept, but could have worked had you worded it better.
Always running ya mouth off in discussion, man it really flips me off
talking descant stop bitching about how unfair the votes were when he lost
Not sure I like this one. Descant is a melody, so the wp doesn't work for me.
all i cud do
Not sure what happened 10 lines vs 4 lol.