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Allen Knight
02-05-2014, 07:45 PM
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Sharp Nine SCRYPT

Sharp
02-05-2014, 10:13 PM
cool, 10 lines?

SCRYPT
02-06-2014, 03:52 PM
Cool

SCRYPT
02-07-2014, 06:44 PM
Been a while yo, but still fuck it i dnt need excuses
Dude the type to wine & cry about votes for everytime he looses
I knw u. Keep hide'n behind dat newspaper pretend'n u read'n
Shit, evn knw about ur whole family & u the oldest of 3 foster children
Yo mum she was an addict, her love for drugs was deep u knw
Yu came out not only a crackbaby but w/ exactly a total pack of 3kilo
Now bitch snot on dat; yu thug'n is not'n but a kevin joke
Last time he had a nine on his waist remains one for a ten he owed
Yo whole life is a wreck bro get the fuck outta here
Yu dnt only define terrible u also give new meanings to lowlife & queer.

Sharp
02-08-2014, 02:40 AM
scrypt, you're awful. literally the worst in the text game
calling you whack aint just beating a dead horse, its detonating its remains
don't take it the wrong way, but w/ retardation you deliver, kid
i'd say don't read too far into it but im pretty sure youre illiterate
and this whole time you acting like a clever dude?
you don't just bring stupid shit in spades... you bring em in every number of every suit
ya girl's torn to pieces. don't wanna be mean, bruv
but damn, her opening's bigger than anything Sochi coulda dreamed of
I've had great battles, but i aint proud of beating you
you're not a feather in my cap... you're just gum on the bottom of my shoe

Clash
02-08-2014, 03:10 AM
Aight so scrypt, was ok, keep tryin and elevating dawg. Sharp
Came a little light on this, but few bars had me laugbin. He def
Had enough to win this battle

Mvgt Sharp

Tic
02-08-2014, 03:42 AM
Scrypt you have the idea, you just need better concepts. Your wording is okay, but most of your concepts didn't really have much behind them. Keep at it.

Sharp had a couple cool lines. Seemed rushed from what I'm used to from him though.

V/Sharp

Plot
02-08-2014, 02:37 PM
Kinda Liked Scrypts 9 on the waist line,
But Sharp killed it here, wording was crisp and the
2nd and 3rd bars brought it home here.

Sharp stomps it in.

Bender
02-08-2014, 05:05 PM
I think Scrypt 9 on the waist was a little too similar to the line that Hush posted in his battle but I guess it could be a coincidence. Scrypt work on set ups for your punches to make them mute effective, sharp took this with the closer..

vote- sharp

CtrlF4
02-09-2014, 10:31 AM
I like script last bar..but the others were misses for me...sharp had dead horse and a dew others but he had a more consistent verse nonetheless.....v/Sharp

JonTheDon
02-09-2014, 12:52 PM
Closer

Vs.

Openers, few jabs

Sc at the closer which was good wasnt feeling anything else, sharp opener got it few coo jabs also but overall more consistent verses

V/sharp

Hush
02-09-2014, 04:26 PM
Sharp got this easily

Destroyer
02-09-2014, 08:11 PM
I got sharp here. scrypt almost had something with the nine on the waist bar, but pretty much really had nothing.
that made the opener better though from sharp and his was just way more solid throughout. Sochi line was funny

v/sharp

King Karaoke
02-10-2014, 10:05 AM
Hi...

Scrypt didn't have any that was good...
Your lines were too basic and simple...
Read a few battles...
Use some current event lines, name plays, word plays, and personals...
Sharp's verse was cool...
Opener and Sochi line were good...
Vote-Sharp...

Bye...

Defiant
02-10-2014, 01:10 PM
nothing


vs


scrypt, you're awful. literally the worst in the text game
calling you whack aint just beating a dead horse, its detonating its remains
and this whole time you acting like a clever dude?
you don't just bring stupid shit in spades... you bring em in every number of every suit



sharp took this easy, scrypt didnt have much

vote - sharp

God Of War
02-10-2014, 01:53 PM
sharp was just better here i mean scrypt dawg ur flow is cool but urconcepts lack and i hated the 3kilo bar

sharp was cool


v./sharp

Allen Knight
02-10-2014, 02:52 PM
11-0 sharp wins