Cymbicort vs. Concrete - CONCRETE WINS

[CymbiCort]

10 lines
Due asap

[Concrete]

Confirmed.

I will drop before sunset.

[Concrete]

Con will rip this set, don't care if you're a friggin' vet
like thorough pimp-inspects I keep every bitch in check
with all disrespect, you burning me is obviously mental
cos CC couldn't roast anyone unless it's comedy central
it's elemental; my bars are fresher, you hardly measure
you messed up on so many levels like failed architecture
and I detected; homoerotic undertones in your art form
despite cutting edge blowjobs - you lack a sharp tongue
take it to heart bum, fuck your wimpy dork behavior
I just devoured you, like puffing on a symbicort inhaler (http://www.mysymbicort.com/asthma/how-to-use-symbicort.aspx)

[CymbiCort]

How you gon say that you wack,but that it isnt your fault?
If ur not tryin to suck, that explains y ur even wack on lyrical assault
U n ya verses are out of order, u cant win by ridin dick in this place
That explains why hes named concrete, after cum drys on his face
First he was writin poems, so why he actin hard bro
Thinks he runs shit, but cant even if con trolls
Ur the typical fag ppl hate, cuz u lose n put up a fuss
If sum1 leaves feedback sayin construct,they want u hit by a bus
u the type to get sick takin black chicks to dates for kisses
Everytime congo he fuckin gets burnt by african bitches

[Ghost1]

Geez

This was like.... played vs forced.

First guy came played...tho i did like that architecture line the way it was worded....def been done....cymbs wording was forced.....the nameplays werent phonetic for the most part and if they were the punchline didnt work both ways so it stopped the punch from connecting having to take time to make sense of the line.


V concrete

[CymbiCort]

When semen drys on his face* lol

Ill vote in a few. Type busy at work atm.

[Concrete]

Aight, links coming later.

Bags Thanks for the vote, could you please specify what was played?

[Ghost1]

Pimp inspection
Architecture
sharp edge


Were all played.

Ur wording is clean tho which is helpful.

[Concrete]

Pimp inspection
Architecture
sharp edge


Were all played.



Examples?

Here's my voting links btw

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=51605
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=45310

[CymbiCort]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=271700#post271700
http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=270672&postcount=9

[Sicc]

Con will rip this set, don't care if you're a friggin' vet
like thorough pimp-inspects I keep every bitch in check

Statement'ish

with all disrespect, you burning me is obviously mental
cos CC couldn't roast anyone unless it's comedy central

Played

it's elemental; my bars are fresher, you hardly measure
you messed up on so many levels like failed architecture

Played, flipped ok'ish.

and I detected; homoerotic undertones in your art form
despite cutting edge blowjobs - you lack a sharp tongue

Form/Tongue don't even rhyme in my language. Played tho.

take it to heart bum, fuck your wimpy dork behavior
I just devoured you, like puffing on a symbicort inhaler

Weak name flip attempted.

vs

How you gon say that you wack,but that it isnt your fault?
If ur not tryin to suck, that explains y ur even wack on lyrical assault

No.

U n ya verses are out of order, u cant win by ridin dick in this place
That explains why hes named concrete, after cum drys on his face

Played concept. Flipped horribly, IMO.

First he was writin poems, so why he actin hard bro
Thinks he runs shit, but cant even if con trolls

Weak wp attempt.

Ur the typical fag ppl hate, cuz u lose n put up a fuss
If sum1 leaves feedback sayin construct,they want u hit by a bus

Forced - Didn't work either way. Con Struck/Construct? No.

u the type to get sick takin black chicks to dates for kisses
Everytime congo he fuckin gets burnt by african bitches

Every time Congo <- Con go where? Makes no sense. You were just tossing WP attempts and not executing on them properly.

v/Concrete - Better attempts, I guess? Executed his played concepts a lot better. A lot of this other dudes stuff made no sense to me, IMO.

[Orc]

Thought pimp check was OK. Architect was dope. Cc average. Need to come a little more outta the box but the wordings there. Cc opener was okay. The others seemed like ya were trying too hard. Peep how others word their shit. Ull get it. Vote concrete

[KwaL!ty]

Con will rip this set, don't care if you're a friggin' vet
like thorough pimp-inspects I keep every bitch in check
it's elemental; my bars are fresher, you hardly measure
you messed up on so many levels like failed architecture

vs

u the type to get sick takin black chicks to dates for kisses
Everytime congo he fuckin gets burnt by african bitches


Vote- Concrete ..

[Aesthetic]

Concrete:

Con will rip this set, don't care if you're a friggin' vet

Groovy intro


like thorough pimp-inspects I keep every bitch in check

Thoroughly?

with all disrespect, you burning me is obviously mental

Basically this looked like ur filling the line in.

cos CC couldn't roast anyone unless it's comedy central

lol

it's elemental; my bars are fresher, you hardly measure
you messed up on so many levels like failed architecture

I can see it, but dont feel it.

and I detected; homoerotic undertones in your art form
despite cutting edge blowjobs - you lack a sharp tongue

Clever, not sure im enjoying it though.

take it to heart bum, fuck your wimpy dork behavior
I just devoured you, like puffing on a symbicort inhaler

Not a good ending but was agressive and funny summed up.


CymbiCort:


How you gon say that you wack,but that it isnt your fault?
If ur not tryin to suck, that explains y ur even wack on lyrical assault

Didn't enjoy it, spent 30 seconds on this bar and couldn't even get it.

U n ya verses are out of order, u cant win by ridin dick in this place
That explains why hes named concrete, after cum drys on his face

bahahaha but yo, cum peels off; we all taken a shower before. Dont kid urself

First he was writin poems, so why he actin hard bro
Thinks he runs shit, but cant even if con trolls

No

Ur the typical fag ppl hate, cuz u lose n put up a fuss
If sum1 leaves feedback sayin construct,they want u hit by a bus

I giggled, cause I mean everyone does that.

u the type to get sick takin black chicks to dates for kisses
Everytime congo he fuckin gets burnt by african bitches


V/Concrete, the dude came off as more presentable and just dug his shit a little bit more. good battle guys

[Dope girl]

to be honest this battle could've been better, concrete Cymbicort had more forced bars

Vote-Cymbicort